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Review of Cloudstepper  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this poem a lot. I love the imagery here. I have never flown in an airplane, but I can imagine this clearly. Very nicely done *BigSmile*. Have you entered any contests? I highly recommend them! I look forward to reading more of your items. Have a good day!!

IceSkating SugarCube
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Review of Help Me Forget  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Oooh, I love this one! A very worshipful, powerful poem. I needed this one today. I love the natural rhythm and flow of this piece, and the rhymes come easily, without force. Kudos for a well-written, awesome poem.

Have a blessed day!

IceSkating SugarCube
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed this story. Sort of like the tortoise and the hare, but with brothers. Siblings can be so competitive, and meddlesome. I really liked the descriptions, especially in the first scene, at the coffee shop. The worn coat, the spectacle on the street with the limo. I really felt like I was there.

Well done!

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for entry "🏆 Open Mic Night
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Nice! I love how it rhymes and totally reminds me of an open mic situation where the performer recited the same poem for at least twenty minutes...and seemed to be making up half of it on the spot. Definitely a ramble, for sure. Look at me, I'm doing the same thing. Anyway, nice entry for the contest. Best of luck to you!

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for entry "Scotish Attaint
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A lovely entry for the contest! This brings such poignant imagery of war and heartache. Good luck to you in the contest. I have such a hard time with the unique words chosen for the prompt each day. I always have to google what they mean. Good job to you!

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Review of The Incident  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Congrats! You won first place in my contest! Thanks for your awesome entry, I hope to see more of your work entered in the contest!!

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for entry "Soldier's Bride
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, you did a great job with this prompt! I found this week's prompt to be pretty tough. I love the mood of this, and even though this could very well take place in any time period, I get an old-timey sort of vibe from it. Good luck in the contest, but I don't think you'll need it. Nicely done.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Cleverly written! I loved the ending to this. I noticed a couple little things, such as "only sounds he could he hear" and there's a reference to "tribesman" in the plural sense. Should it be "tribesmen?" I'm not entirely sure, to be honest. Anyway, those are just tiny details. The overall story is a winner, for sure!

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Review of Christmas Trivia  
Rated: E | (4.5)
That was fun! Thanks for giving me something to do. If I could make one small correction, the Bible never says how many wise men there were...just that there were 3 gifts. So, no one knows the number of wise men. Thanks for the fun trivia! Merry Christmas!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Congratulations! You won my contest this week. I loved the rhyme of this and how easily it flows. Great job!
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Review of Chewed Out  
Rated: E | (4.5)
That last line really got me. Funny story. Good luck in the contest!
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Review of The Groupie  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow, that was disturbingly brilliant. Loved every creepy minute of it. Nicely done.

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Review of Two Now One  
Rated: E | (4.0)
A lovely romantic poem! I like how you changed the color of "together, love, United, and devoted" to red. Those words sum up the work nicely. Was it written for a contest? The form is interesting. Thanks for sharing it. Have a good evening,

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Congrats! You won honorable mention in my weekly contest! Please enter again, I'd love to see more of your work. The new prompt is up now!

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Review of Christmas Haiku  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Congratulations, you won honorable mention in my weekly contest! I hope you'll join us again, I'd love to see more of your writing!

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Review of Hidden Thorns  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this poem! It has an easy rhyme and cadence to it. Just lovely. It has a great message too. It's good advice. Thanks for sharing it.

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Review of Dear God  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A very nice poem! I was just about to recommend the lighthouse poetry contest before seeing it referenced at the bottom. This is a very sincere, honest and lovely piece. Thank you for sharing it. I look forward to seeing more of your work. Have a nice day,

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Review of Lesson Learned  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Lol, a funny, engaging story. Do you ever submit to the daily flash fiction contest? It's a lot of fun over there. Anyway, I loved this piece. Thank you for sharing it. I'm just curious if this is a true story or fiction? Anyway, have a nice day.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for the awesome contest!! Here's some gps to keep it going. I'm having a lot of fun with this.
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Review of Together Forever  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A lovely poem. It's interesting that the form is named after an instrument because it has a very strong, musical quality. Very rhythmic and mellow, yet melancholy and sad. Just wonderful. Thank you for sharing. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Very useful advice on reviewing! Thank you for writing this! One technical thing I noticed is that you use the phrase "in my case" twice in the last paragraph. Otherwise, a very nice piece. Thank you for sharing it.I have noticed that reviewing does get easier. Have a nice night,

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Review of The Holocaust  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Thank you for this informative poem. Yes, many today deny the severity of that horrible time, and some even go so far as to say it never happened at all! Good job for speaking out, and spreading some knowledge. It's important that we never forget the past.

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Review of Santa's Vacation  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A cute, clever poem. Santa sounds like a fun guy to hang out with! Nicely done. Thanks for the author's note at the bottom. The extra explanation was helpful to those non-military types like me. Thanks for sharing this fun, festive poem.

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Review of Thank a Teacher  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A lovely poem about teachers. As the wife of a teacher, I appreciate all the hard work they put in each and every day. This is a very nice acrostic poem with great sentiment. Thank you for writing and sharing. Have a nice evening.

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Review of See My Shine  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Wow, this reads a lot like a rap song...at least that's how I read it in my head. I agree with the basic sentiment here and believe that the world is pretty messed up. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing. Don't lose hope.

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