What a delightful story about the antics of childhood curiosity. A very entertaining story about "boys will be boys."
Although cleverly written, it does contain a multitude of errors.
First, unless Pappy is the character's name, I would not capitalize.
We were left to entertain ourselves
spider web
Tommy would say, “oh that’s gross,” and
We had found a nest of
goings were very intriguing.
,and the slow to react “granny I got stung”, crying
without being stung that day.
driveway caught our interest.
Well, that was fun. Now what do we do?
Tommy, the astronaut, be the first to try out my idea , but he
“No, I am not doing it.” I’ll give you a quarter." “No way, I’m scared,”
“I’ll do it and I get the quarter.”
“Okay,” I said
Eddie jumped in. I thought he was brave. “Eddie you are like John Glenn.” He smiled
barrel, dizzy and
regained his composure quickly and reminded me thathe was
Since Eddie proved space travel was indeed safe for mankind, Tommy
that Tommy and Eddie could both get
Mercury mission,
countdown, I launched
we passed the old oak tree, Tommy
, as Eddie could still make it to the
doing great Eddie.” It was
The barrel, I mean the capsule, struck
It was a loud
This noise, plus Tommy's and Eddie’s alternating protests and crying, woke pappy,
heard, “Boy, what are you doing now?”
keep out of his way as he tried
yard, that provided
We're sorry, pappy, we
were sincere;
awesome.
another story
Alright, keeping my fingers crossed I got all the {, :, }'s correct this time!
If you choose to edit this amusing writing, let me know. I would love to r&r it again!
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