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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings Magoo,
A poem with a very nice rhyme. Comedy ? I am not very sure, a love story behind the poetry perhaps, but I like how you presented the poem in a wonderful two-lines style with a good flow and rhythm. It looks so neat.
Thank you for sharing your talent through "The Groundhog Overslept".
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Greetings dannienimz,
WHEW ! This is a heartbreaking story. A fiction yet I believe that what was written and posted was really happening all over the world, with the using of alcohol and drugs that destroy lives of so many people and the irresponsible parents
that are existing.
This is a very sad story.
I will not edit what was being posted from Day 1 to the last Day 7 and the 1 hour later. I let it the way it is.
But I must edit the title, "Dairy of a broken girl"
Please change it to :
"Diary of a broken girl"
I admire the creativeness.
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON !
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Review of The Stag  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings conorzzy,
The story behind the poetry is so full of life as in the world has so many to offer including wonderful experiences with nature and this one is fully captured through a well-written and well-presented poetry.
The last two lines are wonderful lines that completed this perfect art.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
WRITE ON !
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Review of Just Ride  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings bigdaddy2012,
Hahhaha ! It's fun reading your poetry, truly entertaining and very truthful, jolly and most of all direct to the point in its own artful way.
Yes ! "Just Ride" is for me a perfect piece.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Being A Scott  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Greetings assortedtea,
A poetry that describes a family and ist traits. I admire the creativeness.
"I'm proud being a Scott"
I a truthful line that mkes a wise conclusion of this poetry.
Thank you for sharing your talent through "Being A Scott"
WRITE ON !
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Review of The Chase  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings Simple Dykie,
nice name for a dog and a nice story too. Great presentation. The last paragraph offers wonderful tomorrow and I consider it so precious, so inspiring.
Thank you for the wonderful read.
A job well-done.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of On Grief  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings Sarah,
So true, so authentic in every word being expressed.
I can relate as I am grieving for the death of my dearest father. What we can do i to pray that ech grief would be cmforted with peace of mind that evrything happens for the best of reason.
Thank you for sharing your poetry that is well-presented and well-written regardless of how short it is.
WRITE ON !
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Review of My Happy Place  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings EmmaleeBee,
I love this from the start to the end. The message radiates warmth and joy all around.
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful in every way.A real talent that shares greatness of being happy in every way.
Thank you for sharing "My Happy Place"
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greeting Tim Chiu,
A sports commentary through a free verse poetry. Wise nd Nice.
Yes ! This is admirable in every way.
I have nothing to add or to correct.
Thank you for sharing once again your talent thorugh well-written poetry.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings complexity,
The title is so intriguing and reading between the lines, the title fits for the chosen lines that completed this poetry.
YES , this is a story that the two words need to be said" IF ONLY !"
I have nothing to edit, I find this PERFECT and WISELY done.
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON !
Happy New Year !
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Review of Art  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings oh my,
My first review for the year 2012. HAPPY NEW YEAR to you...
The poem has a good rhyme, concise but wise, like a HAIKU poetry.
The presentation looks so fascinating and nice.
Thank you for sharing "Art", truly an art.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of A quiz of science  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings Noah the Writer,
This is quite difficult and yet so very interesting quiz. It surely gives me a wonderful break of my reading time in this awesome community.
I'm happy I did have a score, not perfect but okay ! Hahhahhaha..
Thank you for the opportunity for me to answer your quiz.
WRITE ON !
Happy New Year !
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Review of Royce  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings ladyroni,
A poem dedicated to Royce and it is about Music.
I believe that Music lives forever and this poem is very precious and so special in its own way.
Lovingly dedicated and so full of love and care.
I am glad to have read this.
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Have a Happy New Year !
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Review of Mark  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Greetings nik227,
A story so real in this world. You vividly described everything that was going on in the life of Mark. A story with a very sad ending.
My suggestion:
The word foetus...please change it to fetus
Thank you for sharing your talent through "Mark"
Keep writing and keep posting.
HAPPY NEW YEAR !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings The Rhyme Maven,
Wow and More WOW !
This is fascinating and so lovely work . The image and the poem harmonizing so amazingly and the title is awesome.
I salute you for a very good job !
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing and keep posting.
HAPPY NEW YEAR !
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Review of Words to say  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings lunacopii,
A love poetry and this is so wisely and greatly written or presented.
The chosen words, lines fit for the given title.
The last two lines are simply romantic.
I enjoy reading your work.
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Happy New Year !
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Review of Granite Cities  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings judity,
I always love to read your work that shows how talented and gifted you are as an author. Highly impressive in every aspect of writing.
Yes ! I enjoyed reading your walking down memory lane.
Thank you once again for the read.
WRITE ON and Have A Very Happy New Year !
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Review of New Beginnings  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings gremlinbaby,
I was also excited of what was inside the box that needs so much suspense.
AHA ! The violin ! You are a very wise author. You let your readers want to read the story until the very end.
Great talent. Nice Story and you are a Nice storyteller.
Thank you for sharing.
Write On !
Happy New Year !
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Review of a baby bird  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Greetings pearlspauline,
A beginning of an article. I believe that there is a continuation for this and I look forward to read more of it.
May I suggest to change the spelling of the word "lookiing" to....looking
Suggestion Only.
Thank you for sharing a few words about "a baby bird"
Keep writing and keep posting.
Happy New Year !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings big2014,
A very inspiring essay. I love what was written and it shares so much joy to my heart.
My suggestion in this work:
The title, "Truely thankful"
Please change this to ...Truly thankful
Also please put two spaces in every paragraph.
SUGGESTION ONLY.
Your grateful heart will always be blessed !
Thank you for sharing.
Write On !
Happy New Year !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings lovelygirl,
The title is very inspiring and the poem is so full of understanding, hope, peace and expresses harmony inspite of everything that happened. A love that is true and unselfish or kind.
Pleasant feelings are shown in the written lines and surely , you are blessed and will always be blessed.
Lovely poetry, and I like it.
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON !
Happy New Year !
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Review of Primates  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings swordarm,
A fantasy story well-written and well-presented in a narrative form.
I believe that this is a winning piece, so I wish you win in this contest.
Thank you for sharing your talent through "Primates"
Keep writing and keep posting.
HAPPY NEW YEAR !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings Simple Dykie,
AHAHA ! Very true... A lot of people can relate to these unpleasant experiences of someone knocking at the door.
A realistic story sharing about different angles of everyday living.
I enjoy reading this work.
My suggestion is about the caption below the title:
The word incovienent....Please change this to...inconvenient
The story ? I find it amusing and PERFECT !
Thank you for sharing.
Write On !
Happy New Year !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings mschleider,
This offers fun in my reading time and I admire the uniqueness and creativeness.
My suggestion:
and lable a beautiful mistake
Please change the word lable to: label
SUGGESTION ONLY.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
HAPPY NEW YEAR !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings Tim Chiu,
A poem that expresses one's existence and connectedness with the whole world.
This line happens to be my favorite line:
"The dreams we so rapturously envision imply an oath"
The conclusion said it all.
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Happy New Year !
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