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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Blaze,

Wonderful poem about stuck in taking decisions in life. Very nicely pictured and shown, imagination and creativity have been used well. As I kept reading, I was wondering what is the way out for such a life situation, never thought you would end it very positively. Surely you have proved that If we fight with all our heart , we will to survive and nothing can break us unless we give in. This poem is inspirational and thought provoking to me.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Mom's Poem  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello ~Lisa~,

A wonderful poem and dedication to your mother. Surely mother is the only person who accepts us just the way we are and knows all about how we feel without even saying so. To have a mother who is such a person is surely a gift from God and should be valued and treasured. Well written.

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Review of Just A Baby  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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Hello Ebony White,

You have described the innocence of a girl child and how she is easily fooled into believing the lies of the men in the world. They do not understand the evil in the world and consider the world to be beautiful filled with childhood dreams and fantasies with ignorance they fall in the wicked traps. Well written.

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Review of You Are There  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello norswede,

A well written poem for your first love. The first few lines are just marvellous , the way you compare the eyes and the sea, the sun and the warmth of the smile, nice. First love has special effects of its own and can never be forgotten though we move on. The feelings and emotions felt are expressed here with good flow and word choice.

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Review of Good Man's Shadow  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Warrior Poet,

A well written poem about how the shadow of a man is like the other face of a man who is good and caring. It reminds us that though we can be dark and evil , there is a choice we can make to be caring and good.
Best lines I liked are:
" Dark and vague, the man muses.
Even this caring man knows,
That shadow contains all the evil he could be."

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Review of FOREVER  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello AngelArchiver,

Another nice and thoughtful poem. To some people forever just lasts as long as a day and to others it really means a life time as described here. You have nicely explained the difference between the two forever. This poem reminds me of my own poem
" From yours forever " and I always sign my letters to my love as "From yours forever" and I mean it.

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Hello AngelArchiver,

I just love this poem. Beautiful, marvellous, extraordinary and well written poem about Love. I can say you have written all about love in just this poem. Love- has very opposite qualities such as making some people an angel while making others a devil.
Some of the lines that I liked best:
"Sought after desperately, but often overlooked; "
"
'I love you.'
A three-word rationalization for one's desires. "
and
"It strikes like lightning, and leaves much the same result:
If you survive, you'll never be quite the same... "

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Review of The Longest Stage  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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Hello Lucia Cloud ,

Painfully written poem with good imagination and creativity. The lines are crafted in to a picture of pain and sadness by exactly not saying those emotions in plain words but the wonderful lines of expression you have written here. The guilty feeling and the asking of forgiveness are also well described here.

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Review of You and I  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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Hello JerseyBoy,

Beautiful poem about your best friend. It surely is God's gift to get a wonderful friend and If anyone have this wonderful friend we should never forget to treasure them always. The flow of the poem is good and the word choice is good. I liked the below lines the most
"There is no stopping that which God
Has given his endowment."

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello SGoyal,

Meaningful poem narrated well like a story. The flow is not interrupted and the word choice is good and elaborative.
Best lines I liked in your poem,
" Her voice felt ill,
Depressed and hurt
As man had ruined
Her beauty to dirt. " Well written.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Fragility  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello McKinley ,
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Beautifully written passage/ story about addiction and temptation and what they can do to a man. Its true how we think that we are strong and capable of doing great things but a single addiction can bring not only our lives but also the lives of our near and dear ones to suffering and despair. Once we get caught up getting out is very difficult but I still believe with determination and faith it is still possible and there is still hope , as the quote says, "Where there is a will, there is a way". Well written.

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello peaconearth67,
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Very well written poem about all the problems and struggles you had after marriage, sometimes we are too patient in waiting for the one we love to change but then after going through such problems many times we have to make a decision for our own good.
I'm sure there is hope for those who trust in the Lord, and if there are people praying for you and your son, surely God will keep you safe from all danger and give you peace. Hope all things have become fine now.
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Review of Spill My Guts  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Well written funny and thought provoking poem. Love that which affected your heart cannot be healed or cured by doctors and surgery. Good detailed explanation of how the patient and doctor converse about the various problems he might be having and finally after finding nothing wrong medically, the doctor sends him back with no cure and no solution.

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Very well written funny poem. You have imagined how a hedgehog would try poetry, I like that part very much.. ha ha, the moon with cheese and the sun with fleas. You have very good imagination and combined with your creativity you have made the reader to think and laugh. Well written free verse poem.

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Beautiful and encouraging poem/ letter. You have written so much about how the angels in Heaven are there for the support. encouragement and help of humans on earth. I'm sure this letter if read by a person who is currently undergoing hardships in life or being depressed , this poem will bring smile to their hearts and faces. Just a suggestion, if you could change the double spacing, then this poem would be more easy for readers to read. Well written.

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Review of Untitled  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Christina,
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To escape from an abusive relationship is very difficult and even after that, all the memories haunt us for many years. I can relate to this and can say now that you are out of that relationship its much better and this experience should have taught many lessons which will help to lead a better life with better decisions. Never give up hope. Well written.

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Review of Winter's Dream  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Lena Writes,

This is another very picturesque poem of yours. I can see how nice it would have been as a dream , so real and peaceful. Wish I had dreams like this. Reading this gives hope for people who are suffering the cold winter in their life that there is a bright and fresh new beginning of spring in their lives. Well written.

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Review of Mother's Day  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Lena Writes,

Beautifully written poem about mother and her love. Surely she is worth more than just a single day's recognition. Though she scolds us , she feels bad the next moment if she hurt her children. There is no love like that of a mother. Well written.

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Review by Princess Zelda
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A free form poem on how your life is and how the situation you've been through and decisions you've taken has affected you till now. Many people will be able to relate to what you have written here, but I don't think many will be praying and hoping for a better future. I like your attitude to never give up though life be hard. You have encouraged me too. Well written.

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Hello Domo,
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I like your poem so much. I wish sometimes I could ask these questions to my loved ones too. Nicely written free form poetry. As I said though I liked your entire poem , I liked the following lines more
"Would you be so
dumbfounded, that
you needed me too? "
"If the thoughts
of a knife came
to your mind, would
you puncture your skin
until you hear my sad cry?"
I had a slight problem with the lines
"When you open
open your eyes, " Should it be " When you open, open your eyes" or just a single "open". Apart from this well written.

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Review of white walls.  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Eileen Sideways,
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Nice passage written. Its true how shadows and holes in life makes to give more importance to them and makes us to waste our time worrying and regretting . Like you have written here, we have to make our own life's meaningful and whenever there are holes or shadows we should not fill it with anything else but God. Well written.

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Hello Alessandra Varone,
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Sometimes its difficult to tell exactly how we feel, though we try to put in words or try to picture it , it is never complete enough to tell out our thoughts and feelings for the special people in our lives. You have written a very nice poem here describing the struggles to express what one feels. You have written here, how you try every possible way to express it such as a drawing or shouting from a mountain top etc but finally choose to express it in written words. Well written.

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Review of Full Moon Effect  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)

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Hello christsforever is back ,

Professional women do have a stressful life,mostly because of all that pressure to be the way the work environment wants you to be. You have wonderfully explained how the professional attire of a women is and how she feels about it. I have been such a professional woman too and the feeling of getting back and being yourself again is just so peaceful. Well written.

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Review of The Princess  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Hello lightknight,

Nice poem about your pet cat. I too have two cats at my place, they are still kittens though,but I love them so much. Its fascinating how they know and understand us so much. Sometimes its difficult to know who's petting whom. The words used are good, the good and the usage of rhyming words does not disrupt the flow. Well written.

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Corazon,

I just was looking for reviewing someone new to WDC and found this lovely poem by you. I have to say its true that the people we love ignore us at times, and seriously I'm very impatient when it comes to waiting for anything so I truly know how bitter to be patient is. I have always not been able to wait for long and has caused a lot of problems for me. Your poem has a lot of depth and expresses emotions that are painful. You have tried your best to rhyme it and that's very nice. Well written.

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