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Review of Dear Me 2019  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This text is long and clear. The reader doesn't need to guess, what the writer says. The chapters are easy to keep apart.
You mention many goals in this text. I hope you reached them. My only goal for this year (2020) is to knit one pair of mittens and send them on their way to the new owners. I also have a secret knitting goal, but it's a secret. I don't know if it ever sees the daylight the way I'd like it to see. But I hope so. It just requires small steps. Too big leaps and the goal will run away somewhere one never reaches it.
My secret writing goal is to attack that one family of characters and determine, which of them are not part of the family A but family B instead.
It was easy to read and understand your text.
I wish you all the best with your writing!


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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
This Japanese style is a bit complicated, but your explanation is good. One would think a dead bird flies. A physically dead bird can't fly. Or then a branch is dead.
You can paint a complicated picture with very little words. That is something not everyone can do.
Keep up the good work!


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Review of TIME  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
The 1st sentence was a little difficult to understand. After that, the story grabbed me and flowed like a river. You can paint images with words. I saw the woman and felt her pain.
You have a talent! Keep writing!
Best,
Lucinda


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Review of Husband  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is very beautifully written. I thought it told about your marriage, but the green text proved me wrong. You can describe emotions. And as you said, there is always a start to something. Keep up the great writing!


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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is very well written. The reader doesn't need to guess. The guilt and grief mix together in this story.
You can write! Keep up the great work!


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Review of My Blog  
for entry "November 29, 2019
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
I understand. The best thing for me is to watch a movie or something, and knit at the same time. It makes the time fly.


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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is very well written article. It's easy to read. The person reading doesn't need to guess what the writer means. Keep up the great work!


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Review of Words Can Hurt  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
You can write. Emily's in desperate situation and she decides to do the desperate, final thing. The reader is able to sense her anxiety. Keep up the great writing!


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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is well written and easy to understand. I appreciate the rhyme thing. It's obvious you have a talent. Keep up the great work!


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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
These instructions are very easy to read and understand.
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Review of Poetry  
for entry "Lost Battle
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Sadness,anxiety, giving up. All those feelings I am able to read from this text. Those feelings have become familiar to myself too. You wrote them very well. Life is not always sugar and spice and everything nice. Sometimes it's very dark.
Keep up the great work!


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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is easy to read and understand. Language is clear. The reader doesn't need to guess what she should do in case she wants to send them something she'd want them to publish.
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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem was easy to read and understand. The picture it creates is clear. You're very talented writer.


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Review of Game Models  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very interesting! First I thought this would be fiction. It still may be that. Then I thought it's a story from your school years. A story based on true events.
The length is OK. But one could think this could be a first chapter of something. I do not know what. The end of this piece made me think in such a way.
Whatever this is (true / fiction), it is easy to read. You can write! Keep up e good work!


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Review of Erase  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Very touching and so true! One can't change the past. This could describe so many days and moments of my life.
Well done!
Keep up the great work!


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Review of Vertie's Platform  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
You can write! Interesting piece, but clear enough to understand the story. You let the reader guess to the end about if they survive or not. You have a talent. Keep up the great work!


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Review of The Truth  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very touching! Some lines could be straight from my keyboard. Like "I am not the woman I thought I was". That feeling is very familiar to me. And the last part of your poem is touching too. You have a talent! Keep up the great work.


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Review of The Sweetest Love  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
You have talent. This poem tells, how much your girlfriend means to you.I've no doubt she'd be happy if she read this.Keep up the great work!


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Review of AN UNKIND REVIEW!  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
This text is clear and strong. It is easy to read and understand.


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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is very strong text! The cat's POV is very clear. You can write! Keep up the great work!


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Review of Fued: Chapter 1  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Those two girls were not very nice. I'd keep them as some sort of bullies. It wasn't fair they did what they did.
But you sure can write! This pulls the reader like a magnet.


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Review of Review image  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
That one is beautiful! I love cats!
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Review of Torn  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This is very powerful poem. You can write!
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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
You can write! The image is very strong. Keep up the great work!
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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem made me misty - eyed! This is very emotional, but very well written at the same time.
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