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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings warriormom,
A beautiful poem so full of life. The message rejuvenates mind, body and soul. The sweetest message is the connectedness with the MOST HIGH. So meaningful ! So precious !
Everything in this poem is great !
Thank you for the read !
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Greetings turtlemoon,
A beautiful experience well-documented through a very nice poem that rhymes wonderfully. The poem exudes joy and it radiates gladness to your readers heart.
Lovely as it is !
So wonderfully shared to all the authors in this awesome community.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Fence  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings gervic,
Three lines Haiku poetry that fully describe a fence. Creative and descriptive and a one way of presenting a beautiful Haiku that expresses a concise and wise work.
Thank you for sharing your talent through "Fence"
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings wulang,
A prose so full of deepest emotion, and nicely written all in red letters as in deeply emotional from the start to the end.
The presentation is wonderful and great.
Thank you for sharing your talent through your prose.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Words  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings Lily on the Moon,
Congratulations for winning.
I truly believe this is an inspiring piece, very truthful and I like most the last line that brings a strong message of this work.
But one thing is sure, kind words are like honey, sweet to the taste and can heal the hurting soul.
Thank you for the read.
Write On.
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Review of The Bookstore  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings worzhak,
Very interesting, inviting title.
"The Bookstore" is always my favorite place whenever I have time to visit and to take a trip to the city which is about three hours ride from our place.
You did a good job here.....Very realistic, very authentic and very nice poem that gives joy to my reading and reviewing time.
BRAVO !
Thank you for sharing.
Write ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings lightspeed555,
An explanation through fantasy writing in fiction about "The Downfall of Stars" Possibly this can be enhanced with any scientific explanation which I cannot do.
Anyway, this is a very interesting piece and a very challenging one to write, and I admire your creativeness.
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON.
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Review of Shopaholic  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings dorianherestor,
Very true to its given title, this is desciptive of what a Shopaholic identity is. There is a good flow and the message is clear.
My suggestion:
Possibly you can make two spaces in every paragraph for a better presentation.
SUGGESTION ONLY.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Write On !
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Review of What it Hides  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings Serphintin,
A short story and wisely written. I admire it from the start until the very end. It has a good flow, with great characterization and plot.
Nice in its own way.
I have nothing to add and nothing to edit. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing.
Write On !
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Review of I am from  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings Megan,
"I'm from making my own happiness,
From patience is a virtue, and many I love you's."
Two wonderful, joyful lines that I love most in your well-written poetry.
The last line :
"I am from appreciating everything."
It makes me so very happy for you.
Thank you for sharing your biographical poem in your own artistic way.
WRITE ON !
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Review of The Sea  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings Amajyn,
The title is a very inviting one. The poem is so touching and it rhymes beautifully. Descriptive in its own artful way.
Living near the sea I can relate with some lines of your work especially this line:
"The sun gives me soft solace as I walk down the beach"
The message is lonely and yet the poem is so lovely.
Thank you for sharing.
Write On !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings amchanc,
A novel in progress and this is the beginning. Good luck for the continuation of the story.
I believe you are going to add more characters, more twists and turns of the story and more and more suspense.
I look forward to read more of "The Inside Story"
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Carolina Morning  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings svenalo,
A meaningful free-verse poetry with a message so touching, so full of life, so absorbing, so observant,so convincing. Like a prayer from the heart and soul.
I noticed this line but still I consider this a very wonderful piece:
"As I looked at my the yard and the sky "
Please change this to:
As I looked at my yard and the sky
Suggestion Only.
Thank you for the read.
WRITE ON !
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Review of Absorbed  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings iluvhorses,
An acrostic poetry with a personal message or biographical in a way.
"Dear God, ....deliver her."
I like this last line of this work.
Perfect conclusion for a perfect poem.
Thank you once again for a worthwhile read.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings mc young,
Religion is a very wide topic to talk about and this poll is truly interesting. I believe that the religion being taught to me since I was a child is the same religion that I believe until I die.
Thank you for the opportunity for me to join and answer this poll.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Her Hair  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings Lenong.
This is a fascinating poem that describes the crowning glory of a very special individual. Truly full of art and beauty as well as loving thoughts.
Every line is my favorite line.
A great work.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings borat,
The last three lines are the most meaningful lines and my favorite in this poetry.
"And a new love is born
Like this poem , I believe
At least a soul has been sympathized."
You are a poet by heart and will always be.
Thank you for the read.
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings jedimickey,
I admire the creativeness of writing a "First 6 word story." This is like a telegram in the year of the 60's or 70's. and this is like a text message in this modern generation with a sad message. Written with urgency as always be when death occurs.
Thank you for sharing and I believe there are more stories for you to write possibly a novel with more than 6 thousand words.
Good luck !
Write On !
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Review of The trip  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Greetings Aelyah,
A very interesting story with a captivating title and this short story can be a Prologue of a very nice novel someday.
The characterization,the plot or the storyline itself is great.
I strongly believe that you are a very talented author.
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON !
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Review of Once Upon a Time  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Greetings SilentSongsofsadness,
The title captures my reading interest because I have a favorite song with the same four lines to start. This is a short story describing yourself in the past and I believe you are wiser and livelier and more joyful now as we all learned from our mistakes, meaning we learned from our mistakes. That is real life.
My suggestion in this work:
The word APON....Please change this to Upon.......Once Upon a Time
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON !
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Review of Desire  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings fingertipheart,
The poem has a captivating title and the story behind the poetry is philosophical in a way that it expresses a relationship between two people.
That is how I understood this intriguing poem.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Sand at the Beach  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings apoca,
A great experience documented in a beautiful and lovely poetry .
Captivating title and inviting words that expresses how lovely nature is.
The poem has a good flow and sooooooo nice to read.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Write On !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings fortunebeach,
A beautiful love story documented in a well-written, well-presented "Thoughts On A Lover". Nostalgic and the love stays forever. Sad.....But life goes on...
The last part, describing and writing about love is like a wonderful prose that offers great readership to all.
Love never ever dies and it makes life easier knowing and believing that in our lives we experience to love and be loved and that matters most.
Thank you for the read.
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings debmach.
A love story behind the poetry blended with the struggles of life including a decision that has to be made wisely.
Sad to note for a mother to be , so young and on the eve of her birthday here she is surrounded with a big problem facing tomrrow.
A poem that is heartbreaking and yet there is HOPE represented by the coming angel in her life.
Unique. Sad...
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON !
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Review of HUNTER'S RUN  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings cpowers,
A story so full of action and suspense. The man's best friend is truly a friend.
Intriguing name for a dog.
Tha story has a good flow and I am glad with the happy ending.
I have nothing to add and to edit.
Thank you for sharing.
Write On !
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