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#3717769

Review of Pirate theme

Review by SHERRI GIBSON

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Rated: E

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TITLE: Appropriate for the lyrics.

ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling, grammatical, or other errors were noticed.

The only suggestion I have to offer is that you keep writing these humorous parodies.

CHARACTERS: N/A

MY THOUGHTS: The lyrics are hilarious! You did a sensational job of writing the parody. My personal favorites are the lines about not hiding the passkey. leaving a defenseless port, and the last verse. Loved it!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

KEEP WRITING!

Sherri

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#3716359

Review of Scruffy

Review by SHERRI GIBSON

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Rated: E

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TITLE: Thew title suits the story very well.

ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Just a humble opinion, but I think the sentence that follows the comma after "am small" would read better if worded "and have black hair" because "I" is used too closely together. There is a larger space than needed between "hair" and "It". A period should replace the comma following "four legs" and "my" capitalized. A comma should replace the period after "big field", followed by "and then". "Leash" needs no capitalization. A comma should come after "he calls". No comma is needed after "hear Bob". Commas should come after "waiting for him" and "tall grass".

CHARACTERS: Bob and Scruffy are defined well, and so are the settings.

MY THOUGHTS: This is a touching story about a man and his pet. The bond between them reminded me of the old saying man's best friend.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

KEEP WRITING!

Sherri

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#3715071

Review of On This Cross!

Review by SHERRI GIBSON

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

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Hello Jaiam Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item" Keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way.

ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The traditional rhyming pattern is off in the first two verses. Other than that, there are no suggestions to offer for improving the entry.

OVERALL THOUGHTS: You did an exceptional job of relaying all Christ endured for mankind. My heart ached when reading about the torture suffered for the gift given to us. His feelings are expressed in a way that touched my heart as life was drained from Him.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

Blessings,
Sherri

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#3714682

Review of Four Month Old Jamie

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Rated: E

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TITLE: Suits the story well.

ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Commas should follow "to the sky" and "grabbing at it".

A period should come after "Mary relaxed", and "she" capitalized.

"the Jamie" should be "Jamie" and a comma follow "the paperwork".

CHARACTERS: Mary and the other characters are defined well and realistically. I liked that.

MY THOUGHTS: You did an exceptional job using the prompt, and I was pleased to read that Jamie has been free of cancer for twenty-one years. What I liked the most was Mary's hope despite what the doctors said. I also thought you did a sensational job of describing the settings, especially the sitting tree and the imagery used in describing the whispering wind while Mary was praying.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

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Sherri

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#3714679

Review of The Jester

Review by SHERRI GIBSON

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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TITLE: I think the title fits the poem perfectly.

ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The rhythm is off in a couple of lines, but other than that, no errors were spotted. For example, "lights" and "night" and "faces" and "is" do not follow the same rhyming pattern as the other stanzas do.

CHARACTERS: N/A

MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is great overall, and the imagery just as good, although the verse about the children and the doom awaiting them was heart-wrenching. As mentioned in the poem, I would feel similarly about being cursed in this kind of situation, yet I would feel a sense of happiness for the joy the children were given as well.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

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#3713931

Review of ♥♥Bear Hugs♥♥

Review by SHERRI GIBSON

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Rated: E

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ERRORS: No mistakes were noticed. The details are relayed clearly.

SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of that would improve the item.

OVERALL OPINION: Let mew begin by saying that I like these kind of activities. This one offers members the opportunity to send members a gift or help fulfill auction packages made where something has come up that the donor cannot fulfill. I like that.

The details are pointed out with clarity. This makes it easy for people wanting to send a gift or have packages fulfilled to understand by reading it once instead of going over the item several times. I wish you the best with the activity. I am sure it will be a success.

Sherri

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#3713529

Review of A Slippery Wet Disaster

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and I cannot think of anything that would improve the poem. It is great!

CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A

MY LIKES: The imagery used in describing the road conditions is fantastic. I do not think anyone reading the poem will be unable to relate to the slippery and unsafe experiences on the roads or the drivers who speed in the hazardous conditions. I could not agree more that distraction can lead to damage and/or disaster.

MY DISLIKES: There are none.

Sherri

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#3713519

Review of Number Seventy-Seven - Prologue

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Rated: E

| (3.0)

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Hello, and welcome to Writing.com Dogtooth3030 ! Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to be critical in any way.

ERRORS: Commas should follow each "so" in "so so so...". A comma should come after "we learned". "Well, that and..." should be the end of paragraph one instead of a new paragraph. A space should come between the fourth and fifth paragraphs, and the last sentence added to the fifth.

SUGGESTIONS: "so so so different" reads off to me. I think the deletion of two of them would make for a better read. Just a humble opinion though. I would change "be such one person" to "that person" or "the person".

WHAT I ENJOYED: With some editing, the prologue will be a good start for your story. I think that once the emotions, characters, and settings are added that readers will be able to relate easier. Good luck!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

Sherri

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#3713176

Review of A Moment Well Spent

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Rated: E

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ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The rhyming pattern is off in the second verse and "With out" should be "Without", but other than that, no errors were spotted, and there are no suggestions for improving the entry.

OVERALL THOUGHTS: You did a magnificent job of letting readers know the importance of stopping their hectic schedules long enough to take time to smell the roses. Other than the second verse, the rhythm is fantastic. The imagery is just as good. The poem is beautiful!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

WRITE ON!

Sherri

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#3712768

Review of My Husband's Children

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Rated: ASR

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TITLE: The title fits the story well.

ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Just a humble opinion, but I think indenting the paragraphs and putting a space between them would make for a better presentation and an easier read. "I set" should be "I sit". A comma should follow "shake my head" and "from my hand". A period should replace the comma after "receiver below" and a comma follow "Listen". A comma should replace the period after "hospital", and "He" needs no capitalization. "a" can be deleted before "a hold of my arm" with a better effect in my opinion. No comma is needed after "he asks" and a comma follow "Mrs. Lenson".

CHARACTERS: The characters are defined good.

MY THOUGHTS: The plot is good, and although the situation making her call Luke her son sad, it was the fact that Mrs. Lenson finally did that was refreshing. The story was enjoyable.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

KEEP WRITING!

Sherri

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#3711660

Review of A breath of fresh confusion.

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Rated: E

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TITLE: The title is appropriate for the item.

ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling, grammatical, or other errors were noticed, and I cannot think of anything I feel would improve the poem.

CHARACTERS: N/A

MY THOUGHTS: You wrote about something I think most have felt sometimes...the struggle for our purpose in life. However, I do not think this necessarily means that we are at constant war with ourselves, or that for those who are, that it is permanent. The old saying that experience is our teacher applies in this case in my opinion. You are right. It gives us something to think about though.

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KEEP WRITING!

Sherri

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#3711653

Review of His love for me

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Rated: E

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TITLE: A perfect title for an inspirational poem.

ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling, grammatical, or other mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions to offer for improvement.

CHARACTERS: N/A

MY THOUGHTS: Like the one read before this one, I found the poem very inspiring. This is a beautiful tribute to how you feel about what His love had done for you. My personal favorites are the sentences about His love keeping your soul the strongest and how it is pure.

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Sherri

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#3711652

Review of Immortality

Review by SHERRI GIBSON

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Rated: E

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TITLE: I think the title is excellent. It suits the poem very well in my opinion.

ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other errors were spotted, and I cannot think of anything that would improve the poem.

CHARACTERS: N/A

MY THOUGHTS: You did a fantastic job of relaying how most people feel about immortality. Like you, I feel that it is due to the unknown and what awaits us after our demise. However, faith that we are going to a better world where fear and pain are not felt is my belief. I agree about immortality being with us from the beginning.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

KEEP WRITING!

Sherri

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#3711644

Review of To the Darkness

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Rated: 13+

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TITLE: The title is good, but being as the item centers on the phrase "bitter poison", I think that would be a better title.

ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling, grammatical, or other mistakes were noticed, and other than the suggestion made about the title, there are none to offer for improving the poem.

CHARACTERS: N/A

MY THOUGHTS: The poem is well written and the imagery as dark as the title. I may be off base, but I felt that the bitter poison mentioned in the poem was caused from a bad relationship and an escape from the memories. I do not think the individual really wanted death, just a release from memories.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

KEEP WRITING!

Sherri

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#3711637

Review of Have You Ever?

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Rated: E

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TITLE: The title suited the poem well.

ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Just an opinion, but "getting" could be cut before "near" in the first line and still have the same effect. "his light" should be "His light" being as you are referring to our Creator. The same applies to "his stars" and "he deserves". The lines should be broken down like the first four in the entire body of the item.

CHARACTERS: N/A

MY THOUGHTS: The imagery used in describing both emotions and settings is outstanding. The poem is a wonderful tribute to our Maker and very inspiring.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

KEEP WRITING!

Sherri

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#3711627

Review of Abused as a child, hurting as an adult

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Rated: 13+

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TITLE: The title is fitting for the poem.

ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Just a humble opinion, but I think "speak of them" is used too frequently. A comma should follow "hide them". "friendly teaher" should be "friendly teacher", and "forever say hidden" be "forever stay hidden" instead.

CHARACTERS: N/A

MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is good, and the imagery sad, but just as good. My heart bled for the child. No one, child or adult, should be subjected to abuse. It angered me reading about how the teacher he thought was a friend violated the boy.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

Sherri

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#3710806

Review of Melody of Love

Review by SHERRI GIBSON

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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Hello ~WhoMe???~ Thank you for your entry in "COLORING THE WORLD CONTEST TEMP. CLOSED " [E] Keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this reader whose intention is to help, not to criticize in any way.

ERRORS: No grammatical, spelling, or other mistakes were noticed.

SUGGESTIONS: None other than to keep writing these lovely poems.

OVERALL IMPRESSION: The rhythm is outstanding, and the imagery great also. You did a magnificent job of using the prompt. The poem is so romantic. It is easy knowing you poured heart and soul into the beautiful poem. Every stanza is great, and the last sums the others up perfectly.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

Sherri

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#3710003

Review of Eve

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

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TITLE: The title fits the poem perfectly.

ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling, grammatical, or other errors were spotted, and the only suggestion I have to offer is to keep writing these wonderful poems, Megan.

CHARACTERS: N/A

MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is terrific and the message relayed clearly. You did a superb job of reminding readers about Adam and Eve and their sons. Most importantly, you reminded readers of what Eve's temptation led to. The poem is well written. There were no flaws.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

KEEP WRITING!

Sherri

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#3709999

Review of Dreams

Review by SHERRI GIBSON

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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Hello Liam Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item" Keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way.

ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions to offer for improving the entry.

OVERALL THOUGHTS: The use of a traditional poetry pattern is perfect. The imagery and emotions expressed are superb also, and the title of the entry good as well. The entire poem is excellent, but these are my favorite stanzas:

One day the need for what you have grows thin,
No worthy service sought by other men.
The deaf'ning silence of your dreams begins,
And “live and learn” becomes “remember when”.

As heirs apparent to a foreign land
Our dreams lie far beyond this heaven’s dome.
So joyfully we wait a new command,
A sweet familial voice that says, “Come home.”

This is a beautiful poem poem written from the heart about experience and the call to come home when it is our time.

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Sherri

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#3709219

Review of Roses Are Red II - Allergies

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Rated: E

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TITLE: The title suits the poem well.

ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: I did not spot any mistakes, and I cannot think of anything for improving the poem.

CHARACTERS: N/A

MY THOUGHTS: You did a sensational job using a traditional rhyming pattern. The imagery was good as well. The poem is humorous, although allergies certainly are not. My personal favorites are the lines about looking as if you were attacked by the flu when your allergies flared up and the first four lines of the last stanza.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

KEEP WRITING!

Sherri

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#3709210

Review of Reflections Revealed

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Rated: E

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ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, but having had the pleasure of visiting your portfolio before, I was not surprised. There is nothing I can think of that would improve the poem.

CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A

WHAT I THOUGHT: My opinion on whether the things written about are reality or reflection is that it makes no difference providing one sees the beauty and goodness life has to offer. The imagery used in describing the banquet that pacifies the soul is my personal favorite, although the imagery is outstanding in every stanza. The last verse sums everything up wonderfully.

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Sherri

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#3706781

Review of Band Together

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Rated: E

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Hello Don Two Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item" Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical, punctual, spelling, or other mistakes were spotted, and there are no suggestions for improving the entry.

CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A

WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm is good, and so is the imagery. You did a great job of using the prompts for Writer's Cramp. I liked the humor found in the poem. I had no personal favorites. I enjoyed the entire entry. Best wishes on your writing endeavors. Keep writing these terrific poems!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

Sherri

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#3704637

Review of Rain! Precious Rain

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Rated: E

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TITLE: The title fits the poem perfectly.

ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed and there are no suggestions for improvement. However, having had the pleasure of reading your work before, this came as no surprise to me.

CHARACTERS: N/A

MY THOUGHTS: Much needed rain was needed here also, Harry. It was easy relating to the delight felt when Shreveport finally got the rainfall needed. The imagery is excellent. I actually craved a glass of ice water when reading the item. Keep writing these superb poems!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

KEEP WRITING!

Sherri

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#3703658

Review of Who's the Boss?

Review by SHERRI GIBSON

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Rated: E

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Hello ChrisDaltro-Chasing Moonbeams Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item" Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling, punctual, or other mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions for improvement.

CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A

WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm and imagery are super. The love felt for the pup is relayed in every stanza, even the one about his chewing habits. The puppy is fortunate to know such love and be part of your family. The last verse sums the poem up perfectly.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

Sherri

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#3702074

Review of Listen To The Love

Review by SHERRI GIBSON

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Rated: E

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Hello Brenpoet This is the first of two reviews won by you in "Invalid Item"

ERRORS: Not an error was spotted.

SUGGESTIONS: None, except that you keep writing this wonderful poetry.

PERSONAL FAVORITES: Let me begin by saying that the rhythm and imagery are fantastic, and that the image before the poem an additional plus. As for personal favorites, I enjoyed the entire item. The last two lines in every stanza summed each one up perfectly. Listening to the love, prayers, and what is in our hearts lets us see and feel what is desired and hear the song that lies within. The poem is beautifully written and inspiring.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

Sherri

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