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Review of Bird Sig  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi ,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The sig looks like an expensive painting. The rough looking frame gives it some character.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like birds will find this a delightful signature.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
*UmbrellaP*You gave credit to the person who designed this signature.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Maryann,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The Mockingbird's Tale. Nice picture of the wee birdies at the end of the poem.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about and strange lands shall find this a delightful poem to read.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The strange land known as WDC Power.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Happy. It made me laugh and it brightened my day.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of THE SPIRITS CALL  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi ,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

WOW! What a lot of poetry. It was really hard to decide what to read first. I’m definitely coming back.

The picture at the top of the poem is simply wonderful. The lady sitting in a garden with a doe drinking from a pool of water.

I just read your wee poem, THE SPIRITS CALL.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about learning to control one’s anger and rage shall find this a delightful poem to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The way you compared anger and rage to the violence of a storm.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Aware that anger and rage can destroy if one isn‘t careful.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. The blue gives it a bit of flare and the larger print is easy on the eyes.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Jester  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Sum1,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The Jester.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about clowns making others happy shall find this a delightful if somewhat heart retching poem to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It made me stop and think how horrible it would be to lose a child to a deadly disease. I don‘t know how that feels but I watch my mom go through it.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A great sadbness knowing children die painful deaths from cancer and other life taking diseases.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi General PGT Beauregard,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your contest page, American Civil War Contest.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED:

*UmbrellaP*The rules are easy to read and understand.
*UmbrellaP*Due date is clearly posted.
*UmbrellaP*Word count is stated.
*UmbrellaP*Contest states whether or not entry can or can not be edited once posted.
*UmbrellaP*The prompt is displayed and easy to find. You gave the writer more than one prompt to choose from.
*UmbrellaP*All the pictures on the page fit with the theme of the contest.
*UmbrellaP*The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: OOPS!
The Breif Encounter for Gettysburg. -- Brief is misspelled.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I DIDN’T LIKE: That the words go beyond the right margin and it‘s a bit hard to figure out just what it says.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Don't Worry  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi skymac,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Don't Worry.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about putting one’s trust in God shall love this wee poem.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The spiritual uplift it gave me as I read this wee poem.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Happy. It made me smile.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of My Irish Lass  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi BRAZKY,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, My Irish Lass.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about love and happiness shall find this a delightful poem to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It‘s rhyme sets a nice pace and makes the piece flow smoothly.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Happy. It made me smile.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I DIDN’T LIKE: The lack of punctuation. By the time the reader reaches the end, the reader is out of breath.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of C Note 5  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Yellow Witch,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It‘s done in my favorite color, purple. Plus there’s a hint of magic.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who love to dream and like magic shall find this an inspiring signature.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
*UmbrellaP*You gave credit to the person who designed this signature.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Blarney  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi ibmoongazer,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Blarney.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read anything that’s Irish shall love this wee poem.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It made me laugh when I reached the end.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Alive. This wee poem makes the blood flow quicker.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Spelling seems just fine, but OOPS! All your “I” should be capitalized. And this poem leaves the reader breathless by the end without any punctuation.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of A new sig for me.  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Color Me Connieann,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at A new sig for me.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It‘s a beautiful sunset.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like watching the sun set and romantic scenes shall love this signature.

*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
*UmbrellaP*I wish you would have title this beautiful sunset Red Sunset like you refer to it in the tag line.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of An inspiring sig  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi SHERRI G,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at An inspiring sig.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It‘s quote is quite inspiring. The faint background of the mountain valley the lady is looking at adds a touch of nature to this beautiful signature.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like nature and inspirational quotes shall like this signature.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
*UmbrellaP*You gave credit to the person who designed this signature.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Winter  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Maryann,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Winter.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about winter or nature shall find this a delightful poem to read.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The snow globe at the end of the poem. The fairy with her beautiful wings, the butterflies and twinkles are very charming.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Thrilled. When it comes to snow, I‘m a little kid. I LOVE snow.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Yellow Witch,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Reflections of a Soul.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The romantic feel to this signature.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like pictures of nature or strolling along a river shall find this a unique signature.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
*UmbrellaP*You gave credit to the person who designed this signature in the description..

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Koyel~back to writing,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The dragons of my mind.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read lost love shall find this an interesting poem to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The picture at the top illustrates the title quite nicely.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Wanting to get even with the perso who broke this soul’s heart.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: OOPS!
The dragons of my mind -- I was taught in English class that titles are capitalized. The Dragons of My Mind.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Music Box  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi S. M. Steppe,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The Music Box.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about lost love shall find this a delightful poem to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The powerful images coming from the words.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit sad that a music box makes this soul think of lost love and the pain it causes.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. The extra spacing made it easy on the eyes.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Witches brew sig  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi ,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Witches brew sig.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: Its simple and looks real. I can almost smell what‘s brewing.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like Halloween or witches will love this signature.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
*UmbrellaP*You gave credit to the person who designed this signature.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Goosebumps  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Koyel~back to writing, Rated: 4

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Goosebumps.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about betrayal shall find this an interesting poem to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: All the different things used to create an image.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Jerk  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Little Mouse,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee tale, The Jerk.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: I love the cat, with it‘s smart-alecky mouth an no nonsense attitude.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Excited. The mysteriousness of the cat talking and the strange happenings in the shop at a liveliness to this tale.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: OOPS!
Over the years we had studied, played game, and went to movies together. -- game needs a “s”.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Hi The Marshall,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee tale, The North and the South.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about the Civil War shall find this an interesting tale to read.


*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit disappointed.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES/TITLE: You used a variety of names that set the characters apart from each other.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: OOPS!
1. Men marched behind him and front. -- I don’t understand this sentence. I understand the part of men marched behind him. The and front is what’s confusing me.

2. His sword lay waiting to be drawed out. -- drawed should be drawn.

3.'' Bentoville... '' He muttered. Now longer was he going to command any regiment, he'd be doing three battalions at once.

The Battle of Bentoville. -- You missed the “n” in Bentonville.
4. These men were obviously veterans, looking at their war torn faces, he nodded satisfied, plus aslo their masses were very in good range of disgruntling the Northerners. -- Also is misspelled.

5. The Union soliders bought their guns up to shoulder level. -- Soldiers is misspelled.

6. He said once the battalions had been drawed up. -- Drawed should be drawn.

7. Scores of Blue uniformed soliders fell done. Soldiers is misspelled and done should be down.

8. The Colonel's face was that off an agonised person. -- Off should be of .

9. '' Thats where our fortune lies men! -- That’s needs an apostrophe.

There are more mishaps that need fixing, too.
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*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Angel Portal  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Renée,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee tale, The Angel Portalt.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read mysterious things and magic shall find this tale a delight.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The happy ending. Most tales from Ye Ol Curiosity Shop stories end with someone else being trapped as the new shopkeeper.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE MADE ME FEEL: It made me smile.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES/TITLE: I like the simple names you used for your characters.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: OOPS!
1. “I’m Alice and this handsome creature is Jaz." She rubbed the top of the cats head at her side. " So what type of Tea would you like? I personally recommend the Jasmine-mint combination. “ -- Cats needs to be cat’s. You need to remove the space between the quotation mark and the “S” of so, and do the same with the period and quotation mark at the end.

2. “Well, I don’t drink a lot of tea, would you happen to have a latte instead?”
Alice bounced away and Jaz trotted off behind her. She arrived back with within a minute’s time with two cups and some teacakes on a silver tray and a large book in her other hand. -- A space is needed between the statement from Julie and Alice bounced paragraphs.

3. “No-way. “ -- Remove the space before the final quotation mark.

4. The girl found out about the angels plans and was sad. -- Angels should be angel’s.

5. Then the curio with the Angel in it disappeared from the girls’ life and the little girl was free to grow up, leading a happy life.” -- Girls’ should be girl’s.

*UmbrellaP*DIALOGUE: The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue.

*UmbrellaP*POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view I’m in.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Lost Compass  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Nikkilover,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee tale, the "The Lost Compass".

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read tales about self discovery shall find this a charming wee tale to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: That Dave realized that his life had meaning even when he thought his life was going nowhere.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Encouraged.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES/TITLE: Alice and Dave are simple names yet fit the characters quite well.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: OOPS!
1. If was as if he appeared there out of nowhere. How? -- He should be she.

2. “The rules state that I can’t sell two items at the same time to the same person,”
The white rule sheet magically levitated in front of his face as she spoke. The rule glowed on the page.
“but they also state” she continued.” that if someone is connected to an item, I must sell it to them.” -- You need to either put a period after person and capitalize but or move the two parts of the quotation together.

3. I also noticed that in several places a line was placed below the rest of the paragraph it went to.

*UmbrellaP*DIALOGUE: The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Lost and Found  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Coffee Shop for the Fantas...  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hi Nikkilover,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee tale, Lost and Found ".

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about feeling that things are hopeless will find this an interest tale to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The tales show how confusing growing up can be and that sometimes parents expect to much from their kids.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit sorrow for the character.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Red Rocks  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Sophy,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The Red Rocks.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about nature shall find this a delightful poem to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED:You explained what A Ghazal poem was.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Full of excitement.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Lornda, My Friend  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Maryann,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Lornda, My Friend.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about friendship will love this poem.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It‘s written from the heart with lots of love.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: thrilled to know you appreciate your friend, Lornda.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. I love the use of color and that you centered this poem. To me centering and adding color give the poem some character.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hi arakun the twisted raccoon,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee tale, The Witch of Almarra.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read legends and strange tales shall find this wee tale delightful.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: That the witch only wants peanut butter and jelly as a gift.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Happy. It make me laugh.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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