The story is written in an informal way to describe the inter action between Racheal and her dog Bella. Although the dog hates the leash but it accepts just for the walk which it likes very much. The reaction of the dog on seeing the squirrel is spontaneous. But it just wanted to play. However, the sandwich episode is dangerous and funny at the same time .Racheal plays with the dog before giving the treat
The letter addressed in e-mail form to Amy gives the reader a lot of information about what's happening in the surroundings of Lesley. There are many hints about the characters of people revolving around the writer.It seems to be a journal describing the activities of all members of the family. Obviously, the information turns into gossiping.
It's a beautiful expose on Spring. Indeed with its arrival there is a radical change in the atmosphere.All the plants become greener and there is the return of insects like beetles and butterflies.The humming of bees and chirping of birds all contribute towards the enhancement of spring.You have described the season in only a few lines
The story revolves between the two characters Aisha and Sameer. Sameer seems to be confused after being attacked but fortunately the girl saves him from being killed. Aisha is so much fond of him that she asserts to be his saviour.She's secretly in love with Sameer but he ignores her feelings. Instead of thanking her for having saved him Sameer punishes her with a file of paper work
The poem, written in many stanzas has some partial rhyming. The position of the bully is well defined throughout the lines .Obviously a person who does wrong to others is not always happy.As his adversaries develop hatred for him/her the bully feels lonely and rejected.It's a good advice for those who try to rule the roost
W short poem written in continuous lines with partial rhyming. It depicts the actual situation of the lover who looks crossed with the beloved.But he/she does manifest his /her anger although there are signs of irascibility.He considers himself as a victim of misunderstanding. The poem needs more explanation
The poem, written in a few stanzas illustrate the how the swans are merry singing their songs. Indeed it must be very melodious for the onlooker to concentrate on it.You have made a good comparison with the croaking of the frogs which is not pleasant to hear.Even the bees are sad.Only the swans are cheerful
The poem is well structured in nine stanzas and has constant rhyming.The ship is the central theme of the poem. It is stagnant in water but it attracts many visitors and all of them are stupefied on leaving the vessel.What's so magical on board?In order to appreciate better the poem it needs some shortening and fine tuning.
The poem ,written only in two stanzas has no rhyming.You have chosen free verse.The topic seems to stimulate the writer of poems and other pieces to participate in the writing competition. Indeed, the motivation is very far centred It's an open invitation to all artists engaged in the field of writing without any formal rules and regulations
A poem written in continuous lines in a completely descriptive style.You have given the reader an idea about how the plot of land has been securely fenced.But inside there are many eyesores and health hazards like the dangling wire.The condition of the landscape has completely changed into an abandoned area.
An interesting poem with good rhyming.The story of your little girl illustrates to what extent she was attached to the boy of dream and was at his heels.However, this relationship was only temporary as she married and moved away with another guy.Even then the boy still loves Tag along.The difference with other love poems is that you have described this parting humorously.
The poem made up of seven stanzas has good rhyming.The theme is snot clearly described. It seems to be portraying the very essence of our existence. You have stressed on how to change the world after much reflection. But the ideas are blurry and not concrete.It needs more clarification
A poem written in continuous lines without rhyming.The theme seems to be well exploited and the seashore is explicitly described. Of course, it's pleasant to spend time at the seaside in the company of a dear one.Walking barefoot on the sand is very sensual. However, the poem looks short.
This poem made of only two stanzas is presented in free verse.It has been worked in a very pathetic way. You have emphasized the value of tears as far as the relationship between child and parent is concerned.It is very clear that a parent can never reject his her child.Whatever be the situation they can't be far from each other.
A very little poem written in only three stanzas with some rhyming.The theme anxiety has been exploited only partially.You have described the physical aspects of the condition and it effects on the body.With the pacing of the heart it affects the individual wholly.But the mental and psychological aspects are worse.
The poem is constructed in five stanzas and presented in free verse style. You have emphasized the role of the mistress in the life of a man.Although he's married he feels better in her company.That's the nature of man.And the mistress has a false conception that he loves her more.She continues to live with false hopes that the man will desert his wife for the mistress.Sometimes we have the perception that fast food is better than the home made one.
A funny poem about Father Christmas written in continuous lines with no rhyming.So now Santa Claus is a busy chap as he has to deliver so many gifts around the world.Poor reindeer is left to wander all alone.The most rapid means of transport(helicopter) is at his disposal. The era of dog sledge seems to be outdated. I think it will amuse the kids.
The poem is written in six stanzas with equal lines except the last one with two lines. Thee is no significant rhyming. The setting is in a morose atmosphere with the portraying of the death of a dear person. Indeed, it was a very difficult moment to tell your decision about your future life.even at her last moment she could not part from except when satisfied from your decision.In the last stanza you have placed the verbs before the pronouns.Is this a new style?
The poem, written in a few stanzas has no significant rhyming,It's an interesting analysis on fiction.In today's world fiction is acquiring an important place. It has become part and parcel of our life.The role of the media is to diffuse this fiction to the readers. In the last part you have rounded off the poem on a very realistic note. Unfortunately many people are now slaves of fiction.
The boy was infatuated by Emily and while trying to confess his love he wrote such a long letter to the girl.Throughout his writing it s conspicuous that he enamoured from head to toe. Bot Emily did not care about him.She was tempted by the huge car and the young dashing driver.Instead she used John for her own advantage.The story clearly depicts the power of wealth over true love.
This short story illustrates the period of slavery when human beings were being treated worse than animals.Inferno was the only heir to continue the generation of pyromaniacs.In his attempt to take a hold on his family he was armed with good intentions.As he wanted to put an end to slavery he was opposed to those who were still practising it.He succeeded to save at least one female slave by burning the trader.
The poem, written in five stanzas has some occasional rhyming.It is centred around your own self trying to explore your personality. Still locked within the four walls you are trying to break free. Are you expecting something positive in life when you compare yourself to the rainbow after the storm?How will you know yourself both from inside and outside?
This short story narrates about your visit to your friend for business purposes.On your way you came across some puppies .But why only one was interested to befriend you?It followed you into your truck.It seems that the puppy wanted to leave its master's house for one reason or another.or simply that it wanted to change its environment
Is this a statement or your personal opinion? Well it's just a game where there are three probabilities ;win, lose or draw.It seems that you are an ardent fan of Sunbury Suns. So you can't accept defeat. It depends on various circumstances for the match to be a victory.You must consider the physical fitness of the players, their technical abilities and luck also. To review this wish it's somehow difficult because of one line only.
The piece of writing looks interesting regarding the advice about the safety and protection of our children. It contains many tips concerning about accident prevention at home.However, the kids like to adventure and explore things exposing themselves to dangers.They are curious to experience exactly those things which are forbidden.
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