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Review of Cinder Doll  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Fivesixer ! A very *ConfettiG* Happy Birthday/WDC Anniversary *ConfettiV* from House Martell at "Game of Thrones" !

Initially, the title drew me in. There is something in it that presents both a hard and a soft side. Cinder is great to use because despite its sturdiness, it can still crumble to pieces, which shows the broken side of you.

I think that you do a wonderful job in showing the heartbreak and unhappiness. There even seems to be frustration/anger shown. I like the rhyme choices in your refrain; they are quite catchy!

I lie awake in my dead
*Thumbsup* That line is great imagery, and shows how you're never feeling at peace! Whatever was done to you makes you unable to feel normal and alive. You pound your fists in frustration. Perhaps, someone did you wrong and you feel that life is not handing you a fair card. These lyrics feel like there was a betrayal of some sort. The emotions you give us in this feel like they're the result of that.

I know these are lyrics, so you may have wished to keep them at a certain length, but I really wanted to know what caused your heart to break?
*Idea* Perhaps, one day you may consider expanding it a bit so we'll have that question answered. I am a selfish reader sometimes*Smile*

Honest and raw!


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Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Fivesixer ! A very *ConfettiG* Happy Birthday/WDC Anniversary *ConfettiV* from House Martell at "Game of Thrones" !

I love that you show us glimpses of you and your thoughts through this poem. In the first stanza, you show us something small that you appreciated, but now there just does not seem like enough time to do those things as often as you once were able to do. It kind of shows us where life takes us. Unfortunately, there are simple things we once were able to enjoy that gets pushed to the back-burner because of life's responsibilities.

Your second stanza really made me focus on the lines:
it makes no one happy
if they're not meddling
or tinkering
*Up* It's very true, and at the same time difficult to comprehend why that is the way. Part of me wonders if it is because someone's life is dull, and somehow doing that makes them feel important. I appreciate that you mention that you're not like most people; it would be a boring world if we were all the same, or if all of us were trying to be like one another.

In your third stanza, you talk about media and entertainment and how they encourage people to be a certain way. As the reader, it is in this stanza that I really feel your disconnection from the life you lived in your hometown and from the community that you're presently living in. The lessons taught in the present are not the valuable lessons you learned as a child. You were taught rewards come from your own work and merit, and what you're seeing is quite the opposite. There does not seem to be any reprimanding for wrongdoings.


*Burstv* Just one small suggestion:
They backpeddle on their roots
may wish to consider back-peddle


Your ending shows where you came from and teaches an important lesson. I know there are still children raised the way you were (or as stated in the poem), but not nearly as many as there needs to be.

Thought-provoking and great title choice!

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~ Lady Lexi of House Martell
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Review of Clowns  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Fivesixer ! A very *ConfettiG* Happy Birthday/WDC Anniversary *ConfettiV* from House Martell at "Game of Thrones" !

Interesting and unexpected title choice!

In this poem, you show that you know your child despite the distance. This is a tough read because I feel the disappointment and sadness. When parents split, there can be a lot of anger and trying to find who is at fault. You show hints of not necessarily agreeing with one another, but no one seems to be slamming the other. It's damaging when a child experiences hatred between parents. I appreciate that this is more about the separation and the hardships that happen by not being at your daughter's side.


Your ending tugged my heartstrings! Me and mom aren't the same clowns we used to be- this shows that once there was love and laughter. Your family had joy. It's a saddening thing to have something like that and then for it to change drastically, like it did here.


Through this poem, the love you carry for your daughter is apparent, and there is a certain hope that in the future the distance between you will be understood. My suggestion would be to let her read this poem, that would definitely do it for me!

Heartfelt and emotional!

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Write On!
~ Lady Lexi of House Martell
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Review of Nobody's Son  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Fivesixer ! A very *ConfettiG* Happy Birthday/WDC Anniversary *ConfettiV* from House Martell at "Game of Thrones" !

This is heartbreaking! You write with such pain and honesty that I feel like I can feel pieces of you through your words.

This pieces shows the lack of parenting and guidance you had when you probably needed it the most. Even though your stepmother seemed to try, there was a lack of follow-through when discipline needed to occur.

As big as I get I still falter

*Up* I love that line! It shows that no matter who you are mistakes will be made and you will stumble. But like, the poem states- it is hard. You have to pick yourself up and move along, you can't just throw your hands in the air and give up.


Throughout the poem, I could sense the feelings of not being wanted and that there was a lack of importance to those that surrounded you. It's tough to not fall back into believing those things if that is all you've really been shown. Through life experiences I have risen smarter- despite being difficult they made you who you are, and that is something to remember if those feelings ever creep inside your head again.

Hard pill to swallow, but touches the heart!

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~ Lady Lexi of House Martell
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Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Mare,

Welcome to Writing.Com and congrats on being on the "Invalid Item" . Hope my comments are welcomed.

As the years go by, skin care is something I pay more attention to. I've always loved beauty products, but was less concerned with proper regiments and just wanted to play with all the fun things, like colorful makeup!

I think that it's important that you mention that we need to know what skin type we are, prior to choosing the proper product. Also, I like that you pointed out a popular misconception about not needing moisturizer- it's always needed*Smile*

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~ Lexi
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Review by Lexi
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Happy Writing.Com Anniversary! Hope you don't mind my comments.

*Thumbsup* This is certainly a hidden gem! Sum1 suggested that I take a look at this since this left a mark with him. I love this! This is done in a way which seems effortless, but I know that is the exact opposite!

I am not sure how this idea came to you, but you have executed this beautifully. I feel the hush in the beginning, the rumble in the middle, and the smack in the end.

It's hard for me to find the words to do the poem justice- genius, Kare!


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~ Lexi
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Review of Ghost Town  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Happy Writing.Com Anniversary Brom! Hope you don't mind my comments.

*Thumbsup* Even though this is not in particular about Halloween, it still feels appropriate for that time of year. Creepy and different rhyme pattern, which I like- shows that you played around with it!

I did some research not too long ago on ghost towns, and of course the meaning of it was not spoken in the literal sense, so much as it was that they were deserted towns. I found what I came across pretty interesting. I took your poem and imagined it inside the towns I has researched, which gave me a new view on them*Smile*



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~ Lexi
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Review of Double Wide  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello HuntersMoon,

This review comes to you on behalf of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" . Hope you don't mind my comments!


*Thumbsup* The opening and closing to this poem are brilliant! I have not had a good laugh like that in a long time. It helps that I missed the cover image so I really didn't know what this would really be about.

I live where red-neck is popular. I can tell you first-hand that Walmart is covered with people as you have explained.

Funny stuff!

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~ Lexi
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Review by Lexi
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Happy Writing.Com Anniversary Brina! Hope you don't mind my comments.

*Thumbsup* To see someone you care for suffer from Alzheimer’s is heartbreaking. I think that when moments of lucidity happen it can be amazing to see them back again, even if for only a brief moment. How this instance affected you makes me smile. Begging to be remembered and not forgotten and searching for something constantly is a touching thought. I loved that you documented this moment and wish that you were able to locate the missing piece.

A person is made largely of the actions and reactions of his or her life. To lose that is terrifying, both to those who watch it, and those who experience it.
True statement. Not recognizing yourself and those around you not knowing what you have become- well, I am not certain how anyone can correctly deal with that. Last week, there was an older couple that approached me. The woman brushed her hand against my cheek and said, "why don't you come and see me anymore?" I was taken back a bit a first, but then I put my hands on her cheeks and said, "I am here now." She smiled and was content. I felt for her, wishing I had the power to give some memories back to her. I felt for her husband, knowing there would be days she didn't know who he was.

Valuable lessons learned. Thanks for sharing!


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~ Lexi
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Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Happy Writing.Com Anniversary QuillMistress! Hope you don't mind my comments.

*Thumbsup* Uplifting and warming piece for your sister! I like that this focuses on what the meaning of home is to her. It does not to be a physical structure. Home is what makes her happy and home is where friends and family are with open arms.

I travel many miles from my humble abode,
Because I think my heart’s still somewhere on the road
*Up* These are my favorite lines. There's a warm feeling there, but also shows that she needs to follow her heart.

I like that though she travels, her thoughts always drift back to those that are waiting for her return.


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~ Lexi
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Review of Snow  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Happy Writing.Com Anniversary Amay! Hope you don't mind my comments.

*Thumbsup* Falling snow is one of the things in nature that is just breathtaking to observe. I love the quietness of the winter and there's a certain solitude of the season that makes you reflect more on your surroundings. I love that you took a topic and tried your hand at several different forms! It is always interesting to me what comes from doing that.

My favorites:

Ominous gray skies
Reveal crystalline treasures
Dancing silently
*Up* Your words paint a lovely image and bring life to winter. It can often be thought of as a "dead season," so the beauty can get lost. However, you show the wonder of it in this!


Squalls
Ferocious winds
Blowing snow

Drifts
Of powder
Mound sky high
Trapped cozily inside.
*Up* Winter storms can be harsh and bitter, but they also can carry much beauty. I can see the snow-capped mountains and blankets of snow here.



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~ Lexi
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Review of Not My Father  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Good Day Rhychus! This review comes to you on behalf of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  and the "June 2016 PowerReview Raid" . Hope my comments are welcomed.

*Thumbsup* Visually interesting poem which is a challenge in itself. I wondered if you chose a triangle as the form because it stands tall and resembles a roof, which is something that a father should provide. I may be putting to much thought behind it, but that's what came to mind.

I know that you needed to keep this a certain way because of the visual aspect, but the tense of treat throws me off just a bit:
I ask God why dad treat me so
*Idea* Perhaps consider:
I ask God why he treated me so
Asking God why he treated me so

In any case, I thought this was impressive.

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~ Lexi
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Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Day Sewcrazy! This review comes to you on behalf of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  and the "June 2016 PowerReview Raid" . Hope my comments are welcomed.

I am sorry for the loss of your father. Through this, your love is evident. I really like that you wrote this from his perspective instead of your own. It can be a comforting thought to have it from that point of view. You say, I may not have said I love you enough, but I think that's alright. Actions work better, and it sounds like he spread his love through his actions*Smile*

One of the hardest things I ever had to write was a piece for my mother's funeral. It was not hard to explain how I felt or what she meant to me. However, I wondered how could I possible capture all that she was and all that she meant to me in just a few words or sentences. She had only lived until 47 years of age, but when I really thought about that amount of time, I felt it was difficult to take 47 years and sum it all up in 3 or 4 stanzas.

I look back on what I had written on occasion, and realize now that I wouldn't change what I wrote. I may do a second piece with changes, but the original piece was in the moment. It did not need to be perfect- it just needed to be for her.

May he be smiling down upon you.

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Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Good Day, Walkinbird! This review comes to you on behalf of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  and the "June 2016 PowerReview Raid" . Hope my comments are welcomed.

*Thumbsup* Well, I have to admit that I've never thought about writing a re-cap and then including my person views on it. I found this interesting. I think you broke this down quite nicely, and described the renovations in a way that allowed us to see them.

Because I did not see it coming, I got a little bit of a chuckle when I read that Preston was disgusted at Ed for not being able to make a bed appropriately. After all, it is a show about renovations not who can make the bed perfectly*Wink*

I volunteered at a Summer Camp one year in my teen years, and it was a lot of fun. However, if the camp resembled what you described here, even in the slightest way- it would have been more than a year. It sounds pretty amazing.

I googled it and actually read about Paul Teas on the Camp Barnabas Website- on the how we got started tab.

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~ Lexi
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Review of Seasons  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Good Day, Shannon! This review comes to you on behalf of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  and the "June 2016 PowerReview Raid" . Hope my comments are welcomed.

*Thumbsup* Each stanza represents a different season, and I think you used imagery quite nicely to give me a picture. I like that each season shows the growth of a personal relationship.

ample fields of fragrant grasses
*Up* line is beautiful and full of lush! One of the things that symbolizes this time of year wonderfully.

Cool summer nights, these lovers' shelter
Hammock swaying, you and me
*Up* Sweet summer romance! Simple moments, but I think they feel the most magical*Smile*

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~ Lexi
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Review by Lexi
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good Day Kare! This review comes to you on behalf of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  and the "June 2016 PowerReview Raid"  and on behalf of "Anniversary Reviews" . Hope my comments are welcomed.

*Thumbsup* All the descriptions pertain to the title, but are not necessarily mentioned in the body of the poem.

I think that you did a good job in all three, but my favorite summer cinquain is the first one. I like the hint of alliteration and the way you describe the bookstore. I picture a small place, overflowing with books, where the air is still and the heat is not lacking. Strangely, it feels like a summer afternoon to me- and it does not include water, sand, or sun.

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~ Lexi
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Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Writing.Com Anniversary, Sum1 ! Hope you don't mind my comments.

*Thumbsup* Oh, this just breaks my heart. There's love there, but the days of mystery and excitement are gone. It's like the relationship grew too comfortable and there's such a familiarity now.

The first stanza is apology for something that you did not even do wrong, but it feels like you're begging to go back to how things once were.

The second stanza really hits home for me. You can still be physically in the same place and still feel very much alone- going through the motions*Frown*

The third stanza shows how it used to be, and how now a simple greeting feels like it is such a burden.

Your closing saddens me- being loyal and learning each other like this some times brings boredom when it shouldn't! I think it is better to know someone than to have a constant fire and not know as much.

Really thoughtful and honest piece! I love this poem.



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~ Lexi
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Review of Bliss  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Writing.Com Anniversary Sum1 ! Hope you don't mind my comments.

*Thumbsup* When I think of the word bliss, I find it hard to describe and the only thing that comes to mind is finding a true happiness, which you have done through this poem!


Now I’ve had so many joys in life
None equal you being my wife
You are my love, I can’t resist
I’d never before known such Bliss
*Up* These are such pretty lines, and probably one of the best things to let a wife know. She would want to know she is partly the reason you're happy. Lovely poem, Jim!


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~ Lexi
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Review of Starlit Sky  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Writing.Com Anniversary, Sum1 ! Hope you don't mind my comments.

*Thumbsup* Incredibly romantic! You took us on a journey and we got to see how it all began, memories from the middle, and down to the heartbreaking end. It was a beautiful choice to use the starry moonlit sky as a comparison of what you both felt for each other!

Your paint a wonderful picture and your words shine of true love.

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~ Lexi
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Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Writing.Com Anniversary, Sum1 ! Hope you don't mind my comments.

*Thumbsup* Well, this is a really neat idea! I remember when emoticons were limited on Writing.Com. This poem shows how far the site has actually come! I love that you wrote something that feels genuine and heartfelt.

There’s no *Phone*s around, we’ll take no calls,
We have *Starw* in our eyes when we find the waterfalls
*Up* I love those lines- Romantic and adorable!

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~ Lexi
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Review of Power Summer Fun  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Day MaryAnn! This review comes to you on behalf of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  and the "June 2016 PowerReview Raid" . Hope my comments are welcomed.

*Thumbsup* This is a great image to use in support of this month's raid-reminds me of mid-summer! The vibrant colors of fresh bell peppers, the flame of the charcoal grill, and the sizzling sounds of the steak. Perfect thing for a summer barbecue*Smile*



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~ Lexi
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Review by Lexi
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Good Day Outlander! This review comes to you on behalf of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  and the "June 2016 PowerReview Raid" . Hope my comments are welcomed.

*Thumbsup* It's funny when a parent does not want to admit their true concerns and tries to diplomatically explain their reasoning for why they should heed their advice. They don't want to simply come out and say what they really thinking. They want to coax them into the idea*Laugh* I love the sarcasm of the final lines!

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Review by Lexi
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Good Day Kenzie! This review comes to you on behalf of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  and the "June 2016 PowerReview Raid" . Hope my comments are welcomed.

*Thumbsup* This is poured straight from your heart. Your father sounds like he could be an intimidating man to those that may not have known him, but melted in the presence of his children. That's the best kind- the exterior a tough shell, but the interior, warm and loving.

Seeing someone you love change and not by their own will is rough. It's saddening to think about all those years that passed, all those memories made- and the father you knew best has turned into someone new and unfamiliar. In between though, there are chances that they will have the smallest memory come back. Hold onto those golden moments, no matter how small. It's him coming back to you, even if for only a few seconds- he, too remembers you.

This gave me a lump in my throat. Heartbreaking, but lovely.


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~ Lexi
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Review of Thanks Dad  
Review by Lexi
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Good Day, Jburgesscst! This review comes to you on behalf of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  and the "June 2016 PowerReview Raid" . Hope my comments are welcomed.

*Thumbsup* I really love the moral of the story here; history does not have to repeat itself. Your story speaks of memories, and for whatever reasons they are the moments that impacted you. I like that you gave us glimpses on different times during your life because it takes us on the journey with you- not experiencing it the way you have. However, we become a part of it.

It's good that Juanita did things to help you feel comfortable. In the end, I had high hopes that she would have sided with you and her son instead of your father*Frown*

I think that it is horrible that he was not the father he needed to be for you and your brother, but his actions made you value being a father even more.

I am glad that you cannot recall the times when you were younger and heartbroken over his absence and cruelty. Things like that are not easy to forget if you can recall the instances.

I appreciate that you shared your story and that you learned not to harbor negative feelings, despite going through this.

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~ Lexi
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Review by Lexi
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Good Day Smiling Jack! This review comes to you on behalf of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  and the "June 2016 PowerReview Raid" . Hope my comments are welcomed.

*Thumbsup* This is pretty darn funny! It was a good idea to use this as a conversational piece.

When I read the first few lines, I was thinking the conversation may get a bit uncomfortable*Blush* I think this play on words, and the double entendre were quite clever here!

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