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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello mathura,
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Nicely written poem on friendship. A true is a gift and a blessing and if you have a true friend treasure them with all your heart, this message is a simple reminder of the beauty and trust a true friend can give in all times whether they be good or bad.

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Lars Jaig Andeson,
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Beautifully written powerful message. We have the ability to create or destroy but little do we realise that we are doing more destruction than the world can handle. Some people do care about tomorrow and hope and work hard for the better tomorrow but others don't realise that they pollute and create weapons that destroy instead. It is so true that though we as humans look at all these things that are happening around us, we are blind and keep doing what we always do. Well written.

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Kayle Erhard,
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This story here is going to be one of my favourite ones. Excellent, very beautifully and wonderfully written. The words used and the flow of the story is good and the message conveyed through it very good. It is a sad truth how only after a poor little one's life is taken many things come to realisation for the society we live in. This story depicts how a orphaned girl loses her life and how her death caused the changes to that society in all those years. Well written.

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Lawrence Hiung,
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A very calm and soothing poem to take refuge in the Lord. In such situations when we are weary and tired, we should take refuge in the Lord and not on men. Once we taste and see that the Lord is good we will never leave Him and there is no other place then His dwelling where we can be peaceful no matter how weary and tired the world may make us. Well written.

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello HisBabyYCW ,
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Beautiful and wonderful poem dedicated to your grand mother. You have very nicely described how she was more than a friend to you. It is truly a gift and a blessing to have someone who never judges or hurts us though we hurt them and keep doing wrong, and when such a person is taken away from us it surely is very painful. I like how you have described this entire poem, as a letter to God and His reply to you. Surely, just like His reply our lost loved ones will be waiting for us in Heaven. Well written.

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello peaconearth67,
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Nicely written poem about loneliness. It is so true what you have written here, that there are many people in this world that are lonely and they don't want money, success or a job but what they really want is love, acceptance and security. Its also true that we need our time alone but we are not able to be a comfort to people around us then what is our purpose in life. Some people learn to be strong even in their loneliness but others tend to grow weaker and lose hope,so lets help one person at a time. Well written.

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Review of Wedding Dress  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Alisa Fairy,
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Sad and emotional poem. Life does not always go the way we want it to and circumstances may lead to loss of loved ones in life. Expression used here are very deep and express the regret of a life ahead without the loved one. Yet if that person is happy with the one they love, that gives the strength to forget them. Well written.

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Review of I Fear the Night  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Lana,

Beautiful and wonderfully written Villanelle poem. You have used the words and the technique to create this poem which depicts the fear of night and the flow is good as well. Words such as candles and light though repeated do not tend to mislead the entire message of the poem. Well written.

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Review of Tory  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Light,

Wonderful dedication poem written about your horse. It is always nice to have a friend to share your secrets , your good times and bad but above all a true friend is one to whom we are being our true self no masks, no hidden secrets,just plain us.
I can see from your poem here this horse is your true friend.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello prajo,

Nicely written testimonial free verse poem/ passage. Jesus did many miracles during His time on earth and yes the greatest miracle of all is that He still saves and heals every single person who comes to Him with faith.
Just a few suggestions: "Oh.. what miracles he did " and "Oh .. how he changed a sinner Me." in both these lines "he" should be written as "He". You could work on the alignment and spacing which will give a better appeal to the reader for easy reading.

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Review of WDC  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A Shape poem- WDC
Beautiful Visual poem. This shape poem reminds me of the Visual poetry created by StoryMistress about WDC. You have written very simple lines that have made their mark because you have put it in the WDC shape. These simple words represent the organisation in a visual sense. Surely to take part in such a great organisation one should jumping and let your imagination and creativity run wild. When imagination and creativity join hands they create beautiful wonders and Yes we are here to create so lets keep writing. Simple and inspirational message. This poem has inspired me to write a shape poem as well but I'm still not sure, about what to write, well let my imagination take hold of that thought and bring something to me.

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Review of Mr. Love  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello D.L. Robinson,
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The aroma/ smell of a loved one can always be brought to memory sometimes by just thinking of them. As described here, even when something delicious is cooking, their smell can overcome the aroma of the food. Surely love does happen suddenly and can make us ask all those questions asked by you. We are not sure if this is reality,or if we just were blind or they were blind not to notice us too. Well written.

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Review of My Psalm  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello ruwth,

Nicely written with experience from knowing the Lord. I like how you started your poem / Psalm, you have put God above your problems and troubles. You have already proclaimed your faith in those two lines by saying He is the light and He made the enemies to run. To be cleansed , guided and pruned by Him is a difficult process because pruning means He cuts of the unwanted parts in our life so that we can grow better ..oh.. how painful that is.. but only the pruned plant has more fruits and flowers. You have given me great insight by the last few lines you've written. Surely everything does come from Him, even our thankful hearts were made by Him, all because of His Unconditional love towards us.. Well written..

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Joel Cobbs,

Wonderful and heartfelt experience. It reminds me of the day my uncle passed away, we had a family get-together and everyone had just started to serve the dinner and suddenly he just slowly fell on the sofa he was sitting, he had been there talking and laughing and his sudden passing away. I can understand how it feels when we come to the realisation that all that remains of that person is the memories and nothing else. I too had thoughts of everything my uncle had given advice about, taught me, and I could still see how he used to smile and walk about with a caring heart. Well written.

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Review of Awakening  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Darkening Moon,

I like the way you have expressed your thoughts here. The words you've used are simple, easy to understand and yet they portray deep feelings and emotions. I too have been in this place wanting to leave, but not enough strength or hope of a life lived all alone. Wish I could say the lines you've written to myself, the lines which are my favourite..
"In time I will find
much needed peace of mind
and I know the pain will subside.
Inside I want to be
a brand new person who can see
a future ahead of the fight. "

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Whispers of Love  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Rosie,
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Beautifully written poem on love. You have used words wonderfully to create this nice poem. "Snuggle into your arms... Soothing sound of your voice warps around my heart " these are my favourite lines, but the best lines of the poem has to be the last two lines:
"The long awaited celebration has finally arrived,
From this day forward, we will be man and wife."

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Hourglass  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sum1,

I glanced through your port and found a lot of interesting types of poetry.
These lines below were the thoughts I got as I read through your poems..
"I used to think poetry is a form of expressing thoughts and words differently,
but now I know that it is an art to be learnt and written creatively."
I wanted to write a comment for every single one, the numbers poem, Fibonacci poem, and many others..but here I am writing about this poem "Hourglass" because it stood out from the others, for me.
The top half of the hourglass(poem), you have described the passing moments some too fast, some slow, like those grains of sand that move down in an hourglass. The bottom half of the hourglass(poem), you have described that all those passing moments are stored up as beautiful memories, just like the sand that is stored up at the bottom of the hourglass . Beautifully written.

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Chick4Jesus,

Where is the next chapter? How long do I have to wait for it?
Very well written ,the flow is good and the words used very easy to understand. The story is interesting and every detail is beautifully pictured and showed to the reader. The characters Addison, Carter and Heather are very interesting. A very good start to the story, Addison and her dreams/ nightmares. Reminded me of my nightmares I used to have and through prayer, God has taken those away. I guess temptation and tests of our weaknesses come in life at some point , we cannot run away from it for long , we'll have to face it, fight and overcome it. I am eager to know how this story moves forward. Expecting a lot from a writer who writes from her heart.

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Review of You and Me  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jill,
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Beautiful poetry. The words and feelings are expressed very well. You have used the beach as the scene where you both meet and when the person leaves you , you have expressed it very well by saying , you'll take my heart with you , like a broken seashell. Well written.

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Review of Sweet September  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Bella,
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Beautiful flow of feelings and emotions expressed in words. The voice , the single breathe bring about the powerful emotions that swell and flow with depth and unfathomable love. The words you've used are so strong and mean a lot and express the way love makes you feel. Well Written.

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Review of In Your Eyes  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Arakun the twisted raccoon,

Beautiful and lovely poem about what the eyes of a loved one can show. Good use of words and the flow is also good. Sometimes we can see ourselves in our loved ones eyes, sometimes the whole world can be seen in a different view.
Best lines I like are:
"Some think this world is doomed to die,
But hope is shining in your eyes."

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello fishboy,

Wonderful and lovely poem of dedicated to your mother. She is the only person who has the ability to believe in us and love us through our ups and downs in life. I don't there would be anything we can do in return to this love , that would in any way equal her love and affection on her children.
Best lines that I liked are:
"and that my tears, for i know i will cry, never mop away your kisses from my face."

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Without You  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Kay,

Nice poem on heartbreak in relationships. Sometimes without that one person, we don't seem to be beautiful or be ourselves. It is not possible to forget anything about that person and the heartache it gives makes us want to do the same to them but sometimes we still love them to let it happen too..

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Review of Love renewed  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Monochrome life,

Beautifully described and picturesque poem about the heart break in love and then the renewing. The storm compared to the brokenness of the lonely heart and then how the sky clears and then new rainbow and bright sky is back again comparing it to the new and renewed love. The words used are powerful and meaningful in the expression of the feelings. Well written.

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Review of Today  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello rl,

Short and simple poem. Time does not wait and yes it is but a fleeting beauty and as mentioned here patient fool. The moments as described here are beyond time and cannot be erased by its passing but sadly some people do miss the chance to experience this. Well written.

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