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Review of Ransom Price  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Lizzibear . Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Bigsmile* Please keep in mind that suggestions made are meant to help, and in no way intended to criticize your work.

*Exclaim* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other errors were spotted, and there are no suggestions for improving the item. *Exclaim*

*People* CHARACTERS, SETTING/S, AND PLOT: N/A *People*

*Star* MY THOUGHTS: The poem reads almost like a story. The despair and emptiness are expressed in a way that tugged at my heart. It is hard to move forward when someone we love left us taking steps backward, which is relayed clearly in the entry. I hope you find what you search for. Thank you for sharing a part of your heart with us. *Star*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Butterflyo* Hello COUNTRYMOM-JUST REMEMBER ME . Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Smile* Keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way.

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No errors were noticed, and there are no suggestions I can think of for improving the entry. However, this came as no surprise to me because I have had the pleasure of reading your work many times before tonight. *Questionb*

*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The rhythm is exceptional, and the imagery used in describing the settings superb. It is easy to see why you found peace in these places, and praise Him. Beauty such as the settings written about in the entry are good reminders of things we should all be grateful for. LOVED THE POEM! *Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr*

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Review of My Spring  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Butterflyo* Hello wtiting_life. Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Smile* Keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way.

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No errors were noticed, and I cannot think of anything to improve the entry. *Questionb*

*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The rhythm is excellent. The poem is beautiful, inspiring, and a lovely tribute to Him for the creations bestowed on us. Every stanza relays gratitude to Him for the beauty in the world so many take for granted. Thank you for sharing the poem with us. *Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr*

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Sherri.
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Review of Forever in Time  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Tim Chiu . *Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to be helpful, not critical.

*Idea* ERRORS: No grammatical or other mistakes were spotted. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None I think would improve the item. It is lovely. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm perfect in this superb poem of love. Every stanza expresses romance that is everlasting. The imagery used in relaying the heart felt feelings is just as good. I have no personal favorites. The entire poem is beautiful and well written. The last stanza sum up the other three perfectly. I would rate it higher than a five if I could. Keep writing these outstanding poems. *Note1*

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Review of Dear Love  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Vine1**Heart**Vine2* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Bigsmile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize your work in any way. *Smile*

*Butterflyr* ERRORS: No errors were spotted. *Butterflyr*

*Mushroomb* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of for improvement. *Mushroomb*

*Butterflyv* MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is fantastic, the imagery great, and the emotions touching. Let me begin by saying that I like the Shakespearean style that is used in the entry. Perfect examples of the imagery are the lines about the bittersweet tears and wings like a dragon, and the letter written by the knight swept me to worlds of fantasy and romance. The poem flows superbly, and held my interest from the first to last stanza. *Butterflyv*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Star* Hello Marci Missing Everyone . Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Bigsmile* Keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this reader whose intention is to help, not to criticize in any way.

*Idea* ERRORS: The rhythm is off in some of the lines. For example, "relief" and "peace", "trials" and "mile". *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: Using punctuation where needed in all of the lines would make for a better presentation being as it is used in some of them. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: The rhythm is good overall, and the peace and grace He bestowed upon you inspiring. You did a sensational job of relaying how turning to Jesus granted you these things. I liked the answers He supplied when you turned to Him. As stated above, I found the entry very inspirational. *Star*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Bigsmile* Please remember that suggestions made are intended to be helpful, not criticize your work by any means. *Smile*

*Clock* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling or other mistakes were spotted, and there are no suggestions for improvement. The entry is terrific. *Clock*

*Hourglass* CHARACTERS AND STORY-LINE: N/A *Hourglass*

*Peace* OVERALL OPINION: The imagery used in describing the shore and lonely shadow is excellent. I was drawn into the poem from stanza one to the last. The second stanza about awaiting redemption is my favorite. It is a perfect example of superb imagery. The poem is written well and an enjoyable read. *Peace*

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Review of A Unicorn is Born  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Magoo . Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to be helpful, not critical.

*Idea* ERRORS: No errors of any kind were noticed. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of that I feel would improve the entry. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is great, and the imagery used in describing the newborn unicorn and its surroundings was like stepping into a beautiful book of fantasy and mythology. I enjoyed the poem from the first to the last stanza. *Note1*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Bigsmile* Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No errors of any kind were spotted, and I cannot think of anything to improve the entry, *Questionb*

*Flower1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Flower1*

*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: The imagery used in describing the trip is awesome and humorous, and the rhythm superb. That darn alarm would fail when counted on, or, in your words, "go on strike". I think you made the right decision to settle in West Virginia after all you went through. *Laugh* EXCELLENT POEM! *Laugh**Gold*

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Review of I hurt  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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. *Bigsmile* Please keep in mind that suggestions made are meant to help, and in no way intended to criticize your work.

*Exclaim* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: A comma should follow "Ouch" in the second stanza and "you say" be "you ask" being as an inquiry is being made, however, you would have to find a word that rhymes in the line after it to follow the pattern. Just an opinion, but "the" could be cut in stanza five after "Then" and still have the same effect. A comma should replace the period following "sunburned" in the sixth stanza, and "My" not capitalized. A comma should come after "plagues me" in stanza nine. *Exclaim*

*People* CHARACTERS, SETTING/S, AND PLOT: N/A *People*

*Star* MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is good, and the pain felt by ones suffering from Fibromyalgia relayed in a precise way. Knowing several who have the ailment, my heart goes out to them and others who have the illness. I like the way you let readers know of the way Fibromyalgia affects you, but more so, your faith for a cure. Blessings. *Star*

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Review of I loved you  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Exclaim* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Bigsmile* Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The rhythm is off in some of the lines. For example, "alone" and "gone", "on" and "strong", and "stay" and "ways" do not rhyme. "i" should be capitalized in the third line of the first stanza and fourth line of the last stanza. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: Feelings of pain and love that is not returned are expressed in a sad way. However, the love you feel for the one who loves another I found sweet and admirable. It is not easy clinging to a relationship like this with hope as relayed in the last stanza. I wish you the best. *Butterflyr*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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*Butterflyo* Hello jerfixie. Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Smile* Keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way.

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other errors were noticed, and I cannot think of anything I feel would improve the entry. *Questionb*

*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The rhythm is good, and the imagery just as good. The poem is terribly sad, yet well written and expressive. You relay how heartbreaking depression is and how difficult it is trying to defeat it. As written in the entry, in some cases, even close friends cannot help beat depression, however, I believe complete faith helps. *Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr*

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Review of Free  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE NEWBIE REVIEWE...  
Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Butterflyv* Hello akk2 . Welcome to WDC! *Smile* Any suggestions made by this humble reader are only opinions meant to help, not to criticize your work in any way.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: I am unsure how a "dissolved character" was freed. Some of the things making you free are described, however, more detail would be better in my opinion. For example, what made you feel that you were not free and needed refuge would enhance the poem. I think that using punctuation in all of the lines as it is in some would make for a better presentation, as would capitalization. *Pencil*

*Note1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Note1*

*Check2* MY THOUGHTS: As mentioned above, I think adding reasons for making you feel the emotions written about would make the poem better. The poem suggests strength found in the sanctuary, and resolve to maintain the fulfilled hunger. I liked that.

Again, I welcome you to WDC and wish you the best. *Check2*

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Review of Beef Stew  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Bigsmile* Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Although a couple of words did not rhyme traditionally, I rated the entry a five because I could not think of a way to replace them without taking away from the item. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: Other than a couple of words that did not rhyme, the rest of the lines followed a great rhyming pattern. The poem is well written and humorous. The bickering between the help is hilarious, especially between the maid and the cook. The item is a magnificent Saint Patrick's Day poem. EXCELLENT! *Butterflyr*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Vine1**Heart**Vine2* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Bigsmile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize your work in any way. *Smile*

*Butterflyr* ERRORS: A couple of words in the entry did not rhyme. They are "bliss" and "missed". *Butterflyr*

*Mushroomb* SUGGESTIONS: Nothing I can think of other than the one mentioned above. *Mushroomb*

*Butterflyv* MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is terrific except the lines mentioned above. The imagery is superb. It is obvious how much you adore the canine despite his rabbit chasing and indulgences. I like that, for like you, I love dogs. Every stanza relays something special about the puppy. The last two sum the other stanzas up perfectly. *Butterflyv*

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Review of Doubt  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Angels in my Ear . Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to be helpful, not critical.

*Idea* ERRORS: No spelling, grammatical, or other errors were spotted. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: Just a humble opinion, but I think deleting "ever" from the second sentence in stanza two would make for a better read. I also think that using punctuation where needed in all of the lines instead of some would make for a better presentation. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: The title is perfect for the entry. The doubts felt are relayed clearly and from the heart. I liked that, although felt empathy in the apparent loss of the loss of your writing dream. As asked in the seventh stanza, mine is a definite YES. Spread those wings and set her spirit free! *Note1*

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Review of Forsaken  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Shamrock* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Bigsmile* Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The rhythm is off in some of the lines. For example, "ears", "hear", "lips", "kiss", and "play", "delays" do not rhyme, although I cannot think of how changing "hear" to hears can be done in a way that would not mean reconstruction of the entire stanza. The same applies to "play" and "delays". *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Leaf2g* WHAT I THOUGHT: Other than those mentioned above, the rhythm is terrific. Loss of passion and broken vows are expressed well, which relays emotions that come before and after one cheats on his/her spouse are relayed in a heartbreaking way. The poem is written from the heart. My heart goes out to people who endure experiences like the one in your entry. The imagery is terribly sad, yet good. *Leaf2g*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello warriormom. *Bigsmile* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Shamrock*

*Note5* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No errors were noticed, and I cannot think of anything to improve the entry. It is excellent. Having had the pleasure of reading your work before, this did not surprise me. *Note5*

*Check3* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Check3*

*Pencil* OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm is superb, the imagery great, and the emotions relayed in a way that touched my heart. The surroundings painted a picture of a childhood dream and fantasy world for children. It is easy seeing why these memories are precious to you and your sibling. I enjoyed reading the poem and hope you capture many more beautiful memories, Pat. *Pencil*

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Review of Father  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Exclaim* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Bigsmile* Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The rhyming pattern does not follow that of a traditional in the last stanza, nor the same one used in the others. "us", "us", "quiet", and "respite" are the ones mentioned. Other than that, there are no suggestions for improvement. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Shamrock* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm is great in the first three stanzas. What I liked most is the inspiration found in the entry. You did a magnificent job of relaying the loving traits of Our Father. I have no personal favorites. Every stanza is wonderful. *Shamrock*

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Review of LESSON FROM A DOG  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Heart* Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No errors were spotted, however this did not come as a surprise to me. I have read your work before, and be it inspiring or dark, it is always terrific. *Questionb*

*Flower1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Flower1*

*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm is superb and the imagery dynamite also. A poetic masterpiece of the canine was painted with words in the item. Some stanzas humorous, and some uplifting because they relay how much this animal means to you, made for a perfect entry. The last stanza sums the others up wonderfully. *Gold*

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Review of Freezing Weather  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical, spelling, or other mistakes were noticed. There are no suggestions I can think of for improving the item. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhyming pattern is superb, and the imagery spectacular. You have painted a poetic masterpiece of the seasons in my opinion. My personal favorites are the last two stanzas because I love Spring. The poem points out why I am not fond of Winter. Well written, the poem was a thorough enjoyment to read. *Butterflyr*

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Review of A Love Poem  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No errors were spotted, and there are no suggestions for improvement. The poem is lovely. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: You did a perfect job of defining the meaning of love. I agree that love is a never-ending partnership filled with hope and peace. I believe it is one of the best gifts God bestowed on His children. The poem is well written and uplifting, and brought a smile to my lips. Thank you for sharing it with us. *Butterflyr*

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Review of My Heart  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello OOT™ . Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to be critical in any way.

*Burstr* TITLE: Fits the entry perfectly. *Burstr*

*Exclaim* ERRORS: No spelling, grammatical, or other errors were spotted. *Exclaim*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: None I feel would improve the item. *Idea*

*People*CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *People*

*Starstruck* MY THOUGHTS: The emotions tugged at my heart, both the bad and good ones. The comparison of your heart being like a closet is excellent. Most of us feel similarly. I know I do. Some things are meant to be locked within, while others can be free to expose. Stanzas three through five are my favorites because I think they sum the entire poem up perfectly. *Starstruck*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Bigsmile* Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No errors were noticed, but this came as no surprise to me. I have always enjoyed reading your work.

There are no suggestions for improving the item. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: Let me begin by saying that I think the storoem would make a great story.

As for the poem, the rhyming pattern and imagery are superb. The settings are well defined also. It was easy picturing the youth and older warrior as they followed the tracks into the woods in search of the dragon. Johnny had quite an adventure, and like any youngster, an imagination to match.

The poem is written well, and ignites a readers fantasy. *Butterflyr*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Butterflyo* Hello Oldwarrior . Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Smile* Keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way.

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling, grammatical, or other errors were noticed, and I cannot think of anything I feel would improve the entry. *Questionb*

*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The rhythm is outstanding, and you did an excellent job of relaying the emotions felt by those who serve in war and those who wait for their return. The poem tugged at my heart for both servers and waiters. The last two lines sum the entry up perfectly. *Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr*

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Sherri


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