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Review by Rima...
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Cheri,

I enjoyed reading your story.
I am no expert and what's following is my humble review which you may choose to ignore. *Angelic*

The descriptions of the pain Evangeline [I could hardly pronounce it *Blush*] went through came alive. I could not only relate but feel the pain in me... That is such a hard thing to do and you have done it so beautifully... [One learning point for me there]

You have beautifully 'showed' the user how those suit worked or the feeling that it gave her.

It was the showing that you did in your story that caught my attention and walked me till the end of the story...

Thank You...


Happy Writing *Quill* !!!



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Review of Destination-Space  
Review by Rima...
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Thekindred,

I enjoyed reading your story.
I am no expert and what's following is my humble review which you may choose to ignore. *Angelic*


It is a very nice piece with a very inspiring ending...
There were a few things that I found strange and that made the reading more interesting... Like: but we don’t have the right DNA ..

I liked the bond between the two characters... True friend is a rare gift...

The speech Velli gave was truly inspiring so real.

Thanks for sharing...


Happy Writing *Quill* !!!


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Review of Two Week Summer  
Review by Rima...
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello Jellyfish,

I enjoyed reading your poem.
I am not a poetic person and do forgive me if I have misinterpreted something. What's following is my humble review which you may choose to ignore. *Smile*

First thing, I must admit is that I felt jealous after reading your poem. *Smile*
Here is either Hot summer, or less summer or cool summer. And if lucky we have two weeks winter. *Bigsmile*

Well, coming back to your piece. It had a nice description of the summer activities that I could very well relate to. While you pictured the difficulties of the high temperature, you have very beautifully portrayed the fun that summer brings.

At the end it seems your heart grows heavy with the heavy rain clouds. Well done.


Happy Writing *Quill* !!!








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Review by Rima...
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Hello Snow,

I enjoyed reading your piece.
I am no expert and what's following is my humble review which you may choose to ignore. *Smile*

I am not a poetic person so please forgive me if I have misinterpreted something.
I am from Kolkata, India and as I was reading your poem I could feel the weather as mine. Kolkata is hot and humid and during summer the temperatures crosses 40 Degrees on the centigrade scale.

The phrase 'Triple digit temperatures' sounded repetitive to me by the time I reached the end But maybe it's just me. *Smile*

Though the rain and the thunderstorms made the speaker nostalgic but it seemed he was enjoying the advantages of the city life.
The line 'frying eggs on the sidewalk
we can poach them' Made me giggle. We say that so often.

Well it was a good portrayal of the climate of Las Vegas and Oklahoma and I enjoyed being introduced to both.

Happy Writing *Quill* !!!








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Review by Rima...
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Fran,

I enjoyed reading*Reading* your story.
I am no expert and what's following is my humble review which you may choose to ignore. *Smile*

I see it was written for the Wirter's Cramp.
Considering the little time that you had got to write this story, it was a good piece with a surprise ending.
The protagonist had a crazy day that ended in a even crazier way. It was a good story to read but the narration could use some polishing.

Clearly Claire was having a hard time at the office but that tense atmosphere in the office didn't come out of the page.
Well, it's just me... *Smile*

A few points:
she released that her mood was unlikely: realized, I guess
Claire halted at the top of the stepped to the offices: Steps, probably.

Well that was all from me....

Happy Writing *Quill* !!!








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Review of Reviewer's Club  
Review by Rima...
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Pass It On,


I am no expert and what's following is my humble review which you may choose to ignore. *Smile*

I read through the content and found most of my questions answered which is a very good thing for any introductory page of a group.
The rules were clearly pointed out and were easily noticeable.
I liked the simplicity of the item...




Happy Writing *Quill* !!!

"Reviewer's Club"
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Review of Coffee  
Review by Rima...
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Christine,

I enjoyed reading your story.
I am no expert and what's following is my humble review which you may choose to ignore. *Smile*


WOW!!!
That's what I felt after I finished your piece.
I had never read anything like it... I mean it felt like a relationship with a real person.
And the narration and the descriptions of those feelings were purely sensational...
The ending was absolutely beautiful.

Thank you

Happy Writing *Quill* !!!








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Review by Rima...
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Jenalora,

I enjoyed reading your story.
I am no expert and what's following is my humble review which you may choose to ignore. *Smile*


I really loved your story. It was fun to read. The story was not only entertaining but educational as well. It was pretty good as a children story.



Thank you for sharing the piece...



Happy Writing *Quill* !!!








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Review by Rima...
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Nikki,

I enjoyed reading your story.
I am no expert and what's following is my humble review which you may choose to ignore. *Smile*

Nice one... It was good short read and nicely said....
so I minus well just abandon: maybe you meant might there
Rest was good... and do double space your paragraphs....



Happy Writing *Quill* !!!








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Review by Rima...
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Nikki,

I enjoyed reading your story.
I am no expert and what's following is my humble review which you may choose to ignore. *Smile*


First of all Welcome to WDC.... *Hug* You will *Heart* it I am sure...
As for the story... Its a lovely and heart touching story of three lives that were meant to be together....

Well thought of and very neatly executed...


Happy Writing *Quill* !!!








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Review by Rima...
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello Hazard,

I enjoyed reading your story.
I am no expert and what's following is my humble review which you may choose to ignore. *Smile*

First of all... WELCOME TO WDC... *Hug*

Now, that was a sweet piece of writing. The writing was straight and was simple which made the story more interesting.

There are no suggestions to make just that make sure to space every paragraph.
With practice you would surely create beautiful stories.
Enjoy....

Happy Writing *Quill* !!!








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Review by Rima...
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Hooves,

I enjoyed reading your story.
I am no expert and what's following is my humble review which you may choose to ignore. *Smile*

HE HE HE... *Laugh*
That's what the story made me do... Laugh, right from the first line. It was clever and well scripted. A bull could write and the human would have to wait for a computer.
*Salute* to your imagination...

The title suits perfectly... word by word....
Thanks for sharing...



Happy Writing *Quill* !!!








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Review by Rima...
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello ,

I read your story and I enjoyed it thoroughly.
I am no expert and what's following is my humble review.


Exciting... Well that's the word for it.
Loved reading it and enjoyed it. There are a few typos that I noticed:

Deneb system and the ships current location relative to : ship's

That an opinion or an order? : That's

In order to prevent future warfare and the spread of the very potent drug. The Federation relocated : drug, the

Said Chris turning from the weapons station. There should be something. It's never : "There ....


Thank you for this wonderful story. It was new but yet seemed to known. That's an accomplishment.


All the best for the Contest....

Happy Writing *Quill* !!!







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Review by Rima...
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello Prohtpiz,

I read your story and I enjoyed it thoroughly.
I am no expert and what's following is my humble review.


Was is a contest entry? Just asking...

FIrst of all, Welcome to WDC... You are in for a wonderful ride... *Laugh*

Well, you got a good piece there.
You read my mind when you said 'Perhaps I should start at the beginning.'
The end was not totally unexpected but I was hoping he would find another way out, especially when the story is in first person.

Well done.... *Smile*



Happy Writing *Quill* !!!







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Review of Haunted Castle  
Review by Rima...
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
Hello Twiga,

I read your story and I enjoyed it thoroughly.
I am no expert and what's following is my humble review.


Good one there. Though I see its marked under horror/scary but it wasn't that scary. At least that's what I felt.
It also says that the story is a contest entry, so probably you might have had word limits. Even so, may be you could dramatize the mood a bit.
Let us feel the chill of the rain. Creep us out with the eeriness of the old castle. Make us hungry with the delicious food. Scare us with the sudden appearance of the witch. Turn us into a crow along with Johnny.

Well, I just got carried away... *BigSmile*

You know what they say: Show, don't tell.
Describe Describe Describe *Smile*


Enjoy yourself... See you around...


Happy Writing *Quill* !!!







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Review of The Gift  
Review by Rima...
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Angel,

I read your story and I enjoyed it thoroughly.
I am no expert and what's following is my humble review.


I liked it, I enjoyed it.

The story was crisp and the writer had a clear idea about where it was headed.
It kept my attention and the urge to read till the end. Keep up the good work.



Happy Writing *Quill* !!!








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Review of The Woods Man  
Review by Rima...
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Fhionnuisce,

I read your story and I enjoyed it thoroughly.
I am no expert and what's following is my humble review. *Smile*

That was a beautiful piece. The woodsman reminded me of Tarzan. *Smile*
There was suspense and thrill.
The well-known was beautifully made unfamiliar.
It appeared that the writer had extensive knowledge about forest life. Then it saddens the heart to learn about human’s brutality.
Overall it was extremely enjoyable and a wonderful writing.


Happy Writing *Quill* !!!



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Review by Rima...
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Mr. Z,

I read your story and I enjoyed it thoroughly.
I am no expert and what's following is my humble review.

That was a very well written piece full of laughter and fun. The plot was nicely set and executed. It made me smile and then laugh.

Keep up the good work...



Happy Writing *Quill* !!!







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Review by Rima...
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)

Hello,

That was, no doubt, one of the best pieces I have read recently...
It was gripping and wonderful..
The end was touching and satisfying too..
The plot was new and very well executed...

Happy Writing *Quill* !!!
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Review of WDC and Me  
Review by Rima...
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Intuey,

This is not a review but my feelings after reading your piece.
It is full of emotions. I understand you had been through ups and downs in your life but please don't leave WDC. Its really a wonderful place.
I am new here too, a black case, *Smile*.
Hope to see you around...

Happy Writing *Quill*!!!
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Review by Rima...
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi Aska, *Hand*

I read all four of your stories.
I am no expert and what's following are my humble opinions.

I liked them but you need to work a little on them.
First, look after the spellings. They are important. *Smile*

Second, before you go straight down into the story give a little introduction. I don't know who Valka or Erick is. What their personality is etc... *Wink*
Let's introduce the characters, specially the protagonists, to the readers before we take them on the adventure.

And what does 'OC' stands for? I couldn't get that. Sorry!!! *Sob*

And as I had been practically taught by a number of reviewers, please double space your paragraphs. It becomes easier to read. *Reading*

Well Keep Writing *Quill*... Have Fun *Delight* !!!
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Review of BANG!  
Review by Rima...
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (1.0)
I don't understand what it is to be intentionally bad because I didn't find it bad at all...
It was a good read.... And I enjoyed it...
Since you requested for half a star...
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Happy Writing!!!
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Review of Meet Ms. Bond  
Review by Rima...
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello KhyatiSoparkar ....

That was brilliant... and the name suits :)
I liked the expressions used. The story had pace and suspense and made me read till the end.

No flaws that I could think of.

Happy Writing!!! *Smile* *Wink*
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Review by Rima...
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I liked the last one and the first one too... Well can't help liking it :)
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Review by Rima...
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)



I liked the last one and the first one too... Well can't help liking it :)
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