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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note1* ERRORS: No spelling, grammatical, or other mistakes were spotted. *Note1*

*Note3* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of to improve the item. *Note3*

*Note2* OVERALL OPINION: This is an exceptional place for the writing community to search for links that may help them around Writing.com. Members can find everything from Poetry forms, writing and reviewing tips, gaining exposure on the site, and much more. You did a superb job of pointing out some very useful links. I commend you on a job well done. Thank you for sharing this with the community. *Note2*

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Sherri


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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Please keep in mind that suggestions made are intended to help, not to be critical.

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: A comma should follow "I love real food and a comma replace the period after "don't swallow. "its called" should be "it's called" instead. A comma should follow "once is easy". A comma should also come after "is easy", and "but to it" be "but it". A comma should follow "various countries" as well. I hope these suggestions have helped. *Questionb*

*Mushroomr* CHARACTERS AND STORY-LINE: N/A *Mushroomr*

*Coffeeg* OVERALL THOUGHTS: Overall, the article is well written and some good points of view mentioned. The poem following the article is an excellent addition. My personal favorites are the "Types of love/food" and the poem, although it was a pleasure reading the entire article. *Coffeeg*

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Sherri


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Review of A Weaker Vessel  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Butterflyb* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader, whose intention is to help, not criticize your work in any way.

*Coffeep* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and I cannot think of anything I feel would improve the poem. *Coffeep*

*Woman* CHARACTERS AND STORY-LINE: N/A *Woman*

*Sun* OVERALL OPINION: I found the poem heartbreaking, yet well written. So much pain is expressed in the short poem. The last three lines brought tears to my eyes. It is sad knowing that others feel this way about themselves. *Sun*

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Sherri


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Review of Her Darker Side  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Butterflyo* Hello kearonfoster *Smile* Keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way.

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical, spelling, or other errors were noticed. There are no suggestions for improvement. *Questionb*

*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* OVERALL THOUGHTS: Wow, this woman does not seem to have many attributes, but many flaws, which made it questionable as to why it took you so long to expose her. After reading the poem again, I assumed it was because of the brightness you once saw. I had to ask myself why you continued seeing the woman referred to as "a fortress built upon a failing foundation" and "a creature of illusion". I assume that the brightness could not be overlooked despite her darker side. *Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Please keep in mind that suggestions made are meant to help, not to be critical in any way.

*Santahat* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Not a mistake was spotted, and there is nothing I can think of to improve the item. *Santahat*

*Stardavid* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Stardavid*

*Xmastree* OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm is fantastic, but what I like most are your views on reviews. Reviews vary like anything else, and it is my opinion that a writer should never alter his/her work unless it is to their preference. No writer should feel shame by a review as mentioned in the poem. The last two lines of the poem sum up everything. Keep the faith! *Xmastree*

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Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Snow1* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No spelling, grammatical, or other mistakes were noticed. *Snow1*

*Snow2* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Snow2*

*Snow3* OVERALL OPINION: This is a wonderful tribute to the men and women who protect and serve our country. It reads more like an article than poetry, yet the main thing is that the item makes some valid points about those who deserve honor and praise for what they do for us. The last stanza sums up the entire poem. Excellent tribute! *Snow3*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Keep in mind that suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Ornament1r* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: I think "between my lips" sounds off. Changing it to "from my lips" would make it better in my humble opinion. Being as it is used in the same sentence, I would consider changing "with you and I know" to "with you and know". A space should be placed between 4 and pm and a comma follow "being realistic". A space should also be placed between 8 and pm. A comma should follow "Four hours later". I think deleting "pull" before "open the door" would make for a better read. *Ornament1r*

*Santahat* CHARACTERS: The characters are described well, although Ru's is more in depth. *Santahat*

*Xmastree* STORY-LINE: Like the chapter read before this one, the plot is written well and good. *Xmastree*

*Ornament2g* MY OPINION: The imagery used in describing the lodge and its settings is fabulous. It is a perfect place for Ru and Myra's rendezvous.You left me wanting to read more when the two meet. *Ornament2g*

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Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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*Vine1**Heart**Vine2* Please remember that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader, whose intention is to help, not to criticize your work by any means. *Smile*

*Questiong* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: "really" can be deleted after "still can't" and still have the same effect and make for a better read in my opinion. A comma should follow "It came suddenly". A comma should also come after "message even for you". A comma should follow "Skype as usual".A period should replace the comma after "in my life" and "there" capitalized. I hope these examples have helped. *Questiong*

*Butterflyv* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: Myra and Ru are defined well, and the story-line is great. *Butterflyv*

*Hourglass* MY THOUGHTS: Ru's fear of the calls Myra made were written with realism. I liked that. Realism in stories like these is essential in my opinion. The emotions of both characters are relayed just as well, another important factor. The settings are described well also. I enjoyed the story and cannot wait to read the next chapter. *Hourglass*

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Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello kat . WELCOME TO WRITING.com! *Bigsmile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Peace* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Being as it was used in the same sentence beforehand, I think deleting "had" before "left to avoid" would make for a better read and still have the same effect. Placing spaces between paragraphs would make for a better presentation in my humble opinion. "few belonging" should be "few belongings" instead. "cotton wood" should be "cottonwood". Others like these noticed throughout the short story. I hope these examples have helped. *Peace*

*Gold* CHARACTERS: Bill and his family are described well. *Gold*

*Flowerb* PLOT: The story-line is terrific. I enjoyed it because it was realistic and wholesome. *Flowerb*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL OPINION: The settings are defined as well as the characters. As mentioned above, I found the story uplifting and written with realism. I liked that. The paragraphs about the hills and peanut butter were my personal favorites. I wish you the best with your entry. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

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Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* Please remember that suggestions made are intended to be helpful, not criticize your work by any means. *Smile*

*Clock* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No errors were spotted, and I cannot think of anything I feel would improve the item. *Clock*

*Hourglass* CHARACTERS AND STORY-LINE: N/A *Hourglass*

*Peace* OVERALL OPINION: You did a sensational job of writing about the joys of the holidays. "There's no place like home for the holidays" sprang to mind while I read the poem. I could not agree more that the atmosphere written about is the greatest gift of all. I thoroughly enjoyed the uplifting poem. The best to you!*Peace*

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Happy holiday wishes,
Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Star* WELCOME TO WRITING.com! *Bigsmile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to be critical in any way. *Heart*

*Idea* ERRORS: A comma should follow "roll around i8n it". A period should replace the comma after "somewhe'", and "keep" capitalized. A comma should follow "have to move". "and dive on his back" should be "and he dives on his back". A comma should come after "an alligator". *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None other than the ones mentioned above. *Reading*

*Note2* WHAT I ENJOYED: You did an excellent job of keeping the story fast-paced. That is not easy for a tale so short. I liked the use of the country-like language as well. It suited the characters. You are off to a super start with the story in my opinion. Good luck! *Note2*

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Sherri
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Review of The Gift of Love  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions for improvement. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm is perfect, and the message just as superb. You are right about love being fabulous. I consider it the greatest gift of all. The imagery used in defining your emotions is simply fantastic. I had no personal favorites. The entire poem is well written and inspiring. *Butterflyr*

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Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Butterflyo* Hello COUNTRYMOM-JUST REMEMBER ME . Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Smile* Keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way.

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No errors were noticed, but this came as no surprise to me being as I have had the pleasure of reading your work before. There is nothing I can think of that would improve the entry. It is wonderful! *Questionb*

*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The rhythm is excellent, and the imagery outstanding. You did a sensational job of defining the true meaning of Christmas. Counting your blessings instead of drowning in self pity made the poem uplifting. It would be great if everyone did that. The last three stanzas sum the piece up superbly. *Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr*

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Sherri
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Review of The Garden Statue  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical, spelling, or other errors were noticed. There are no suggestions for improving the entry. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm is outstanding, and the imagery just as superb. From the first to last stanza, the story-like entry is well written and a pleasure to read. What the statue represented was my personal favorite, both sadness and smiles. GREAT POEM! *Butterflyr*

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Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions to offer for improving the entry. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm is excellent, and so is the imagery. You have painted a poetic masterpiece about the mythological Hercules, Hera, and the others. Both poems are outstanding. I love mythology, and as I said before, this is a superb entry. *Butterflyr*

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Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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*Butterflyo* Hello CJ Reddick . Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Smile* Keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way.

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The rhyming pattern is off in some of the lines. For example, "known" and "stones", "ebbed" and "web", and "restored" and "more" do not rhyme. *Questionb*

*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The poem is well written and a good reminder of what a great man the Son of God was. The authors notes following the poem are an added asset. Great poem! *Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr*

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Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The rhythm is off in some of the lines. For example, "amend" and "pen" and "span" and "planned" do not rhyme. *Questionb*

*Flower1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Flower1*

*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: Overall the rhythm is good. The imagery is also super. It is easy picturing the girl and the machine. The comparison to the two is fantastic. What a great tribute to your friend! *Gold*

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Sherri
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Review of His Hand in Mine  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Please keep in mind that suggestions made are meant to help, not to be critical in any way.

*Santahat* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No errors were noticed, and there is nothing I can think of that would improve the poem. It is sensational! *Santahat*

*Stardavid* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Stardavid*

*Xmastree* OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm and imagery are outstanding. It saddened me reading about you not knowing your father and conjuring up an image of him in your mind. The last stanza touched my heart as did the image before the start of the poem. I am elated you have the little hand to hold now. *Xmastree*

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Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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*Santahat* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical, spelling, or other mistakes were spotted. The only suggestion I have to offer is that I feel more detail should be added to Lyle's brother's demise. *Santahat*

*Snowman* CHARACTERS AND STORY-LINE: Overall, the characters are defined well. Other than wishing there was more detail about Lyle's brother's death, the plot is great. *Snowman*

*Stardavid* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The story is well written. There were no slow parts, and the plot mysterious. You did an amazing job with the story-line using only several hundred words. That is not an easy task. I enjoyed reading your work, and wish you the best. *Stardavid*

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Review of Nana  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Heart* Hello Rayquan . WELCOME TO WRITING.com! *Smile* Suggestions made are only my opinion and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Idea* ERRORS: No spelling or other errors were spotted. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: "I love you" and "I hare you" are used too much in my opinion. Just a humble suggestion, but I would consider deleting some of them. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm is great, and the emotions expressed clearly. I liked that. You did a super job of relaying how one can feel love and hatred for an individual. Most of the time, it is my belief that we do not truly feel hatred, simply pain that convinces us at times like the ones written about in the poem that is felt within the heart and mind making us feel like we hate the one who hurt us. *Star*

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Sherri
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Butterflyv* Hello RobinRenee Welcome to Writing.com! *Smile* Any suggestions made by this humble reader are only an opinion meant to help, not to criticize your work in any way.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical, spelling, or other mistakes were noticed, and the only suggestion I have to offer is to keep writing these sensational, cheery poems. *Pencil*

*Note1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Note1*

*Check2* MY THOUGHTS: The rhyming pattern is awesome, and so is the imagery. You did a wonderful job of painting a poetic work of art about the upcoming holiday season. You made even the tedious tasks sound like fun. The poem is well written and uplifting. VERY WELL DONE! *Check2*

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Sherri
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Review of She Saw Herself  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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*Butterflyo* Hello Kortney Rae . Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . *Smile* Keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way.

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Just a humble opinion, but putting the lines into stanzas would make for a better presentation. The rhyming pattern is odd in some of the lines. For example, "bird" and "wood" do not rhyme. *Questionb*

*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The poem begins sad, yet somewhat uplifting in the finale. You did an excellent job of using nature to describe your emotions. Well done! *Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr*

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Sherri
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Review of Utitled  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No errors were noticed with the exception that I would use punctuation where needed in all of the lines being as it is used in some. *Questionb*

*Flower1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N./A *Flower1*

*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm is outstanding, and the imagery just as good. My heart went out to you when reading the entry. Losing a loved one leaves one with the many emotion relayed in the poem. I send my condolences, and hope you know He is always there for us during times like this. *Gold*

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Blessings,
Sherri
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Review of EVERLASTING LIFE  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical, spelling, or other mistakes were spotted, and I cannot think of anything that would improve the item. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm and imagery are excellent. What I liked most are the feelings expressed about faith in God despite life's trials. The final stanza says it all. *Butterflyr*

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Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Exclaim* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Only one error was spotted. "and its that" should be "and it's that". Other than that, there are no suggestions to offer for improvement. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm is outstanding, and the imagery just as good. My personal favorites are the lines comparing the changes we make along with those of the seasons. The last four lines are inspiring. I agree that He will be there for us through the "winter times" just as He is through the others. Wonderful poem! *Butterflyr*

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Sherri
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