This was a great piece. You look at yourself in the mirror. You pay attention to the details. You make faces in the mirror that no one else sees. I guess that is your way of having fun. I can identify . I used to love to do that too with a ski mask. I looked mean as one of my friends put it. So, we're in the same boat. I thank you for sharing your story. You did wel in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job.
It's always sad when one drinks. There is somethingwithin them that causes them to want to drink. One is never enough. It is possble that you would be coming back to a fire. The shortest way is not looking at what you are doing and a fire can start. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job.
Keep on writing.
This sounds like my own grandmother. She was all of these things too. Her heart was for her family. I liked the sentiment in this piece and the beautiful words you used. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep onwriting.
You're good at it.
What a story! You did well in surprising me for this piece kept me on the edge of my wheelchair. It was something else about this piece that was scary. It was your dialogue. It was scary enough and then the chill that you felt was it. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did good.
I must have been half asleep and half awake when I first read this. I have changed it to a 5.0 You did such a beautiful job with this piece. It was heart wrenching. You were marrried to the father and you weretwins. I am getting that from what iread. You did well in presentingthipiece forthe purpose of a review. Good job.
There is nothing like the touch of your Dad's hands in your life. The strength in them is wonderful and strong to bear a burden or two. It is with that love he had for you that has helped you to become a man also. I believe that anyway and hope you do too. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review and you did well in writing this piece. keep on writing.
This is kind of gory at best. It is Satan all the way and it seems like it to me. Satan would do that and a lot more. He wants to destroy the people that he has for his ownand those of us who are Chrisians. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. You should be proud of this piece.
It is for sure that we will wind up one place or another. Your aim is for Heaven and I trust that you will make it there.Believing on the Lord Jesus Christ will make the difference for you. Believing in Him is all one has to do. Your piece struck a chord and I loved the piece. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you are a good writer and I hope youwill continue to write.
This is so short. But it is a good piece of work. You don't want to fail and I haveto agree with you there. It is always a sad commentary for us to lose anything. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You are a good writer and hope thatyou willkeep on writing.
What a beautiful piece this is! Marriage should be made by two people who really love the other. It isnt' for the ones who are a fly by night thing and then lose out in the end. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review and you did a good job. I hope you will keep on writing.
Very romantic! It was Valentine's Day and the place was decorated for you. It is something special and loving. I couldn' t believe the children were that bad. But you were there and knew differently. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and you are a good writer. you had made me a believer out of you/
Believe sometimes it is nothingat all that will cause a blowup. I know for I have been in a similar position.
the person I loved gotangry with me about something and we had a falling out. So, don't take it too seriously. You probably did nothing at all. You did well in presenting this piece of liteature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job. Keep on writing.
Beautiful! This was a piece that I am glad I clicked. It must have been something being kissed by an angel. I know iwould have liked thesame thing happening to me. I felt that it was so for the person that was in my life You did well in presentingthispiece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep on writing.
This was something else. It was exactly 55 words and full of umph. It was a good piece. The piece told a story of a coyote. Iwas hit by the shortness of the piece. But it was a good one. You did well in presenting this piece for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing.
This is really sad to hear that you have cancer. But the piece was beautiful. It is just like any other day but it isn't and you know it isn't. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows well. Keep on writing.
what a beautiful piece this is. There is so much of it that boggles the mind. It is all so beautiful. You did well in presenting this piece for review. I loved the way you wrote this piece. I don't see any room for improvement. You did a good job.
What a great piece this is! Young love is so grand. There are so many things they said about the guy. I don't think they could make up their minds. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You are a good writer and we need you here at WDC. Keep on writing. You're good at it.
Writing the main key to my life is how I see it. There is so much to writing that helps the person get on an even keel. Writing out the feelings we have botttled up inside of us is a great way to do and be. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of review You are a great writer and one that we need in WDC.
This is so true. Man is a complex entity and with the makeup being male of course there is much room for improvement. Men put on airs and they shouldn't.
One believes he is the stronger of the two and come down to it neither one is strong. Strong to face destiny. You have done well to presenting this piece of literature for review. You do great work. You are asked to remain here with us in WDC.
What a story. I just kept reading and thinking that Sara was at the bottom of the shoreline. Her hat gave it away that she may have done that. But I am so glad that she didn't get lost like that. It was bad enough for them bein in the lighthouse.
Youdid well in presentigthis piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You are a good writer and we need you at WDC to keep on writing.
It is a sad commentary for the ones who are out there like this. They get lost in the shuffle and there is no one to help. They go around for days at a time and hungry and no one really cares. You have done well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You are a good writer and hopefully you will stay with WDC.
This is beutiful! I love the reference to the music. It is peaceful anduncluttered.
There are so many things I would love to say here but suffice it to say that it is a great piece. You did well in presenting this piece for the purpose of a review. you are a good writer and we need you in WDC.
My first 5.0 stars today. You did an outstanding job with this piece. It was wonderful! The child had been abducted and was now found. What a happy ending this story is. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and i hope you will keep on writing.
Way to go,Girl! You have the capacity of feeling that there is anoherone out there for you and you are holding to that hope. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review and I hope you will keep on writing. you did a good job. It surely made a believer out of me.
What a life to go through! It feels that the ocean is inside of you? How can this be? I wonder if you arent' pulling my leg so to speak. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review and it shows what you put into it. I hope you will keep on writing. you're good at it.
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