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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a love poem in which the author tells the object of affection that the author trusts the object of affection. It does not say that the author is in love but that the author feels comfortable enough to be scared and apprehensive around the person. The author fears getting hurt but is love not about sacrifice? We often confuse love and think it is something given to us. It is not. Love is what we can do for others and are willing to do for others. Love never thinks of itself.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that you expressed this and are open to discussing your feelings.

What I liked least: the misconception that love is about what another can do for me.

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Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: These are beautiful C-Notes. It shows that you have an eye for detail. Of course I already knew that from the many merit badges, trophys, and ribbons you have designed. I'll bet you keep your home decorated beautifully as well.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I loved the cards, but my favorite was the last one.

What I liked least: I would have a hard time picking a least favorite.

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Review of P15  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port on the Space Blog Prompt today because it is your account anniversary and I wanted to give you a review. After all, Space Blog was designed to get you reviews. So was Anniversary Reviews Forum.

My impression of this item was: Ha ha! I see you are a sneaky one. You listed this as "Top Secret" knowing that people like me would be curious to see what is the secret. Uh-huh! Clever! You got me!

I actually expected this to be a story or something. I guess I did not read the label or something or I would have seen it was a logo. I too have several logos including the logo for mt "Chris Breva - Mountain Story Teller" brand. I haven't used it much as of yet but will use it in the future I hope.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked how this lured me in and got one over on me.

What I liked least: Nothing. It all works for me.

Thank you for writing. Space blog will return!

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Review of Starry-Eyed  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about someone who has been in love all of her life. She has loved the man in her life since her childhood. The fact that he seems older is alluded to but he waits for her to mature before marrying her. The poem speaks of love and enchantment.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that you seem to have been a one man woman. There are not many of those left nowadays.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of Chuck  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I came by your port on the Space Blog Prompt today because it is your account anniversary and I wanted to give you a review. After all, Space Blog was designed to get you reviews. So was Anniversary Reviews Forum.

My impression of this item was: Poor old Chuck. I have a feeling he lost his head in that one! He should never have takeen on that knight. I guess that's what he gets for being so hotheaded and getting things all fired up! The Bible says the tongue can start a forest fire and it seems Chuck had to learn the hard way.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that this was a Limerick. I love rhyme and meter poetry.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of I am your Road  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about the road of life. We all walk a road whether we want to or not. Some of our roads are rough and take us to places we do not want to be. Some of our roads are easy and carefree. We all have a road. Like you, I feel we can make that road what we want it to be. Even hard roads have a hint of the good in them though the gold may be hard to find.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the metaphor in this one. Life is a road we all walk.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem that questions what man has done to God's creation. It asks if the next generation will be able to enjoy the beauty of creation and I believe the answer is that it depends on God's will. It was God's will for man to subdue the world and conquer it and we have done that in the environmental and physical realm. What we haven't conquered is ourselves. It is doubtful we will ever conquer ourselves.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the expression of faith I seen here. As a Chaplain, I love faith.

What I liked least: nothing.

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Review of Sweet Dreams  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a rhyme poem about a relative who has passed. I am sure Helen would be pleased with this poem. I am happy that you have good memories and refuse to mourn the passing. She is in a much better place. As you said, reunited with ancestors and relatives. What a beautiful thought.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I thought the whole poem was beautiful. It flowed smoothly and expressed love and hope.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of In A Heartbeat  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about love at first sight. It is a poem about that giddy feeling we get when we know we are looking at a future ex-spouse. Our knees knock and our tongues get twisted. Or as you put it, our hearts seem to stop. You expressed it well.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that you tried to describe the undescribeable.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of Unspoken Love  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about love. The author asks how love can be expressed when no words are spoken? I believe love is a verb more than a noun. It is an action word. I may never tell another that I love them but they will get the message if I treat them with love and put their needs ahead of my own. Love does not have to be spoken but it does have to be shown. I believe that is exactly what you are saying here. While you never speak you know the other loves you because their actions say so. Am I reading it right?

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the brevity. It was short and succinct.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of I Am Man  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This was a poem about the coming of mankind. While I do not believe in evolution, I believe this poem evolved well. It has a good flow and rhyme pattern, which are the kinds of poems I like best. It expresses the author's beliefs which I respect, even if I disagree.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that you are exploring the origins of life.

What I liked least: Nothing

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Review of Penitent  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about regret. The poet is saying that there are many things in life that they have done wrong and they wish to change them. My experience is that my past made me who I am today. If I changed even one second of it I'd be a different person. Yes. I too made mistakes that I will spend the rest of my life making amends to myself and others for. However those mistakes made me who I am today.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that you are looking to better yourself.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about growing old and the regrets that we develop over the years. One thing I know for sure is that it is never too late to start over. I am 60 years old and I have started over numerous times. Right now I am starting over with my credit. I'm off two credit cards to establish some revolving credit. The credit bureau gave me a lower score than I like because I had no credit cards. Your poem reminded me of that and how we always look back and wonder where the years went.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the rhyme most of all. I love rhyme poetry.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of Back Home  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about being a child again, which of course none of us will ever be. I remember the days of childhood. I worked hard and played even harder. I love the way you captured the wonders and ins and outs of childhood. Good job.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the trip down Memory Lane.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of Devils' Charm  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port on the Space Blog Prompt today because it is your account anniversary and I wanted to give you a review. After all, Space Blog was designed to get you reviews. So was Anniversary Reviews Forum.

My impression of this item was: This was a truthful, heartfelt poem about the human condition and the most important question man will ever face. Do we trust Christ or not? You have hit the nail on the head with your words. I applaud you.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the message the most. It is a message I try to carry every day. Satan is like a prowling lion. He will attack. It is only a matter of when.

What I liked least: nothing.

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Review of Biography  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a bio about who the author is. Like all of us, the author grew up through the struggles of life and worked her way away from her home town to the entrance of Yellowstone National Park. The author longs for the old days when visitors were few. Overall this is a good bio and I feel I know the author better after reading it.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I related to your wishes for your town to be known.

What I liked least: Nothing, thus the five stars.

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Review of Make A Choice  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: It does indeed sound like it is time to make some choices. Do I choose to stay in the pain or do I choose the pain of a broken relationship? Relationships can be very painful. Myself, I have a tendency to find very self-centered individuals to be with. Some were outright narcissistic. I guess it was my choice.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the way you analyzed this.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of Fall  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: I agree with you that the cycle of life continues. God sustains us and blesses us with each new day. I like the imagery in your poem. The poem discusses faith and assurance of tomorrow.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the imagery.

What I liked least: I have found that adjectives are weak words where nouns and verbs show the story. Show, don't tell.

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Review of Sunrise/Sunset  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This poem paints a beautiful picture of the sky at sunrise and sunset. I always heard that a red sky in the morning was a sign that terrible weather was churning but I still enjoy a beautiful sunrise. I also enjoy the peaceful red skies at dusk. Your poem is a wonderful picture of this as if you were painting the images in the reader's mind. Good job!

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: The imagery. The rhyme and flow was good too.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about a love potion. It describes the way the potion goes down smoothly, then permeates the whole system. To be honest though I don't think I need a love potion to feel that. I think it just takes a good heart.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the image of love in this. It does leave a good after taste.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: Hi Jim! I knew I would eventually end up reading your work. I know my review style is not the greatest. Perhaps I need to be harder.

This is a poem about your Jester character. Jester is an angel. He is blessed by being in God's presence. I envy him in a sense but as a believer I experience God all the time. Jester has the job of bringing souls home. What a duty!

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that people who read this will think about God.

What I liked least: If anything, the length.

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Review of The Rule  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a sing-song poem that discusses a hard-hearted person who loves chaos and anarchy. The poem describes society as it becomes more and more permissive. Good job.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I love sing-song poetry because it flows so well.

What I liked least: Nothing. The subject was a little dark for my taste but it was a good poem.

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Review of Wisdom to Share  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a blitz poem about freedom. Blitz poems as I understand them are poems where the last word introduces a new thought. You did well with this one and consistently built on the new thought.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that it was a metered poem in that it followed a discipline.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is an article about the name that is above all names. I just finished Theology 500 at seminary and the Person of God was one of our studies. As you express, God is both named and nameless. He is describable and undescribable. He is full of paradoxes. Yet He wants to be known by His creatures. His word is law. To understand His word requires extensive study and guidance by Holy Spirit.

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Your spelling and grammar: There were a couple of typos such as "kmow" instead of "know".
What I liked most:

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of For Sherryllynne  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about a beloved sister-in-law who is terminally ill. I know this had to be a painful write for you and the pain is obvious. You love your sister-in-law. That shines through in this poem. I am sure you feel some regret for wanting her suffering to end. We all wish that for our loved ones and then feel guilty for feeling it.

Your spelling and grammar: looked great to me.

What I liked most: I liked the love that was expressed here.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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