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Review of Why? Why? Why?  
Review by tsurtidogni
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings crevo77,
I like the title it sounds like a song that needs an explanation from the heart.
There is always a question and that is always a part of living and I admire the creativeness .
The last two lines ?
PERFECT !
Great work...Great talent. I truly enjoy reading this.
Why ?
You made me laughed, and that is all that matters.
Hahahahahha !
WRITE ON !
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Review of The Beach  
Review by tsurtidogni
Rated: E | (4.0)
Greetings Yzheng,
I live near "The Beach" so the title captures my interest in reading your short story.
I am glad to note that everything ends well after all the hassle and bustle on the way to your destination.
The story has a good flow.
I noticed in the first line of the story:
"There is no words to describe...."
Possibly you can change this to :
"There are no words to describe.... "
Suggestion only.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
WRITE ON !

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Review by tsurtidogni
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings Felicite,
The title is sad and the story is sad too but it is a fact. A sad fact indeed.
This is well-written and the message is clear that there is always a caring heart and a caring soul and everything has a reason for our individual journey called life.
You touch my heart reading this.
Perfect as it is!
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
Rated: E | (4.0)
Greetings Allison,
A poetry from the heart that expresses confusion and negativity.
I believe that all of us have this experience of being so low or so down but as long as we believe that there is GOD up there who loves us then all will be well.
We may ask God's help and surely it will be given. We just keep on hoping that there is really hope.
I have nothing to correct, I wish that today you will read this work again and you will shout to the whole world that you possess a brave heart and spirit because God truly loves you.
Let your thoughts keep flowing it is a very healthy release or form of healing.
I admire the creativeness.
Thank you for sharing.Write On !
God Bless You ...
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Review of Lucy  
Review by tsurtidogni
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Greetings imateddybear,
I have been away from this site due to medical reasons and here I am back to give my first review to your captivating poem with a very interesting topic to share, all about Lucy.
The poem has a good flow and it expresses life and meaning for Lucy in the first few paragraphs.
There is a sudden twist as in a turn of fate for Lucy and how sad to note that Lucy is now no more.
The poem does not totally rhyme but I admire it all the way as it has a continuity of thought.
Thank you for sharing your talent and thank you for making my comeback here at this awesome community a worthwhile time.
Write On and God Bless...
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Review of Summer Happiness  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings linfer,
A very captivating title and a very interesting story, so full of memories that lives forever.
The story has a good flow and it radiates joy to your readers. I am happy for you that you gain such wonderful experience worthy to be shared, to be remembered and to cherish.
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON !
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Review of O! Mohonk  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings webwitch,
WOW ! Mohonk !
I have a book about this beautiful place, and when my best friend Sandra left for United States to be with her husband for a long holiday and I let her bring the book with a promise that she will be visiting Mohonk and tell me about it.
Reading your very inspiring and inviting poem, it makes me so glad feeling that I also visited the place which I believe only a miracle can let it happen.
Thank you so much, reading line after line, I consider it as a dream come true.
Really a delight to my heart.
You have written and shared a very meaningful work making my day glorious.
GOD BLESS YOU ALWAYS..
See you again in this awesome community.
WRITE ON !
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Review of Tunnel of Life  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings morningbird,
A poem with a dark message in the beginning as well as in the middle like a hallucination, but the sudden twist at the end, wishing and expressing hope for the better or for the best makes this poem more meaningful.
My suggestion:
"haollowed"
Please change this to hallowed
SUGGESTION ONLY.
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON !
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Review of A box of hearts.  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Greetings acookk,
Poetry from the heart and the title is very exciting, inviting that expresses sweetness.
NICE FORM OF ART.
My suggestion:
"Ever time we kiss"
Please change this to :
Every time we kiss
SUGGESTION ONLY.
Thank you for sharing "A box of hearts"
WRITE ON !
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Review of Vortex Of My Mind  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Greetings dizzydaizy,
A dark poetry that looks like a prose to me. The title fits for the chosen words, lines that completed this poetry. Very intriguing.
Emptiness is overpowering in the wholebeing.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of A Gift from Afar  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings sweethonesty,
This is very touching. Truly "A Gift from Afar".
The poem is lovely with its rhythm and rhyme. The poem shares a story so full of love.
Remembering my dearest late brother I can relate to every line.
Sad but realizing the presence through a dream is a joy to the heart.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings dandiee,
I can imagine what will be going on in this particular wedding day and the speech that the groom will doing. AHA !
I always enjoy attending family and friends wedding day and I always listen to speeches and I think this one you are sharing is wise.
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON !
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Review of The Rebel  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings Tracy,
The title is truly captivating added with a caption below the title, the more I really wanted to read this work.
YES ! This is real and hilarious ...truly a rebel...
A typical rebel child..
hahhaha !
I like your style of writing poetry with few lines..
Like a Haiku..
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON..
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings judity,
Whew ! A really sad story about Mary. A murder victim and what makes it more sad is the husband's crime succeeded.
A heavy drama full of suspense.
Another admirable creation by judity.
Thank you for sharing your very impressive talent.
See you again in this awesome community.
WRITE ON !
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Review of The Dirt  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings dogwood,
A poem with a philosophical message and I believe this is true in the real sense.
The poem has a good flow and it expresses much awareness.
I like this.
I have nothing to add and nothing to correct.
Thank you for sharing "The Dirt"
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Greetings wiseowl,
This is a very unique ghost story, Sad and sad in every aspect of life and death.
I admire your creativeness.
"Turn around.
Turn around !
TURN AROUND !"
Perfect three lines that concluded this work, making this a convincing ghost story.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
WRITE ON !
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Review of God's Telephone  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings nixie,
A brilliant story by a brilliant storyteller and writer.
This is truly an impressive work, the story and everything about it, the presentation, the right flow and many more that completed a perfect writing.
The title ? It is precious !
I love this !
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON !
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Review of Each Day  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings anikah,
A poem with a good flow and a good rhyme.
I admire the message that it brings and the positiveness of each written stanza.
Inspiring and meaningful.
A poem that greets each day with great expectations.
Thank you for sharing "Each Day"
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Greetings Lightbringer,
True to your penname Lightbringer this article brings light all around in this awesome community.
Detailed, informative, educational and truly useful for everyone's great readership.
I am so happy to have read this.
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON !
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Review of Love Thy Self  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings keatonfoster,
WOW ! This is awesome. I like the title it shares wisdom and great insight. YES ! we need to love ourself so we can freely and soundly love another person.
This is truly an inspiring piece.
Another job well-done !
Thank you for the read.
WRITE ON !
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Review of Failure  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Greetings dogwood,
I believe the story behind the poetry has a good lesson to share. The title expresses sad expectations and the last stanza makes me appreciate mre of your talent.
A reality and an unpleasant one yet wisely shared.
Thank you for the read.
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Greetings reeree,
The title offers a long lasting relationship. The poem expresses differently as if the relationship became sour and the deepest emotion surfaced. Sad to note when friendship turned out this way.
A prose written with all honesty.
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON.
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Review of Died every nighT  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Greetings selalanurag,
A poem with a message to someone special and it's being expressed in an un-usual way.
My suggestion:
iam afraid of loosing you
Please change this to:
i am afraid of losing you
SUGGESTION ONLY.
Thank you for sharing your work.
WRITE ON !
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Review of Always Autumn  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings crankee,
A poem that touches my innermost soul. I have never experience this season called autumn and you described it wonderfully in your poetry as you shared wonderful, memorable moments with someone close to your heart in this particular season of the year.
So thoughtful, so full of longings, so full of love, so sad.
The presentation is great and the poem has a good flow.
Thank you for the read.
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
GREETINGS printit,
This is beautiful in every way. The presentation, the choice of words, the title itself offers great wisdom to one and all.
Truly impressive and I like it. A wonderful art that is really admirable.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
WRITE ON !
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