Thanks for your share it must be very hard to deal with this long-distance relationship. It sounds like love and if this is your true love sent from the Lord I hope everything works out for you two. Maybe one day you can move where she is if she's not willing or can't move where you are.
Thanks for your share this is interesting and maybe in some ways, it makes a small amount of sense to me. I think I get where you are going with this but then again maybe not but it's fun to at least ponder this. Everything doesn't have to be easily gotten or understood to be enjoyed and I enjoyed this.
Not bad this gave me a little smile as I read. I like the way you used Vampires as the topic of this poem that's unusual but effective here. I also like the way you use two aged Vampire even though most think of them as forever young or at least I always did. I like the way they seem to get a kind of new life after they get their implanted teeth. This was a cute poem thanks for your share.
There is a nice start to this vacation trip story but I want more. This is a good sign because you wrote well enough to make me want to know what's next. Is there a part two to this story or have you written the rest of the story? If you haven't maybe you should consider doing it.
Wow, this is very good and out of sight, I wasn't going to win no matter what I submitted because you guys are way out of my league. I felt your desire to be loved by a truly good man and all I can say is I feel you sista. I am most likely going to be the weird cat lady in about 15 or so more years living in a small charming but weird house at the end of the block. You know the house the kids won't even trick or treat at because they believe the strange spinster lady inside is really a witch, yeah it's headed in that direction day by day. Anyway, thank you for your share.
Thanks for your share there currently are some major differences between cats and dogs this little tale has highlighted a few of them very well. I think that dogs are more friendly, playful and as you stated enjoy the chase. Cats are laid back and kind of lazy unless it's something they have taken an interest in like the light beam in your story.
Thanks for your share as humans trust is one of the most valuable things we can have. Once trust is lost sometimes there is no returning to it. We as humans sometimes don't realize how precious something is until we have lost it. I have learned by just living life however that the give and take many times can and is a little one-sided. In almost all cases there is no 50/50 going on. One person is giving a little more and the other taking a little more. I do agree that if the person is mostly taking and on a consistent basis and not given little to nothing there's an issue.I also think that we have to not allow folks to drain us when we see what's happening we must put a stop to it and fast.
I not sure about this writing I will have to think on this a little more. I think youth is good but only in the right hands. If the person is an unwise, disobedient, and unteachable type of person then their youth is wasted. I say this because to some degree this was me and I wasted most of my youth doing dumb stuff and in some cases really dumb stuff. In terms of agility, stamina, courage, I may not have it the way I did in my youth but since I know that I can keep that in mind as I move forward. I am able to use what strength and stuff I do still have in a more beneficial way. Well, that's just some of my thoughts on the matter anyway. Thanks for your share.
Thanks for your share it's always hard when a relationship of any kind starts going south or has gone wrong. I guess though as long as a person has learned something it's not all for nothing. Then again the writer says they are an overthinker so maybe things weren't as bad as the person thought.
Not sure but definitely sounds like a love lost to me. It is very clear that the person doing the moving on or ending the relationship was making it clear without a doubt they were done. This can be very sad and hard however sometimes it's for the best for both parties even if the person being dismissed can't see it at the time. Hopefully love sooner or later will come again.
I am not sure what to think for sure about this poem I may have to think ON it for a while. I know walking in the light is always the better choice even though you can see things as they are the brighter the light. Hiding in the darkness only brings about more hurt and harm sooner or later. I can't do anything about the hidden things I can't or won't see. Love covers a multitude of sins I have been told so I can walk in God's light and still be alright. Well that my thoughts on the matter anyway, thanks for your share.
I like it your poem is great hopefully many more will learn to think this way. Hopefully, most of us will be willing to be more open to others and loving them.WE have much to learn about real love I must admit but we must be willing also to learn and with some therein lies the problem. I think however there's Jesus for that and if we yield to him he will show us how to properly love. Thanks for sharing.
I like this short and to the point a most relatable poem also. The fair for the young and the young at heart hold such wonder, excitement, and yes a little fear also. The parent enjoys going mostly to please their offspring or little family members. Although they may enjoy going they enjoy just as much going home to rest their tired feet and kick back with their favorite beverage and enjoy the quietness. My mom never was a fair/amusement park person but she would many times say to whoever the grown-up with us was
"well don't have to worry about them tonight cause they are going to sleep good tonight".
You sound nice and tired me too I think I will soon be going for the camper or the tiny home thing sooner than later. I seem not to be able to follow the rules of this world , I seem not to be able to amount to anything as far as the world says anyway. I am tired of trying to win there is no win at least not in this world.I guess I will wait for pie in the sky later even though I seem not to have a good relationship with the big man upstairs either but here's hoping I can get it right before my eye close because I've already lived Hell at least a few times here on earth already.Thanks for your share.
Interesting sounds like she was trying to kill herself, like she was fussing with herself and maybe even the forces of nature about the how and or maybe the why. I think she finally decided it was more worth it to die than to live been there here recently to recently made a date with the railroad track down below where I live, I was stopped of course, and TDO by person's who could care less really either I live or die that just want to say they tried to stop me, if.
Wow, that's one mean bird didn't know they were so pretty yet so mean. A lot of pretty things are like that somewhat dangerous, violent, and or mean. Got a sibling very similar to this bird very pretty to look at but mean as a snake. Well, I guess these birds need to be admired from afar just like that sibling of mines. I think my mom was right pretty is as pretty does wither it be a bird or a sibling or whatever.
I wanted a girl but I got what I needed a boy. Sometimes what you want and what you need can be two different things I've never regretted having a boy not once well if there's a next time just maybe it will be a girl.
This was pretty good and I am glad more people are writing about this it's needed. I wrote something about this awful event as well because this was just the senseless taking of a life. Maybe as more
people speak about the wrongs of this world may be finally somethings will be set right.
I am sorry but I don't fully agree with you because they have the best leader in all the world if they would just turn their hearts to him and repent of their sins. Christ is their leader really he is everyone's leader. These are the chosen people and God is their leader always has been always will be. There will come a time that God will redeem them in due season well most of them anyway. Human leaders and the arm of flesh will always fail if they don't let God lead and guide them and that's not just Israel but any where and everywhere as we can see by the state our world is in. Thanks for your share however.
I see you have chosen to write about Judy Garland one of my most favorite actors. The Wizard of Oz is still my most favorite movie I've ever watched. I have seen almost every version of that great movie the good and the bad but none have surpassed the original version. The few good-times I remember as a child was surrounded by our times watching this movie me ,my siblings, and my dad every year it came on channel 7 for most of my childhood. Mom never liked it, nor did my siblings really care for it as I thought so after dad left I pretty much watched it alone. Thanks for sharing keep writing.
This was a pretty good poem about your feelings about the pandemic.I think many people are having a hard-time in this pandemic. However so many good things are happening to me in this pandemic along with some bad.I am trying to count it a joy in the Lord because he is seeing me through this pandemic one day at a time. I am learning to be alone and as long as God is with me I am and will be okay.I was the kind of person before this that believed that I couldn't be alone and be okay let alone happy but God has proven to me that's not so.Thanks for your share!
Okay so I take it you don't like spring too much but I feel there are some blessings in every season. I think also we need every season ,there's a need for every season God gives. Maybe you can find a med that will help this year has been bad for allergies for many, my eyes have been close to swelling closed a few times this year in the spring and summer. I have had one of the worst allergy seasons I have ever had in my life I think but God has kept me. Thanks for your share it was interesting and a different point of view from what is usually said about spring and from what you think will be said.
Interesting, I think I might like this I am completely sure. I think this is more than just about a puppet boy. It's about how most people are just puppets to or so it seems to me. Yes, he did need some love but also maybe some of the ones playing with him were showing love the best way they knew how? Maybe they played with him because they loved him at least a little. I guess if they had truly hated him they wouldn't have played with him at all. Thanks for the share.
Not really sure what to think of this writing but I like its rhythm. This seems like you took your time to write this piece trying to give someone who maybe feels weak a dose of confidence. I will have to sit with this one awhile I think. Thanks for your share and keep writing.
I like this I like Christmas snow as well even though I haven't seen any in a long while. Well made this will be the year I see some. It sounds like winter brings into your life so many things you hold dear so I am glad you shared. It was a nice pick me up which I need today and Christmas is one of my favorite holidays for sure.
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