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Review of Playing Kittens  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings beingofnature,
Haiku that makes me smile. A poem so full of life, so lovely... We have cats in our home and this poem gives me so much joy.
Yes, kittens are really playful.
Thank you for sharing your talent through "Playing Kittens"
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings dogtooth,
A prologue for a fantasy story/novel in the making. Very powerful title like the last line that makes me smile reading your work.
Interesting ! Intriguing !
This prologue sounds like a very lovely prose with wit and a bit of a riddle at the same time.
Good luck for more writings.
Keep posting....as I keep reading.
WRITE ON !
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Review of Divine Physician  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings wulang,
A poem with a piece of advice to someone who is terminally ill. So sad to note.
My suggestion in this work:
"they always pray to god that you'll get well"
"pray there and asks god for healing"
Please change the word god to....God
SUGGESTION ONLY !
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON !
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Review of That old tear  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings deucalion,
Sad, nostalgic with a twist at the end of the story behind the poetry.
The last stanza is offering love and hope and a brighter tomorrow.
DRAMA in real life and sentimental too.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings denthepen,
The poem is fun to read. Truly enjoyable with a beautiful message to share. This is a work that lightens the burdens of the day.
YES ! "My lesson learned " a very well-said words ....
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings sum1,
I felt a lump on my throat and was terry-eyed reading this poem. The story behind this work is giving a very good lesson and a great wisdom to share, as in too good to be true, but I believe this happens even in this modern world, wherein I believe there are angels in our midst still existing.
VERY TOUCHING ! VERY INSPIRING !
Thank you for sharing "The Unexpected Gift"
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings kaye-anne,
A narrative full of suspense and the questioning mind. The story has a good flow.
"You have the tendancy to scare yourself."
Please change the word tendancy to....tendency
SUGGESTION ONLY !
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Greetings axxx,
YES ! Rated 18 +
A narrative so scary and dark in its real aspect.
Intriguing title and there is a good flow of the narrative.
"Against my better judgement"
Please change the word judgement to.........judgment
SUGGESTION ONLY.
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings mirtix,
Very true, very inspiring. This poem really reflects the identity of talents and skills as big blessings.
My suggestion :
The first line, the word lucky, possibly you may change it to....luck
SUGGESTION ONLY.
Thank you for sharing and for the read.
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Greetings amchanc4600,
Oh ! "The stapler was out of place." A very intriguing start of a suspense thriller novel in progress. It could be a crime or a ghost story
whatever it is I wish you luck for the continuation of "Something Was Wrong".
Thank you for sharing this sample of your work.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings myra ,
Reading the title makes me wants to read your work right away.
The poem is deeply emotional and the lines are very touching.
It rhymes and it speaks tomorrow with peace and rest.
I wish that this truly happens especially to souls who love each other so much here in this world and in the other life will be having each other again, gladly.
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings aksabapathy,
The comparison is clear and the significant reason as psychological, I highly respect that.
This is an article written with all truthfulness and the given explanation makes your readers think in a brighter perspective.
The article has a good flow and interesting to read.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Greetings opusopus,
A novel in progress... The al Qaeda never wins or any group that is for terrorism act will never ever win simply because good will always win over the evil.
I watched the documentary of Ben Ladin's death and I was pleased with what the U.S. military had been doing, it's not that easy but IT WAS DONE and that proves once and for all that terrorism never ever wins.
I highly respect all religions in the world including the MUSLIM and I wish that this novel that you are going to finish writing will serve as an inspiration to one and all that PEACE AND HARMONY can be gained by the whole world if one has to give RESPECT and HONOR to whatever is done for a good cause not to destroy innocent lives and properties.
ONLY MY OPINION !
Thank you for the read and thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Greetings pad92012,
A blog for the many words, lines, paragraphs and more words of wisdom to write, and this is the beginning.
Very observant, thoughtful, knowledgeable and wise as every scientist can be.
Good luck for more writings.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings ashleymorgan,
Reading between the lines I can tell that your quest for learning especially foreign language never stops simply because you are enjoying what you are doing. I agree with the last two lines because each country is interesting as well as its people and culture.
Thank you for sharing your work,
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Untitled- Sample  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings viksta,
A sample.
I did not notice any grammatical error in this piece,but I have one suggestion:
You may put two spaces for every paragraph for a better presentation of the story.
Suggestion Only.
Thank you for sharing your work.
WRITE ON !
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Review of wishes  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Greetings parkala,,
I believe that each wish we have in our hearts impel us to do what is best to be done. The title of your work captures my interest and what you have written are words of wisdom.
I look forward to read more of your works.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings macabbey,
The love story behind the poetry is so inspiring and so full of faith and loving thoughts.
My suggestion in this work:
The word wont which was being used many times,please put an apostrophe,
"won't shine
won't moan
won't be a struggle"
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON !
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Review of Energetic  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Greetings eastafrican,
The title offers great readership as everyone needs to be energetic to face the world.
A poem so real.
My suggestion:
"my spine so strong & me skin"
Please change this to:
my spine so strong and my skin
Suggestion Only.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Amid the Relics  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings aprilckohl,
A poem or a prose that is so meaningful and touching. The message is full of hope and positive expectations.
It has good rhythm and rhyme and so full of love.
Thank you for sharing your talent through "Amid the Relics"
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Earth: Lost  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings lucky13,
An interesting journal, like a futuristic movie full of suspense, action and adventure.
The long paragraph before the last two lines shares words of wisdom to one and all. The last two lines are truly brilliant lines to realize how important is mind power.
I admire the creativity with wit and power.
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON !
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Review of The Word of God  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings teach,
This sounds like a gospel song to me. Religious and marvelous. I stood and shouted AMEN after reading the whole poem.
YES! This is a very meaningful work especially for me that strongly believe in GOD ..
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON.
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Review of Stay  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings ganja,
A real drama in real life through "Stay", The message or the story behind the poetry is full of suspense and sad experience that lingers day by day, like a sad song or ballad. The most expressive message is the request for the Lord God to stay, the wonderful highlight of your work.
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON !
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Review of Respect  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Greetings conflict,
A quizz to refresh my mind and to keep me cool and alive in a very hot day. WHEW !
NICE TOPIC !
RESPECT ! We need to earn them. When you show respect to others surely you will be respected in return, just like love begets love. My opinion only.
I enjoy answering this quiz.
VERY ENLIGHTENING.
Thank you...
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings palindrome,
A novel, or a book (fantasy)..Wow ! You have an amazing talent. I have never wrote a fantasy novel/book so anytime I read one,I must say this author is truly gifted and brilliant,because not all authors can do what you are doing.
This is an interesting story with each corresponding interesting characters.
Surely you have a lot of fans in this awesome community.
Thank you for the worthwhile read.
WRITE ON !
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