Wonderful decription of the Phoenix in words. Anyone can visualize clearly this being in fire and splendor. The eternalness of it arising from the ashes again is described very well. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Good work.
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i like this poem. It captures unrequieted love quite well. Tomorrow is misspelled and needs to be corrected and I think it reads better to change "Too ashamed to come back and to face" to Too ashamed to come back and face. I am not sure the reference to her being an angel is correct in that it makes her seem to be other than human but I'm not sure what I would change the verbage and description to...perhaps broken soul....
I really enjoyed the poem and will keep it as a favorite.
This is really good writing. It captures the emotions of the writer and reflects a feeling many male and female readers can relate to. I find it reflects exactly where I am in life at the moment. It is a wonderful tool not just for writing but as an example that we are not alone in circumstances such as this. Somehow it helps to know you are not the only person experiencing this.
aralls, you have captured the essence of a young girl struggling to be her own person fearing she would have to give up more than she wants to if she accepts Christ's sacrifice of salvation and finding she is nothing without that same saving grace. I found your poem to be very good and easy to relate to. Sandy Skipper
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