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I thought this was written beautifully. Lovely poetic power here, lovely tone to the words and lines. I don't know who Odin is but they sound so special and spiritual. I smiled as I read this through and I related so very well to this poem. Thank you for the delightful read. Write on!
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I thought this writing from you resonated so highly with me. I have done exactly this before with a foggy mind by the water. I realted so well to this little tale. Nice grammar and I found the sotry to be very gripping and philisophical. I wonder if this is a true tale?
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Nicely written and executed, not errors found. I felt the struggle you had faced here. Nice descriptive words and lines. Nice length for a poem, not too long and not too short. You also managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Good work and I enjoyed reading this through. Write on!
Your little poem here was written so very cleverly. The ending of both stanzas was great and made the poem even more inviting. The impact of this poem was huge and made me think the author is very wise and knows life very well. A great read and thank you for posting it here. Write on!
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I thought this was bitter-sweet, but mostly very honest of you. The expressive manner, the truth you told and the depth you wrote this out made this writing so powerful. I don't think people understand what women can be put through and live with. This was very raw and powerful. Nice expressive tone here. Write on!
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The simplicity of this item was great. I think many people in society forget their pleases and thank you's. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Less is more they say. Nice work. Write on!
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I related well to what you had written. I hope this is not the case for others. A well descripted poem and shed light on how the devil works. I think you are good at expressing yourself through writing. Keep going and write on!
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This was very deeply written and displayed. A heart-felt desperate kind of prayer the Lord himself. Fact or fiction, I felt the raw pain of this person, I felt the dispair. The reality was real, the need for redemption was real too. Well expressed and write on!
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Nice imagery came from your words and lines. I was gripped to every word you wrote. I could picture a lake and an elderly couple feeding the wild ducks with bread and all is peaceful. There was a nice feeling over me as I read this through. Nice work and write on!
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I liked the title, it seemed so refreshing. The words you wrote were very poetic and powerful. I loved your writing style here. Nice flowing lines and rhymes. I found no way to improve the poem. Good job done and write on!
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A simple yet effective little poem. You simplified depression very well. A good length for a poem, not too long and not too short. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Well expressed and nice tone to your work. Keep writing and well done!
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I thought your writing here was great. There was an aged, heroic feeling to this poem. There was good imagery coming from each word and line. You write rather well seeing English is not your native language. I enjoyed reading your writing through. Good work.
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I really liked the tone of this writing, it seemed to match the seriousness of the subject and theme. Caring parents for the child. Good usage of the prompt. I found no way to improve this gem of a poem. It was a good little read. Fine job. Write on!
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I thought this was a lovely piece of writing and needs no improvement. You have done a fine job here with this poem. I also related well to everything you wrote out. The essence of true love was very evident here. Good work and write on!
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I enjoyed your story telling and found it quite gripping. Your grammar was fine and easy to understand. The story held a little dark twist with the robber being a family member. It would be interesting to know the full story. Good introduction. Write on!
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I thought this poem was lovely. Written well and executed perfectly. I would like to know who the man in black was? This man added a twist to the poem. Your structure and style in this poem was great and needs no attention. A good, worthwhile read. write on!
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A lovely little poem. The meaning of this poem was special and rewarding to me. Nicely written and displayed on the page. The sentiments were awesome. It must be nice to be able to look back on love and see positives. Good work and write on!
I liked the originality in the way this piece was written. I liked the title too. I am guessing this was written for an old flame of yours? I liked the emotion in the words and lines. There was a calling here. You are good at expressing yourself .... Write on!
This was well written and expressed. It is odd that I related to everything you wrote out here. It is odd that this writing could have been written about me. The person who you wrote this for has you in their life and this piece of writing too. So show them this piece and help them believe. You can be their safety. Nice work and write on!
I have decided to read a few of your poems after you invited me.
I liked the sense of running and even hiding here. The title was very inviting and made me smile. There was a truth about this writing from you. There was good emotion in here. I have heard that at night it is harder for a female than male to empty their heads from grime of the day. You expressed yourself so very well here. I hope you find that place. Write on!
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I loved this little poem from you. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. There was also great imagery coming from the words and lines. To me, this could be a prompt for a short story. The writing was sweet and I enjoyed every word. Write on!
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I thought this was well written. The message was very clear to me. I liked the simple way you expressed yourself here. There was an emotional power over me as I read this poem through. Nice writing and one to remember. Good work and write on!
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Nice flowing rhythm, good structure. I enjoyed reading this through. The rhymes made the poem a joy. I liked the theme of this writing, it made me think of the character and her devilish ways. Good work and write on!
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I found your writing here to be so very emotional, loving and beautiful. You have such a big heart here in this piece from you. Your family is a loving, kind and respectful family. I liked the title, it was very fitting for the words and lines. Thank you for sharing such an emotional and warming piece of writing.
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I thought the love here in this poem was powerful. This was defining true love at its very best. Lovely rhymes and lovely rhythm. This is a fine piece of writing from you, great work, great writing. Pat yourself on the back for exacting the power of love. Write on!
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