Your poem is great from start to finish. I could tell your heart was in all those words. It was very thought provoking. I bet your happier poems are delightful. I enjoy writing different types of poetry. My favorite type to write is called Haiku Poetry. I just posted one a few minutes ago.Please read mine if you would like.
I want to tell you this is a great poem.I want to tell you what your poem made me think about. This is a compliment. My husband and I have been watching the Twilight Zone. Your poems reflect about faith which is not what I think about when I watch this series. Your words draw readers to the unknown. That is way i commented about the twilight Zone. Excellent!
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This poem holds true for many people today. My one daughter lost her step dad and she can't seem to quit talking about him. She is afraid she will stop thinking about him if she doesn't talk about him all the time. She has a disability and her condition heightens her loss. She tries to forget in a way but it just hurts her more. The doctor told us she has Post-tramatic stress disorder I think it is called. Pray for her! Very good piece
Everyone should have such a friend as this; however sometimes friendships end bittersweet. My daughter is hurting to this day due to an old friend of hers. She planned on having her as a friend forever. She recently got engaged to her ex-boyfriend and now she is more than a little sad. She is devastated because her supposed best friend hadn't been talking to her for over 6 months. This man kept asking her out but she kept telling him no because that her friend use to date him. She honestly thought they were not friends anymore so she started seeing him. Now she is hurting due to the fact she knows this person and her will never be friend. These ladies are disabled and I wish I could help fix things but I see no answer/
This poem is like a spooky story. Every ready will be thinking it is like a story on television and they want to curl up with warm cup of coffee and wait anxiously until they read the ending of the story.. Very good!
This poem is one of the best I have read so far since i have joined this site. This poem was great from the beginning to end. You described what colors is all about in the daytime or in the nighttime perfectly. I would suggest this poem be entered into a contest. I say this with all sincerity.
This poem is a great one. It is so great that it is hard for me to put my feeling into words about this poem. It is full of great depth. It is a poem that all that read it will be pondering the meaning.
This poem is haunting to say the least but it was written very well. You captured the mood of what the poem was about. You are a great writer. You were able to put your imagination into the scene of the story behind the poem. I would like to see you write one about better circumstances. It would be excellent!
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Four years ago my husband dies from a tragic motorcycle wreck and this poem made me think about the feelings he might have felt at the end. This poem will hook all that read and ponder the meaning behind every word. The poem made ponder every word nervous energy because we all will face death one way or another but how will we feel when it is our time. The poem made me feel scared yet thinking, is death like a puzzling mystery. Great writing!
This poem had great free flowing thoughts that seem to bounce off all that is near by. This poem is easy to read with a light hearted meaning. I would also like to say I think this poem is contest worthy.