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Review of Deep As You Go  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and I cannot think of anything I feel would improve the poem. *Idea*

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*Star* OVERALL OPINION: The imagery and emotions expressed are absolutely fantastic! You did a superb job of relaying how difficult it is burying the past, yet the importance of doing so as well. What I liked most of all is the way you let readers know the pain and suffering that is endured in trying to push the past behind. You are right. Only through the pain will one gain freedom and peace. The poem is mostly dark, yet I found some of the lines a bit inspiring also. GREAT POEM! *Star*

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Review of Shadow  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Star* Welcome to Writing.com. *Bigsmile*. Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to be critical in any way. *Heart*

*Idea* ERRORS: No spelling, grammatical, or other mistakes were spotted. *Thumbsup*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of to improve the item. It is well written and was an enjoyable read. *Reading*

*Note2* WHAT I ENJOYED: I like the way "the shadow of your life" is relayed in a dark way, making it almost frightening in some of the stanzas. I also like the optimism you have in trying to fight it, and the strength you have in being who you are. The poem is terrific! KEEP WRITING! *Note2*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Exclaim* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Bigsmile*. Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: "The cherub in my heels" should be "The cherub at my heels". No comma is needed after "excel" in the fourth stanza. Other than these, there are no suggestions for improving the entry. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm is fantastic, and the love felt for you child relayed in every stanza. Memories like the ones written about in the poem are ones to cherish a lifetime. You express that well in the item. Lovely poem! *Butterflyr*

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Review of The Moth  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Bigsmile*. Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling or other errors were spotted, and there are no suggestions for improvement other than I would make the last stanza the same line count as the others. *Questionb*

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*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm is good and the imagery awesome. You painted a poetic picture easy for readers to envision. I liked that. The entry is erotic, but tastefully so. I liked that as well. Superb poem! *Gold*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Star* Hello Tobias Wade . Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Bigsmile* Keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this reader whose intention is to help, not to criticize in any way.

*Idea* ERRORS: "A dreams" should be "A dream's" instead. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None I feel would improve the entry other than the one mentioned above. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: The rhythm and imagery are fantastic. The dreamer, Giant, other characters, and settings are well defined, which is always a plus. The poem reads like a short story. I liked that. I found the entry enjoyable. *Star*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Bigsmile*. Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical, spelling, or other mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions for improving the item. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm is perfect, and the emotions relayed well also. My favorite stanzas are three, four, six, seven, and nine, for I think most of us have felt similarly at a point in our lives. Words cannot be heard if one closes their ears and hides behind silence as mentioned in the entry. *Butterflyr*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Oldwarrior . Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are meant to be helpful, not to criticize.

*Idea* ERRORS: A period should replace the comma following "document" in the first stanza and "we" capitalized. No comma is needed after "it known" in the second stanza. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: Other than those mentioned above, there are4 no suggestions for improving the item. *Reading*

*Note3* OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm is great, and the imagery of people and settings just as good. You did a fantastic job of relaying the battle and everything that ensued. The chorus is awesome and so is the entry. *Note3*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Bigsmile* Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were spotted, and I cannot think of anything that would improve the item. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm and emotions are relayed perfectly, but having had the pleasure of reading your work before, this was not surprising. The imagery is just as superb. The entire poem is magnificent, but the third, fourth, and fifth stanzas are my personal favorites. The poem is uplifting and well written. It was an exceptional read. *Butterflyr*

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Review of LOVE MESSAGE  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Exclaim* *Snow3* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Smile* Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: A period or exclamation mark should replace the question mark following "did beat" or the sentence restructured to "fast did my heart beat" in the first stanza to make the line an inquiry. "A had a glimpse" should be "I had..." in stanza two. *Pencil*

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*Snowman* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm is good overall, and the form just as good. The poem is romantic and written through the eyes and mind of one meeting that special someone in his life. I liked that. Super poem! *Snowman*

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Review of Nine Months  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Snowman* Hello Ida_Matilda_Wright Help . Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Smile* Keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way.

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: A couple of rhyming errors were noticed, however, the entry is still excellent. Examples of the rhythm being off are "hurt" and "work" and "teeth" and "Charity" do not rhyme. Other than that, there are no suggestions for improvement. *Questionb*

*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* OVERALL THOUGHTS: As mentioned above, I think the poem is wonderful overall. You did a magnificent job of describing the nine months of pregnancy and the elation that comes when the child is delivered. Charity is a beautiful name, I might add. Superb poem! *Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr*

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Review of For Linda  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Harry . Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Smile* Keep in mind that suggestions made are meant to help, not to criticize your work in any way.

*Idea* ERRORS/SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other errors were noticed, and there are no suggestions to offer for improving the tribute to Linda.

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: I could not help thinking how wonderful your wife must have felt when reading the tribute written for her. Every stanza relays how deeply she is loved and needed, and her importance in your life. Some of my favorite lines are the ones about Linda being the sun that drives the storm clouds away, sweetest song any bird can sing, and the last two sentences.

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello David O'Haolin Whalen . Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to be helpful, not critical.

*Idea* ERRORS: No mistakes were spotted. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None I feel would improve the item. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: Beautiful...absolutely, positively beautiful poem! Every stanza lets readers know of your love for nature and why. The imagery used in describing the settings painted a poetic masterpiece that put a smile on my face. The poem is well written and uplifting. *Note1*

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Review of In Cupid's Garden  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Smile* Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No errors were noticed, and there are no suggestions for improvement. The entry is wonderful! *Questionb*

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*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: Let me begin by saying that the image before the entry is a lovely addition to the item. The imagery used in describing Cupid's garden reads like paradise to me. I have no personal favorites. The entire poem is great, and the author's notes following the poem also an added plus. *Gold*

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Review of Ode to New Year's  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Butterflyo* Hello iluvhorses . *Smile* Keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way.

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and I cannot think of anything I feel would improve the acrostic. *Questionb*

*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The rhythm is fantastic, sweeping a reader into the New Year in an inspiring way. You could not have said it better when writing about making precious memories and time passing swiftly. Super poem! *Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr*

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Review of The Armory  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Hello Aelyah . *Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to be helpful, not critical.

*Idea* ERRORS: Some punctual errors were spotted throughout the story, yet I still enjoyed the plot. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: I think "Peter cautiously approached the narrow opening" (followed by a comma) would make for a better read in paragraph one than "Peter approached cautiously". A comma should follow "entered first" in the third paragraph. A comma should replace the period after "buried alive" in paragraph five and "eyebrows" in the sixth. "Dochia looked startled at Duncan..." read off to me. I think changing the structure of the sentence in paragraph ten to something like "Dochia cast Duncan a startled look,..." sounds better. Others like these noticed as well. I hope these suggestions have helped. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: Niklaus, Peter, and the other characters are defined perfectly, and so are the settings. As stated above, the story-line is terrific. There are no slow-moving paragraphs, which is always a plus in reading a story. I liked the chemistry between Dochia and Duncan. Both acted realistically, and the finale leaves a reader wanting more. *Note1*

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Review of The Band  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and I cannot think of anything I feel would improve the poem. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: The imagery used in describing the instrumentalists and setting are outstanding. The rhythm is fantastic as well. It was easy picturing the musicians playing in the orchestra and why you enjoy it. Every stanza is well written and enjoyable. Thank you for sharing this with us. *Butterflyr*

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Review of Stay  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: "soul piercing" should be "soul-piercing". "awhile" should be "a while". Other than that, there are no suggestions to offer for improving the item. *Questionb*

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*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm is good, and the imagery is fantastic. Every stanza relays how deeply you cherish this individual, as does the last line in all of the stanzas. I have no personal favorites. The entire poem is beautiful. *Gold*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Exclaim* Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: "behind everytime" should be "behind every time". A comma should replace the period following "consumes me", and a comma come after "laughing" and "I feel". Commas should also follow "scream" and "silence" (silenceboth times in the last four lines). *Pencil*

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*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: The poem is heartbreaking. Suffering from the kind of pain mentioned in the poem alone would definitely make one feel as if a part of them is perishing. The people laughing at you are not real friends, for a genuine friend comforts when a comrade is shedding tears. However, I think you already know this being as their behavior makes you want to scream. *Butterflyr*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hello Keep in mind that any suggestions made are meant to be helpful, not to criticize.

*Idea* MECHANICS: A comma should follow "blushed" in the second paragraph. One should also come after "for me" in the fourth paragraph. A comma should follow "handsome" in paragraph seven, and also after "nursing" in the same paragraph. "jenifer" should be "Jennifer" in paragraph twenty-seven. Several others like these noticed, however, the story-line is excellent. *Idea*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: None other than those mentioned above. *Idea*

*Star* MY FAVORITES: What I liked most is the realism of the plot. Jane's reaction to puffing on the cigarette for the first time is realistic. I also liked the way Jennifer warned her about smoking beforehand, which is what a genuine friend would do. I also liked the closeness shared between Jennifer and her friends. The characters and settings are defined well. The carriage ride to Bradley's home was like reading a Cinderella story, and the kiss....how very romantic I thought it was. The images after the story add to it with an A+. Great tale, Megan! *Star*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling, grammatical, or other errors were noticed, and the only suggestion I have to offer is to keep writing these nature poems. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: You make some valid points in the poem regarding animal extinction and why humans destroy these beautiful creatures and so many others. Destruction of their natural habitats and destroying them for furs sickens me. God blessed us with a beautiful world meant to be shared, something many have forgotten or disregarded. Thank you for sharing this with us. *Butterflyr*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Dan Sturn *Smile* Keep in mind that suggestions made are meant to help, not to criticize your work in any way.

*Idea* ERRORS/SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were spotted, and I cannot think of anything to improve the poem. *Snow1*

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: The poem is written well and makes a good point of letting readers know that even though they may fall off the "peak" that another waits for them if they search for it with an open heart and mind. The last lines of the final stanza sum everything up wonderfully. Laughter opens the doors indeed. *Snow2*

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Review of I Saw a Dragon  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Bigsmile* Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: "rock" and "talk" do not follow the same rhyming pattern as the others. Other than that, there are no suggestions for improving the entry. *Questionb*

*Flower1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Flower1*

*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: Except for the rhythm being off in the fourth stanza as mentioned above, the rhyming pattern is fantastic, and so is the poem. The imagery used in defining the dragon and its surroundings is perfect. Additional delight came when the dragon met the lady beast and the coming of the knights. The poem is well written, and a pleasure reading for the young and young at heart. *Gold*

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Review of Solitude  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello *Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to be helpful, not critical.

*Idea* ERRORS: No spelling or other mistakes were noticed. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: The only suggestion I have to offer is that you continue writing these superb poems even as heartbreaking as this one is. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: The imagery used in describing loss is excellent, yet terribly sad. Being alone with the pain and lost love is relayed in a way that touched this readers heart. I think the last two stanzas are a bit inspiring because there is no fear of Him coming for you to reunite with your loved one. *Note1*

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Review of Neural Traces  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*


*Exclaim* Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling or other errors were noticed, and I cannot think of anything I feel would improve the item. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: The imagery used in expressing varying emotions is sensational. From impulses to the transmissions sent and received, I found the poem well written and easy to relate to, especially the lines about moods, thoughts, and dreams, which were my personal favorites. *Butterflyr*

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Review of On Parade  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: The only error noticed is that "holiday" and "parade" do not follow the same rhyming pattern as found in the other stanzas. *Idea*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: I have none to offer other than the one mentioned above. *Idea*

*Note1* MY FAVORITES: The rhythm is good overall, and the imagery used in describing the floats, flags, and other things seen at the parade fabulous. You did a great job of pointing out how wonderful the Fourth of July parades are, along with how much enjoyment we get when attending. *Note1*

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