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I used a template for all of my reviews. I will comment on plot, characters, scene/setting, grammar, and anything else that comes to mind.
I'm good at...
short stories, novels, and blog
Favorite Genres
dark fantasy and horror However, I will read anything that is similar to a VC Andrews story. I also like any books about cooking.
Least Favorite Genres
romance, comedy, mystery, science fiction
Favorite Item Types
short stories, novels, blogs, anything about cooking
Least Favorite Item Types
poetry, campfires
I will not review...
Romance, action-adventure, mysteries/thiller, science fiction
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Review of Embrace  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I am here to bestoy an act of joy on behalf of the Showering Acts of Joy Forum. I loved the soft erotic tone to this poem. The last three stanzas really stood out because I could feel the emotions pouring out. I liked the flow too. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Review of SIR TOM THUMBE  
Review by very thankful
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Here is the first of the reviews you won in my auction. I hope this review helps!

Good News
1. This is a delightful story. I really enjoyed reading it.


Suggestions
1. "Queenie is some head nurse, and a climbsy one to boot." Remove the comma.
2. Remove all adverbs, they are telling instead of showing.
3. Do not start a sentence with a coordinating conjunction.

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Review of Chitter  
Review by very thankful
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Trick or Treat! Thank you for entering the Sister of Mercy's Horror Chapter contest. This was a good start to a novel. I liked the way you described the scenery and how you portrayed your characters. The ending makes me want to read more. The only thing I would suggest is to go back and edit for a few comma errors. Thanks for entering and good luck.

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Review by very thankful
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Trick or Treat! Here I am one last time to review an item from your port on behalf of Showering Acts of Joy, Angel Army, and WDC Frontliners. I found this story so delightful. I love stories about leprechauns and other faerie tales. You told this story perfectly. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Review of DEAR DIARY  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Trick or Treat! I am here again to browse your port and give you a review on behalf of Showering Acts of Joy, Angel Army, and WDC Frontliners. This was a great tale to read on Halloween. It would make a pretty decent script too if you were to expand the story and change the format. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Review of FIRST DIVE  
Review by very thankful
Rated: E | (4.5)
Trick or Treat! It's me again, here to review more from your port on behalf of Showering Acts of Joy, Angel Army, and WDC Frontliners. You really know how to tell a story. I could picture everything so clearly. I like your casual style of writing. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Review of CRITIQUE  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Trick or Treat! I am here to review your story on behalf of Showering Act of Joy, Angel Army, and WDC Frontliners. I loved reading your humourous short story. Except for two minor comma errors the story was perfect. I would have freaked out if I had seen a rat on my face. Thanks for sharing this and write on!

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Review of Softly!  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Trick or Treat! I am here again to give you a treat and review your poem on behalf of Showering Acts of Joy, Angel Army, and WDC Frontliners. I loved the romantic tone to this poem. It was romantic without being sappy. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Review of Write On  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Trick or Treat! I am here to review your poem on behalf of Showering Acts of Joy, Angel Army, and WDC Frontliners. It's so much fun to read acrostic poetry. The second stanza stood out to me the most because no matter how hard the day is I always want to write. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Review by very thankful
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Trick or Treat! I am here again to review another story idea on behalf of Showering Acts of Joy, Angel Army, and WDC Frontliners. Vampires in space, what a neat idea! The vampire angel reminds me of the show I've been watching called True Blood. Thanks for sharing this and good luck with it.

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Review of Time Warped  
Review by very thankful
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Trick or Treat! I am reviewing your story idea on behalf of Showering Acts of Joy, Angel Army, and WDC Frontliners. I like this story idea. I think it has many possiblities. It made me think of a sci-fi version of Rip Van Winkle, how he went to sleep and woke up twenty years later after everything had changed. Thanks for sharing this and good luck with it.

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Review of She's A Rock  
Review by very thankful
Rated: E | (4.0)
I found the Ghost thief! "Invalid Item"  Trick or Treat, my friend! Here is a review courtesy of showering acts of joy, angel army, and frontliners. I really enjoyed reading this poem. It made me think of my mother and how she has been my rock throughout my life. I like the creative format you use. I have never heard of a double nonet, so this was a treat to read something new. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Review by very thankful
Rated: E | (4.0)
Trick or Treat! I have come to visit your port to give you a review on behalf of Showering Acts of Joy, Angel Army, and WDC Frontliners. I love reading haikus and poems about nature. The way you began the poem was my favorite part of it because it got my attention. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.

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Review by very thankful
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is an interesting piece on blogging that I came across in your port. I thought about my own writing as I read this. I keep an online journal and make public entries in it at least twice a week or more. I could really relate to topics two and three. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Review of Gimme That Check!  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I came across this in your port looking for something to review for the Angel Army. I felt the same way about my ambitions when I was in my teen, just give me the money. Now, after having twenty-seven poems published, I just like having my words in print to be shared with other readers. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Review by very thankful
Rated: E | (4.0)
I am here to shower you with an act of joy with this review from the Showering Acts of Joy Forum. This is a simple poem that captures the emotions of a person caught up in a moment. I liked your use of alliteration in the fourth line, and your use of repetition toward the end. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Review of It's a Surprise  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I am the Angel here again to review another poem in your port. God does have his own plans for us, and his mysterious timing in revealing them. I like the way you relay God's word about this topic. It is very refreshing! I really love the fact that you begin and end the poem the same way. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Review by very thankful
Rated: E | (4.5)
I am one of the Angel Army here today to review a poem from your port. I was so moved by this poem. Yes, we often are caught up in life and forget what it means to be a child of God. I loved your use of alliteration in this poem. This flow was nice too. Thanks for sharing and write on.

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Review of The White Board  
Review by very thankful
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I am here to shower you with an act of joy on behalf of the Showering Acts of Joy Forum. I loved reading your blog. I especially enjoyed your entries about the poetry reading and the one with the pic of your dog, Bear. He reminded me of a little dog I had when I was a child. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Review of I Notice  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I am here to shower you with an act of joy on behalf of the Showering Acts of Joy Forum. This is such a beautiful poem. This made me melt as I read it. I loved the way the lines flowed back and forth. You made good use of repetition too. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Review by very thankful
Rated: E | (4.5)
Here I am again, an angel from the Angel Army to review another poem from your port. I can relate to this poem. I have felt this way at different times in my life. I have often seen people walk right by me, and they treat me like I am not even there. After a while, I got to a point where I didn't speak above a whisper for awhile. Thankfully I got over it. Thanks for sharing this. It meant a lot!

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Review of I Am Not Here  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am an angel from the Angel Army reviewing a poem from your port today. This is a wonderful short, but powerful poem about how God gives us blessings that we take for granted. Yes, they all do belong to him, and we all do tend to forget that! Thanks for sharing this and write on!

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Review of Namaste  
Review by very thankful
Rated: E | (4.0)
Here I am again to shower you with an act of joy on behalf of the Showering Acts of Joy Forum. This poem makes good use of repetition and has good flow. I liked the imagery throughout the poem. The last stanza was the one that stood out to me the most. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Review by very thankful
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Here I am again begin an angel and lingering a while longer in your port. That was some kind of dream you had. It sounds like some of the ones I have. I think the dream is telling you that you do not value yourself enough. This is just my interpretation. Thanks for sharing and write on!

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Review by very thankful
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I saw your port featured on the Angel Army Review Forum and thought I would be an angel and review some pieces for you. Blogs are so cool to read. I liked being able to read how what another author goes through when it comes to getting published, to me the waiting after sending off a submission is the worst. I loved seeing the pics of your son. He is so cute! Thanks for sharing this and write on!

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