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Reviewing poems mostly...
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Poetry
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Review of The Promise  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello,

Wonderful, Marvellous, Beautiful poetry...

Nicely narrated without any disturbance or break in flow or the feeling of the poem..

Nice pattern of rhyming words used..

Poem conveys a very good message.. Wish i could write like this..

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello ,

Excellent poem..

After all that you've been through, looking back you have asked all the questions written here..

I guess when we are young we think to get married and get a job and settle down but then too after that we feel like we are yet to go some place and not fulfilled our destiny..

Your questions make me think about my life so far as well..

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello CharlotteRose,

Wonderful poem on love.. I love Love poems of all kind..

It is the difficulty we face in love that somehow strengthens us to love more.. We want someone who would know it before we even say it..

I have also thought this same lines you've written here .. which are my favourite lines
"I need someone who will break
Break the walls that no one else could. "

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Christian  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello,

Wonderful poem in biblical sense of who you are.. Usage of words is good..

Best lines i like are:
" Remember me not for who I was
Rather for whom I have became
Freedom, love and victory
Christian "


Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Magoo,

Nice love story of a groundhog and how cupid's arrow tried to cause love in it..

Use of rhyming words is good and the flow of the story is good..

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of An Addiction  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Mara,

Nicely explained how addiction of any kind does harm to the body and not only to the body but also emotionally..

Though the pain and consequences be extreme addictions are hard to leave and yes the temptation is too much and people do yield to it..

Excellent usage of words to depict the feelings...flow is good..

Thanks for sharing..Keep writing..

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello renol,

Wonderful insight on the heart and its beats for reasons...

Depicting how the heart thinks and yearns to talk to only that person the heart is in love with...

Nicely explained how the heart knows better and comprehends things better than our mind..

Best lines I like :
"It wants to reminisce about the past and think of you, only of you.
It doesn't care that you think you have problems or shortcomings or that you think you aren't worth it.
It knows the truth, because it's spoken to your heart as well.
It knows that you're perfect. "

Keep writing and letting your thoughts flow..

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Review of LOVE  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello ariadyne,

Lovely explanation of love..

Great advice about being aware in love..

New insight I have read about love in your poem is that Love makes us ridiculous.. I guess it does..

Keep writing and letting your thoughts flow..

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Review of Planet Earth  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello ganga,

Lovely poetry...

Earth as you described it is full of lies and people lacking the point of living..

Getting wealth and power and not caring about the ones without a single meal for a day is what the world is today...

Best lines I like are :

"Never a shortage of lies
Sleep tight with open eyes
Only God knows your true worth
Living here on planet earth "

Truly only God knows your true worth..

Keep writing and letting your thoughts flow..

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Review of Remember Me  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Alex,

Love your poem..

I guess I can share your feelings of being forgotten as well.. But as long as we keep writing surely the world will remember us in some form or other...

Surely your writing has left an impact in my mind now so you wont be forgotten.. :)

Best lines I like are:

" I live to be remembered,
To stay in someone's psyche.
Keep me in your mind,
For whatever reason you'd like. "

Keep writing...

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | N/A (Unratable.)
Hello,

Love this prayer...

Simple and powerful..

Best lines i like are:

" But if I should die before I wake,

I pray to God my soul to take.


And should I live for other days,

I pray God that you will guide my ways. "

Thanks for sharing this lovely piece of poetry...

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Review of Swollen heart  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello kalai,

Wonderful depict of feelings of pain and love...

Missing someone can not only cause emotional pain but also physical pain as described here...

Best lines :
" Monitoring heart
for something wrong
will this machine find out
whatever missed as a lot? "

Keep writing...
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Review of My dear prince  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello,

I love princess stories and as your poem has used princess's stories to depict the feelings it is very nice..

A princess without a prince is a sad state and when the prince arrives its time to rejoice...

Wonderful depiction of feelings and usage of words for depicting them..

Words like " Evil home, Crystal Sleep and Forever Home"...

Keep writing...
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Review of My wife...  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello,

I like your letter to God ..

Wonderful usage of words and the flow is good..

Depicts how the wife has shaped the husband into the better in man...

Lines I liked were " Her heart is the standard my soul aspires to rise" and also how the wife understands and knows the husband completely yet loves him unconditionally..

Keep writing...
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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello,

Your passage has spoken a lot to me...

Just what I needed at this point in my life..

Im Glad that God uses even unknown people to answer questions that we have through surprising ways..

Most times I try to take control of my life and that's when chaos strikes.. Today I know that letting God have total control is the solution...

Thank you once again for your passage..
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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello,

Wonderful passage about the perfect definition of marriage.. Thought provoking and insightful..

I like how when yellow and blue mix to form green it cannot be separated .. This line sums up how two become one in mind, body and spirit..

Keep writing...
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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello,

I like your story a lot..

A funny yet thought provoking passage..

Your experiences and the way you look at things in life has led you to create/ write beautiful passages..

Yes all the people always knocking at our door do show up at the worst possible and least expected times...

Continue to write and inspire...

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello,

I like your poem...

Sweet, Cute and lovely poem just like a toddler..

Depicts how a toddler enjoys watching his grandparents take care of him..

The poem feels as though the little child has written it or as the author has read the little child's mind...

Keep writing...

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello,

Wonderful story on expression of love...

Feelings very sad ,intense and yet full of love...

Touching lines written by the husband to the wife are my most favourite part of the story..

Keep writing..

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Review of Indigo Girl  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello,

I like your Lovely short story a lot ...

Words used to describe the scenes were good and imaginative..

I could read and see (visualise) what the story had to say from the start to the end...

Keep writing..

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Review of The Chase  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello,

Wonderful passage on how we can learn a lot by looking at things differently and from a different perspective...

A simple and usual act of the dog chasing had led to greater insights about one life's..

I'm personal able to relate to me chasing my dream job, dream house etc... And realise I too have been chasing without savouring the precious moments in everyday life...

Your story has certainly inspired me... Thank you..

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Review of Bye Cruel Love  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello,

Excellent choice of words for the expression of the feelings.. I like the way a poet can use different words and add more depth to the feel..

Words like appetizer, real meal , thief and assassin add to the depth of the feeling..

A wonderful suicide note too...

Keep writing..

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Review by Princess Zelda
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Simple Dykie,

A funny and thought provoking monologue...
"Love" the word that has so many meanings to each of us..
And from your passage I can understand that love can stand and people can still be in love only if one can make a sacrifice..
That's what they say " There's no love without some sacrifice"..
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