This is a sad piece. There seems to be no hope for you at all. You are tied to the bars and you aren't able to move . Your character I hope is the one who is being put through this I believed that you were. I hope it is your character who is having to go through this. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of reviewing. You did a good job. Keep on writing.
This is beautiful! The color would be better changed back to black for it making it easier to read. However, it didnt take away from the piece. You did a good job with this one. You should be proud of it. You told it from your daughter's point of view. I can relate to that. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did well. Keep on writing.
Great story! It was regretable and hard to read about someone being abused like that. You made it so clear that I was one of the onlookers that was seeing this happen. you made it just like that and it is was a good job. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job as we said and you did well. I hope that you will keep on writing.
This is so great. You have someone close to you as a friend and you are happy to have them. One who stays with you through the thick and the thin. You have a great prize for yourself. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of reviewing and youdid a good job. Keep on writing.
This is a very good song that you have here The reptition is called for in the piece so I won't coun thatagainst you. You did well in presenting thispiece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows through and through. It is hoped that you will keep on writing. You're good at it .
Very good piece. I liked the way this piece is worded. It is somewhat of a funny. I like funnies and take my hat off to the author. You did well in presenting this piece of litearture for the purpose of a review. You did well You did a good job. I hope you will keep on writing.
This gets close to home for I too have lost my mother. Mom was slipping away days before she did. Finally, I mean. It was rough to see her disinergrate to nothing but a shell. Mom's body began to slow down on the day before she passed away. Your piece made me think of my own mother and for that I will be endebted to you for all time. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. You did well as we said and we look to read more of your work that will touch us even more.
Well, you have a deep seated need of finding someone to be your soul mate. I think you did well in writing this piece. It is hoped that you will keep on writing. There is love here expressed in your words and it s a good piece. It is hoped that love will find you someday and that your search will be over. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did well and a good job I hope you will keep on writing. You're good at it.
Well, you have earned the 5.0 for the work you did on this piece I appreciate the definition you gave at the end. It means something to me to read good work and yours is top notch. You did well in presenting this piece of literatuere for the prupose of a review. You did good or well. It was a good job and I am very glad that I clicked it.
Well, I guess you told them off. It is good to see someone taking up for themselves. When does a person think that they are so far above everyone else s deceiving themselves. You put them in their place and it is good to see. I hope that you will stay true to yourself and keep on marching on the way you are going. I am proud of you for this piece.
This is a much needed piece of literature. It goes beyond anyone has ever thought to write about and it is a well done job. There are many forms of depression and knowing that I have been through some of them I know what i am talking about. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review and it is a good job. I am glad that you wrote it. I hope you will have a good day.
A vamire story if I ever read of one is this one. It seemed cruel that no one showed up at her party. It was sad that she was alone. It is regretable that now she has a victim of her own chosing. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpse of a review. You did good and it was liked too. May you keep on writing.
This is a sad piece. I liked the concept though of it raining in your dreams. That was beautiful. It is sad that your love is gone away. That he went somewhere and left you alone. That is what i am getting from this poem. That your love left you. That is the sad part of this piece. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing. You're good at it.
What a great story this is! I would have loved to have been around this rooster. It would have appeared that he never did spurr anyone at all. There was one that did when I was living with my blood brother and his family. He spurred my brother. He wound up being eaten. you did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep on writing.
This is a beautiful piece. There were some words in here that didn't understand but I wll look them up later on. you did well in doing this piece. It shows how beautiful things captivate your attention. It is so beautiful with the flowers in mind. You did well in presenting this piece of litearture for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing.
You are speaking to someone who loves the snow. Anytime of year the snow falls so pretty and bright. Your descriptions of the snow were something else again. It was so beautfiul. One could see what you were talking about and it was wonderful. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. I really enjoyed this piece. I hope you will have a good day ahead. cubby
This is something I hadn't thought about for I was once a Beatles fan too but the music died to me and i didn't listen to it anymore. you have a great article here and it shows how well you put it together. You did well in presnting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing..
You did a great job with this piece. You are talking bout winter and nature in general. My favorite part of this was about the winter part. I love the winter season for I get to wear my gloves and I lovewearing them. You did well in presenting this piece for the purpose of a review. You did such a great job and it shows how much you put into it Keep on writing.
This is a great piece here! It is about love and flying, plus lying and the other things in life that one may do. I liked it when you mentioned about us having done it all at one timeor another. You are so right about that. You did well ni presenting this piece of literature forthe purpose of a review. Youdid a good job. You have my admiration for a good jobas we said. I hope you will keep on writing.
This is a great thing you are doing.Not enough of the writers are seen or heard of unless something like this gets done. You did a great job with this whole set up and I am glad to say that I was glad that I clicked it. you did well in presenting this piece of literature/group for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. It is hoped that many will get involved. Keep writing too.
This is so beautiful! It is piece that takes you away with the author. You are on a high mountain and you are thinking that you may never pass this way again. Or even what it wll be like to be back on earth again. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review You did a good job here and one I am glad that I clicked. Keep writng.
My first thought is that I hope this is fiction and not real. I know this happens in real life and the pain is so much more than one could bear. You made a believer out of me. I feel for the characters in this story. I feel for the mother that had to say goodbye to her daughter. You did well in presentingthis piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good and outstanding job and one that I am glad that I clicked. Keep on writing.
This is beautiful and romantic! There are words for such an occasion and it is love for one and wonder for the other. How special they are for thewords weaved a great story. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. It was a great piece and one I am so glad that I clicked. Keep writing.
This is a great piece you have here It is beautiful. It is between two people talking and reminicing the good old days. At least that is what I get from the reading of this piece. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep on writing.
This is a lovely piece. How I wished that my lover or former lover would have felt the way you do. We'd still be together. But alas, it wasn't meant to be. But your piece was beautiful. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did well. You did a good job. Keep on writing.
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