WHEW! What a piece of poetry. You got my attention when you mentioned the word graveyard.I think the piece was very very good. Talking about pinwheels and other things made it sound delightful. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for fhe purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep on writing.
This is sad. The reason? Well, you didn't capitalize the references to God. I wouldn't talk to God the way you did for anything. But you did. It is your head and your heart that you put into this piece. You did well in presenting this piece of literature fo the purpose of a review. You did well. You did a good job. Keep on writing.
This is a great timeand a great thing you are doing. You are ingenious to think of something like this and it shows so well. I don't know about being a member but if the notion strikes me I will ask. You did well in presening this piece for the purpose of a review. Keep writing.
This is a beautiful piece. It strikes home for me whenit comes to losing someone close to you though for you you still have your brother. I don't have either one of my parents. I know of the dreaded disease you speak of. Cancer is a terrible thing to have You gave tribute to the brother inthis piece. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. Keep writing.
WHEW! wHAT A STORY. It was a good one. I would hve been petrified to have seen what you did.A gator is't anything to play around with.No matter if they are tamed or not. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. It held my attention. Keep writing.
This is a sad piece. You go and love a man and he wants to make out with someone new.
this time it is an under age girl. Why can't men be happy withthe one they have. I don't understand.You did well in presenting this pie of literature for the purpos of a review. You did a good job. I hope you will;keep on writing.
This was interesting to read. You did well in presenting this iece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. It was about Kana and her time with the guru. The book he handed her was for her benefit. There were many things that really stuck out as being familiar. You have done well. Keep writing.
This is a sad piece and sorry about the loss of your younger brother. It is always sad to lose someone close to you. This is a form of a poem that I hadnt' seen before. you did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did it well. Good job. Keep on writing.
Looks like the truth of this is that she is your everything. The lady of whom you adored when growing up is now the lady of your life. You are unique in that you are a pastor or was one time a pastor and also a writer as well. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of reviewing. I am glad I clicked it. You made my day. Keep writing.
I liked this story very much! You did an outstanding job with it and it is was so true to life. ONe could see the family and the flat and the other things that you menioned. ou did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a great job here and iam very glad that I clicked it. Keep writing. you're good at it.
This wouldn't be Halifax NC would it! I know of a Halifax here in the state NC. If the situain is right then i am glad to have met you this way. I love your words and how youput them out there for us to see. You did well in presenting this piece of literaturefor the purpose of a review. You did well. You did a good job. I hope you will be with WDC for a time to come and keep writing.
What a sad tale this is! No one knew it was her friend and wanted to have her company. No one guessed itwould havebeen her. But it was anda sorrowful girl came out of it blaming herself for what she had aid. I would have been put back a long while before I would have done anything like that. Youmade a believerout of me and that is the sign of a great writer. Keep writing.
Good for you! This is so insightful as I read each line. The slavery part of this was a terrible thing to have happened. It is with humility that I can tell you that I am white but thatdoesn't matter when I could have been born in another race of people. I salute you fo your standing up and making sure you'r heard. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. You did well and it shows. Keep on writing. And welcome to WDC Writing.com.
This is a sad piece to read. It was the love of two fellows that would have been the thing that mattered. Mariah was now the wife of one of the guys who loved the other. Itsa story too often not told and one abhored to tell. You did well in presenting this piece of lliterature for the purpose of a review. Youdid well. You did a good job Keep writing. I enjoyed this piece ever so much.
This is a sad piece. The love that was there seems to have drifted away from you and the same for your husband. It is a time of regret and a time of waking up to smell the coffee.It was a good read there is no doubt about that. Youdid well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did well. Youdid a good job. Keep writing.
How true this is! Man is all the time running and missing so many things in their wake. It is run here and there and never any time for mother nature to have them see the beauty in things. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did well. You did a good job. Keep writing.
I can sympathsize with you on the cigarettes. There is none dry. IIt is a good piece you did. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job. You did well. Keep on writing. I didn' see any room for improvement in this piece.
I rated this a 4.0 stars for the work. It is due to the color y ou used which made it hard for me to see what you were saying. I made it out all right and everything was fine but it is hoped that you will change the color to the good old standard of black. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job in writing there is nothing wrong with the writing. It was a wonderful piece. Just think aboutchanging the color back to black so the others can see the beautiful work you did.
What a piece this is! There are so many things in this piece that goes to show you where man is today. Gluttny isone of those things that used to befit me. But it doesn't today. There are many things in this that make one wonder here where it is all coming from. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did well. You did a good job. Keep on wriiting..
WHEW! This was loaded through and through of the good stuff a song is made of. You were dancing with your wife and it seemed to me that she took off herwedding ring for the occasion. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did well. you did a good job. Keep on writing.
This is so true of the Lord. He has his hands outstretched toorgive the sinner and the ones who have done wrong. Christians are not exempt from this either for theyhave wronged people and donethings unlike Christians ought to do. You have a great piece here and I hope you are proud of it. You have done well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. You did well. Keep writing.
I apologize fornot having given this a 5.0 to begin. This was an exciting story of this young man and what he was trying to save. I would have been like him though gloves are my favorite things to wear. Youmade the story exciting and detailed. You did well in presenting this piece o literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job. You did well. Keep on writing.
This is a great collection of work that you have accumulated. I have seen some pieces I would love to read. You have done well in presenting this collection of work for the purpoxe ofa review. You have done a good job. You have done well and I see no room for improvement. Good job.
This is sad to see and read. You are afraid of speaking and you dare not do it. You dont' like to take another's breath of air that they breathe. You are a person who wants to be by themselves. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did well. you did a good job. Keep writing.
There is always someone or something to come between two people who have a dislike for the other. It will erupt in an argument or even worse a fight. Tyrone was one of the good kids who didn't do anything but take up for himself. I liked the way you put it in this story about Ty and Larry. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and you write well. Keep on writing.
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