Hummmmm interesting writing not sure if I agree with it all but I thank you for sharing. I must explain what I mean I truly believe the only person we truly need more than anything or anyone is Christ. I think we think we need certain things or even a certain person but I don't think we truly won't go on living if we don't have that person or that thing. Can't prove it for sure I guess other than to say there have been many things I thought I had to have and even a person or two I thought at the time I couldn't live without but that always proved untrue in time. At some point, something happened and I wasn't around that person any more whether they moved on, I moved on, or they died. Things too have been removed from me I thought I had to have. I was no worse for wear when it was all said and done and life went on. I did sooner or later learn that I would be okay even in the person's absence or without whatever I so treasured.
So sorry you seem to be hurting. I can just let you know that it doesn't have to be that way you matter and are needed in this world, the real you. Yes, some may not like you but some will if given the chance to know the real you. We are all a little messed up so who can truly judge anyone. Only you can choose to step out of the darkness and into the light. You will never truly be happy hiding I can tell you from experience this is true. I heard you today so see you can be heard and it does matter what you have to say. I've said a prayer for you that you may find a way to be set free, I would say try the Lord but then I am just one person and this is just my point of view. I have tried the Lord though and know him to be a strong tower and a help in time of need.
Okay, this is a very interesting poem you write. It sounds like you took much delight in writing this poem. There is joy in writing and this poem seems like you really enjoyed writing this. Keep writing and sharing your joy of writing with others for you never know where this joy may lead.
Pretty good poem and it seems you are sharing a lesson you learned the hard so others may not have to go through the same thing you went through. Sometimes the lessons we learn the hard way are the ones that stick with us the longest or forever. Hope all is well with you in that area now that you know how to love a little better.Thanks for sharing.
Okay not sure what to think of this but I do get the picture, yes I do and would rather not. I like blue cheese depending on how it's used and or what it's used for. But you could always just not put blue cheese on a salad I guess or ask that it not be put on yours in a restaurant type of setting.I can say this was very detailed for sure.
Okay, this is a very interesting story. Life as scary as it can be is best lived out of the box as long as you choose to walk in God's glorious light that is or that's how I see it anyway. Keep writing and sharing the experiences you have, you have far to go and much to learn as you go because you are yet so young, happy writing.
Neat, chipper, and upbeat I like but this is also my favorite time of year so maybe I am a little bias. I like how you describe things like the plexiglass bird feeders which where I am from we have non I know of but maybe one day I will see one. The warmer days of spring are nice I enjoyed this read so keep writing.
Wow, neat story it was interesting but what a waste of a chocolate cake. The birthday person had to have had a good sense of humor not sure I would have had one. I am a chocoholic so I would have surely wanted to eat it not get sprayed with it. I am sure that this story will be told for a long time to come and that the birthday boy will never ever forget this day most likely.
A very sweet and moving story of a woman that stepped up to be a mother figure when your birth mom dropped the ball.Glad you had her so many wards can't say that, it sounds like you gave her as much joy as she gave you. It takes a really good person to step up and love like that when the child isn't even yours really.
Thanks for sharing this must be so hard and even more so since this is your child. I will say a prayer for her I hope she will recover with little to no issues/side effects. I do know God is able and a healer, I also know cancer is a hard walk to walk through. I not sure but if she's heard of In the rooms there are some support groups on there they may help her if she is willing to check them out. Well, the issue is it is also groups that addicts of different kinds have joined for help, addicts of all kinds from food to drugs to sex. However, there are some Trauma groups and cancer is a kind of Trauma for sure.
Short and sweet to the point interesting not sure why someone would want to read or know this but if you are a young person then maybe. Young folks sometimes seem to be a little clueless about running a household and all the problems that can arise sometimes out of nowhere. I guess sometimes it's also good to be able to vent our frustrations.
This is a cute and fun writing seemingly written by someone that doesn't take life too seriously. I like it it's light-hearted and in this day and time that's nice. I tend to be serious a little too serious at times so this was good. It's nice to not take oneself too seriously. I do agree that the best stuff is usually higher up and or on the top shelf well that is if you like what you have and to keep it. It does stand a better chance of staying nice if on the top shelf/higher up and or not getting taken if you have people around with sticky-fingers so to speak.
Not bad for your first semi-long poem.Lots of neat rhyming and timing, pretty good flow. What I like about this poem is it's talking about the importance of water and what it means to us and our world. It also points out that it can also be somewhat destructive and cause great harm at times which is true.We surely can't live without water nice job keep writing.
I like this it's a good writing. I think when we are young we always think that most or all of our endeavors will be successful. We soon learn that this is not always so but we live and we learn as we grow. I did enjoy your share it is possible that it was nothing you did wrong and that the plant wasn't a good strong sapling in the first place.
Wow, thanks for your share this is a good reminder that here in the USA we are so blessed for so many many reasons. I am glad to hear that his son is getting better. I hope someone will bless this man with better transportation and that the police will just let him be so his son can get the treatment needed I will say a prayer for them.
Yes, salt and sugar do look so much alike but they are not the same we know. A trained eye can tell the difference though and if we look real close we can see that hey this is sugar and this is salt. My mom is that person she is a trained cook been cooking longer than I been in the world and she can say hold it that's salt, not sugar because she has trained herself over the years to know the difference. As we get experienced in and with life we also can tell salt verses sugar, light verse dark. Also, God helps us if we choose to ask for his help wither someone is salt or sugar, light, or night. Then again, to be honest, we all have some of both in us,it's just that some have more sugar ie light and some have way more salt/night in them but there's a Jesus for that if we dare to turn to him. We all are someone if only to God and those that use us/hurt us are only really hurting themselves. You matter to God and to those that really love you.
It's different I think I like this poem. I like the way you talk about what nature looks like as it's hit by these circles of light. I like the way you draw the reader in with such vivid descriptions you can pretty much see what you are talking about if you just think about your descriptions.
Wow short, sweet to the point, and yet so much to ponder. I think what you said is true. We are going to encounter many problems in life period being a Christain will not keep us from life many problems/issues it just assures I'm never alone in them. Thank God for my help, my strength, and comforter the Holy Spirit.
Amen and amen God is good and good all the time.It sounds like you had plenty of love in your life and it sounds like it did you plenty good.I think if you are anything like your grandma you grands are blessed to have you in their lives,howeevr they may not realize it fully until much later in life.This was a good read.I think it's something about them old-school saints that our world is missing today and we really need them and their values.Something about the name Jesus it is the sweetest name I know.
I'm glad you are enjoying your writing because if you enjoy it it comes across in your writing and when you don't that sure comes across as well. I am also glad to see that you are challenging yourself by entering contests that you think will help you grow as a writer. Not sure however if this would work for all writers but it seems to be working for you so that's good. Keep writing/happy writing1
Wow, this was good I really liked this story a lot.This story was very interesting I could not bear to turn away from it the one time I did it was that good.I not sure I agree with how the boy's dealt with the bullies but then again sometimes you gotta do what you gotta do.I've been bullied a lot during my life and when I've resorted to fighting it has almost never worked out for me though.There is a certain glee reading this however that the bad guys so to speak got theirs.I think those boys are safe now and most likely for a long time to come.
Wow, this is a neat poem. I like it it's different. You paint a picture that one can see in one's own mind. You are very descriptive in describing your processes of writing in bed. I like that your description is very detailed and yet it flows very freely throughout the poem.
I like it I don't know a lot about being an Irishman but I like it. You paint a very vivid picture of this culture. You also can tell you were most in love with the little red-head that's now in Heaven. I am sure you miss her greatly but you will see her again one day. Good job very descriptive.
This poem is a neat little poem.I like how the cat kind of out smarts the dog.Not sure how the dog couldn't firgure out that something was up but I guess it doesn't matter to the cat either way because he is going to have dinner and the dog is not.This is a fun writng I like it is kind of unexcepted.
This story is very interesting two old superheroes' too old to be hero's any more to old to save the world. They seem to have a friend and superhero in their nursing friend however which thankfully she is because they would be dead if not for her. Then again they do seem to still be hero's inside their own heads and to each other giving them still a little bit of life in them and a small amount of hope. This is a nice little story that's kind of uplifting.
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