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Review of The Gift of Gab  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi maragold,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee tale, The Gift of Gab.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read Irish luck will find this an interesting wee tale to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: Even though Emmy lost the contest, she still gets to go to Ireland.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Sad. It made me cry to think that poor wee child watched her father murder her family and even perhaps tried to kill her as well.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hisuper sleuth,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee tale, If Dreams Could Come True.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read dreams of what might be or could be shall find this an interesting wee tale to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The message of never giving up your dreams, for our dreams shape the future and relive the past.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Hopeful for a better future for the world.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

I did noticed that in the 3rd paragraph you accidentally hit the return and placed part of the sentence on a separate line. Or did you do this to draw the reader’s attention to it?

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Pain Again  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi dogpack,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Pain Again.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read overcoming a challenge shall love this wee poem.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: That the character refuses to surrender to his pain.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Encourage by the courage of this soul.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

OOPS!
To lift a persons spirit -- should read To life a person’s spirit.



*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Twilight Lover  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Anastasia Rabiyah,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Twilight Lover.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about the time between night and dawn, and the time between day and when night arrives shall find this a delightful poem to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The suggestion of twilight as a lover. This idea could work quite well in a fantasy tale.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Intrigued with the idea of twilight as a lover.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Magical Eggs  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Koyel~back to writing,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Magical Eggs.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about Easter, bunnies, or magic will find this a delightful poem to read.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: That the Easter bunny told the chick not to give up even though the world is a vile place.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: It made me smile.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.


*UmbrellaP*OTHER SUGGESTIONS:

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Eternal Sleep  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi super sleuth ,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Eternal Sleep.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry about loving their children and grand children shall find this a heart warming poem to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The way the poem spreaking of losing a child without being angry or hateful. I‘ve never lost a child, yet I watch my mom deal with it. My youngest brother died when he was sixteen and it change my mom.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Sad. It made me cry.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. Centering gives it a wee bit of character I think.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Banshee  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Gothic Angel gone,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The Banshee.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about Irish myths and legends shall love this wee poem.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The rhyme of the verses.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A wee bit nervous wondering if I‘ll ever hear a banshee wail.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Foggy Morning  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Feather Duster,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Foggy Morning.

Nice handle.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who lost a favorite teacher shall find this a nice tribute and worth the time to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The love and admiration the words reflect.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A wee bit sad. It made me cry.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Cubby's back!,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, A Pot of Gold (or 'Yellow'?).

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about leprechauns, Irish things will love this wee poem.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: Tis a bit naughty.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: It made me laugh and brightened my gloomy day.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. The green grabs the reader’s attention.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Storm  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi aralls wrote a story & poem!,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Storm.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The way the lightning dances across the dark sky. It‘s so powerful, deadly, yet beautiful.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like nature, especially lightning will love this image. It can inspire a tale or two, perhaps a poem.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Indelibleink,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Champion Signature 2009.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The vampire standing near a creepy castle. Goosebumps rise.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like Halloween, vampires and creepy castle shall love this image.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
*UmbrellaP*You gave credit to the person who designed this signature.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Haunting  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi arakun the twisted raccoon,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The Haunting.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about Halloween shall love this wee poem.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The way you compared Halloween to the things that go bump in the night.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Happy. It made me smile and brightened my cloudy day.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Maryann,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The Wounds of a Dogwood.

Love the sig at the end.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read nature with all it’s fury and glory shall love this wee poem.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The poem made the dogwood tree sound as if it was human that can feel pain and sorrow.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit sad that the storm destroyed one tree and harmed the dogwood.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of "Slaying Dragons"  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Kimberly H. Staudt,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, "Slaying Dragons".

Bravo!

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read facing one’s fears shall find this a delightful poem to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The images that the words formed in my mind.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Alive and full of hope.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.


*UmbrellaP*OTHER SUGGESTIONS:

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Soul Drinkers  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi W.D.Wilcox © ¿ Φ,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

It’s been a long time since I read one of your tales, yet when I spotted Soul Drinkers I just had to take a peek.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read strange and scary stories will love this one.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: I love this story that was inspired by the image at the end. I know it was a contest prompt that I checked out yet couldn‘t come up with a workable idea. My hats off to you for doing just that.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Envious. I wish my stories flowed so smoothly.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. The larger print made it easy on the eyes, too.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*UmbrellaP*POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view I’m in.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Dawn Charboneau,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee tale, The Valley of Dried Bones.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about secrets shall find this a good story to read.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: This tale brings all sort of questions to mind. Where are we? Who do the bones belong to? Why was a war fought? Why lie about what happened? Why did the elders believe only the main character should know the truth about the bones?

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Curious to find out what happens next.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*UmbrellaP*OTHER SUGGESTIONS: This tale is more told than shown. I would love to know the name of the main character who knows the truth.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Tehuti, Lord Of The Eight,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read Part 3: The Story Of An Island.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read mysterious and about supernatural things will fall in love with this wee tale.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: That each chapter pulls the reader a wee bit farther into the tale with no hope of escaping until the very end.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Glad that I stumbled across it on WDC.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: The names fit the characters nicely.{c}

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*UmbrellaP*DIALOGUE: The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue.

*UmbrellaP*POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view I’m in.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Tehuti, Lord Of The Eight,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read Part 2: The Gem & The Photo.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about mysterious adventures shall love the beginning of this novel.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: This second part deepens the mystery and makes me want to read more to find out what‘s going to happen next.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Excited that I found a new and mysterious tale to read.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: The names you chose for your characters seem to suit them quite well.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*UmbrellaP*DIALOGUE: The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue.

*UmbrellaP*POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view I’m in.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Tehuti, Lord Of The Eight,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read Part 1: The Dream Begins.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read mysterious islands and adventures into the unknown shall find this an excellent start to an interesting tale.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It hints at a mysterious adventure to an unknown island.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Excited to read more.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Blacken Mirror  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hi Bleeding Dawn,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Blacken Mirror.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like dark tales and poetry shall like this wee poem.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The images your words paints.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit sad.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. I like that you centered this poem, this gives it a bit of character and shape. I also like that you used larger print to make it easy on the eyes.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Frozen Tea  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi Winchester Jones,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee tale, The Frozen Tea.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like mysterious tales to read. This tale brings several questions to mind. What is the lady afraid? Is it the man? Where did he go when if left? Does the lady have a mental illness or is there something really to be afraid of?

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The tale is written in such a way, it begs to be added to in other to answer some the questions that pop to mind upon reading it.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Left in the dark as to what‘s really going on.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi sunnystarr,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Bittersweet Rosebuds.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like roses and nature shall find this a delightful poem to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It‘s about roses, my second favorite flower. I love pansies and have since I was a child.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Delighted. The poem catches the character of roses quite nicely.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

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Review of Beethoven's Fifth  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Mage,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Beethoven's Fifth.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like poetry shall find this an interesting wee poem.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The intention of certain lines draws the reviewer‘s eye.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Uncertain. What’s lurking at the door?

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. The extra spacing made it easy on the eyes.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Maryann,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Sr. Captain's raining news.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The wee moon watering his words with loving care.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who love being a member of the WDC Power Reviewers will find this a delightful image.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
*UmbrellaP*You gave credit to the person who designed this signature.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Pat Baker,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, My GGrandma's Irish Wedding Blessing.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about love shall find this delightful.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It says a lot in so few words. It‘s quite powerful.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Happy. It lifted by spirits and made me smile. I felt all warm and fuzzy.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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