Yes, it is a sad thing when the person would not love themselves. No matter the amount of love you have someone must love themself. you made it so plain in this piece. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for othe purpose of a review. You did well. You did a good job. Keep on writing.
This is about some musical instruments that are together. One is a harp and the other is a guitar. There is sensuality in this piece that is right on the money. It is a sweet piece you did. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and I hope you will keep on writing.
This was excitingto read. I didn't know the subject was about jeans. I thought it was about a boy and a girl who had drifted apart from the usual things that happened. That the boy had gone as far as he could and would go to be kind to her. So, it was a pair of jeans. Well, you told the story well and there were no mistakes in there except for the word throughwhch you used instead of threw. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you didwell. you did a good job. Keep writing.
This is sad for there was no praise for the kind of girl she was. It is sad because she did as the others did and that was all. She made good grades as it says and she did the other things that you mentioned and it was something good all the time. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows so well. Keep writing.
how true it is for you to have everything in the Lord Jesus Christ. you may lose the shirt off your back or something more personal and have Jesus then you have everything you need. He will provide for you and there is no doubt about that. you did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it shows so well. I am glad that I clicked this. It is great work.Keep on writing.
It is so true that the earth needs an Earth Day everyday. You have pictured one such day ad it is a beautiful picture. The planting of trees is a pasttime that is great to do and something that everyone would like to do I am sure. I know I would love to do it but I am unable to now since I am in a wheelchair. You did well in presentngthis piece of literature for the purpose of a review and it shows how well you did. I thank you for sharing. cubby Keep on writing.
Another great piece from you is this one! You have hit the nail on the head so to speak about being helpful and loving to our neighbors. Love comes in many forms and it is the love of our neighbors that help us through some pretty tough times. You did well in presenting ths piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did well.you did a good job. Keep writing.
You are my first 5.0 today This was a great story and one that I will rememebe for sometime to come. It was as if the Lord didnt' want the two of you apart any longer than necessary and it was wtih te Lord's help that you got back together again. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. Youare a good writer and it shows so well. Keep on writing.
What beautiful paints your words were to this old guy. The picture is there and you can see it. Long brtush strokes and light ones all used together to make an outstanding picture. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You are a good writer as well as a painter and I celebrate your creativity. Keep writing.
Love is a grand thing and so very needed in this life of ours. It is with love that the world revolves around and around. There is deep love shared here within this piece and it is a good one. You did well in presenting this pieceof literature for the purpose of a review. Youdid a good job and you write so well. I hope you will keep on writing.
This is a good piece. But there are some things that are wrong with it. You said string at the end of the piece. It may have been meant to be strong. There was another word that was wrong with this piece. You may want to edit the piece and I will reviewit again.
This is a loving piece you did. You are reassuring someone that you will be there for them. It is comforting to hear what you'd do and that you'd do it. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did well. You did a good job. Keep writing.
A great tribute to the teacheris this piece. You have stated what you feel and what you write. I tis a good piece and one I am glad that I clicked. There is no room for improvment in the piece. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. You did well and I am really glad I clicked it.
This was lengthy and good. It is a piece I will not forget for sometime to come. You did a great job with this and it shows so well. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing I didn't see any room for improvement.
Friends are the backbone to a great many people. They give of themselves every day you live. It makes someone feel great inside knowing they are loved like this. You have given this as a tributet to them and I am very happy you did and do love these people with your heart. You did well in presenting this piece for the purpose ofa review. You did a good job. You did well.
This is a good piece. I don't understand it all but it is still good. It isn't your problem it is minei not grasping the message. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did well. you did a good job and I ask that you keep on writing.
Dear Kings,
I don't give out too many 5.0's but you have earned it with the piece I just read. It is a beautiful piece. So true to the Bible is this piece. You have done well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did good and a job well done. Keep on writing.
Dear Itchy Water,
I liked this piece. It was an interesting one. Made you feel for the ones in the low lying areas. You see you mae a believer out of me. That is the sign of a good writer. You make people beleve your story and I did yours. You did well in presenting this piece of literatufor the purpose ofa review. You did a good job You did well. Keep writing.
Dear poemobsession,
This certainly took in all the seasons. It was very good. You got to me with the use of the word gloves. That is my favorite thing to wear nearly all year long. Anyway, you did well in presentingthis piece of literaure for the purpose of a review. you did good or well. You did a good job. Keep on writing.
Dear Coffeebean,
I liked this piece for the simplicity of it. It wasn't hard to read at all. It is sad that she has teh disease. It is also sad that Frank wll have to do without her for the most part. People who find themselves in this disease hardly ever come back to themselves. I am not a person who knows the disease first hand but I do know something bout it. You hav done well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review.You did well. You did a good job. I hope you will keep on writing.
Dear Joe,
I liked the piece very much. It says a lot in the few words you have used. I believe the meaning of this piece is there is a fatality and it is reached by doing nothing. That it is going to happen oneway or another. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job. You did well. Keep on writing.
Dear Julia,
This is a somber piece of poetry. It is horrific in nature and very amazing. It seems that the thing about to get her was some sort of animal. Like a wolf or something else. I knowyou did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did well. You did a good job. Keep writing.
The Blue Heart is a piece that is well written. It is a great poem and one I am glad I clicked You speak about love and the love being turned away but can one turn away the blue heart. You did well writing this piece of literature forthe purpose of a review. You did well. you did a good job. Keep writing.
Dear Keaton,
I find this piece to be so somber and hurtful to the persons involved. You, I take it are one of the characters. Well, I feel bad for you then and wish that things could be better. You did well writing this piece of literature for the purpose of a review.You did well. You did a goodjob. Keep writing.
A new form of poetry that I was unfamiliar with is thisone. It may not be new but it is new to me. You did well in having this picture attached to the piece. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did well. I liked it.
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