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Review by Alexi
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Hullaballow, I am reviewing your "E) 3. We Are All Mad Here in "Wonderland Adventures
I just love this, what a great poem you have turned your thinking upside down and inside out.
Sheep behind the checkout and goats stacking shelves, your imagination has gone all the way to wonderland.

A topsy Turvy day has great potential and in a children's book, it would cause delight, giggles and so much fun, well done.
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Review of Promises  
Review by Alexi
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Deziray and welcome to our writing corner on the web, WDC. I am reviewing your Poem "Promises For the first reading of your writing craft, I know that you are a deep and lovely woman who feels and loves deeply. It was beautiful and what a tribute to what you feel for this man you call your husband. Treasure him always and may your days be happy even when the tide of storms comes, battle through, and come out safe in the knowledge that you love each other as this moment in time tells us.
Well done and may we see much more of your talent.

Little notes: And let’s face it our wondering souls have (wandered} into each other’s lives for a reason. You have wondered?

Thank you for letting me into your world.
Alexi *Heart*
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Review by Alexi
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Carly, we meet again in the halls of! I write in 2021 Now that is a coincidence.
I am reviewing your poem "The Gift of Laughter and Fun
In desolate and quiet times folk has the hunger for fun. You have a fantasy take on what's happening in our world today. We see people flouting rules during a pandemic time and going underground to party and have some fun. He gets caught and pleads his case, I see a solution to this madness.
Humans were not made to be locked away but to breathe the joy of living in peace with one another.
A nice write.
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Review of Missing  
Review by Alexi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good morning Ani, I am reviewing your poem "Missing
This poem gave me an injection of knowledge from the view of a person who had lost a limb. The stark reality hit me when I saw from the mind of one who had this missing limb. I have had my tragedies and losses in this life but have never seen them from this point of view. The lens of limbless person thoughts stopped me for a moment to see as he/she sees. My own injuries are healing and time will repair the damage but getting into the skin of this person's story gave me new waves of thought. Insight is an amazing gift and you used it here with your writing.
Alexi *Heart*
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for entry "Beginning Again
Review by Alexi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Carly, I am reviewing your poem about 'Beginning again' "Beginning Again I found this poem a refreshing start to January pulling off the coat of the past year and entering the new year with optimistic thoughts.
casting your net into the ocean of the days to come and, pulling out the novel beginnings. delightful and refreshing.
Alexi *Thinker*
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Review of The Monsters Know  
Review by Alexi
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
"The Monsters Know Is a great poem and yes, the monsters inside know Mwah!
Welcome to WDC Euphoria, you'll fit in nicely. Loved the poem.
Alexi *Grasshopper*
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Review of Corona  
Review by Alexi
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Anni, I am reviewing your poem "Corona
You exceptionally characterized the accuracy of Corona. The king of standstill most certainly has brought the world to its knees as never before in our lifetime. Laughter hides the slaughter, so direct and such knife pointedly true. The three blind mice, Ignorance, stupidity, and denial of what is happening, causing the spread of this invisible silent killer.

A good first poem Anni. I personally would not put capitals on every line, but that's just me. I enjoyed reading this and look forward to more.

Alexi *Heart*
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Review of The Storm  
Review by Alexi
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Sumojo I am reviewing your story "The Storm

Wow! is a good start. You r have been privileged to travel to many countries after your children have flown the nest, I know how this feels as I did the same thing.

First, the terror attacks in India which the whole world watched on TV. Then the Tsunami on the 26th December 2004 which killed many souls and changed so many lives. Both of these disasters you missed by hours or days.

Then your flight from Manila to the island of Cebu and your anguish that it might end in disaster because of the storm, weather, but intersession came along and saved you all from an impending disaster once more.

This and many other small insignificant miracles are performed in our life every day. some we don't even notice and others that we raise our spirit and thank our Lord that he sent Angels to lift us up and stop us from hurting our feet on the stones. What a father we have!

Your story tells of these remarkable near misses as you traveled and I can relate to them from my own near-misses that God saved me from.
One small error ( n the light of day should be In)
I enjoyed reading your story and gave thanks with a grateful heart to our God for his mercy on your lives.

(Psalm 91 says it all, it is one of my favorite Psalms, the verses, A thousand may fall at your side, and ten thousand at your right hand; but it shall not come near you, only with your eyes shall you look.)

Alexi *Heart*



















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Review of Dear Me  
Review by Alexi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Applaud, 👀👌 well, did you achieve those goals in 2003? I believe you have exceeded them. You are a star. *Starb* and your in the newsletter this week Woop!
Lexi *Hug1**hug**Hug2*
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Review of THAT IS WHAT I AM  
Review by Alexi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
"THAT IS WHAT I AM This was a nice personification of a boot. A clever move there, I have my favorites a pair of old sandals who have never let me down, never hurt my feet, and keep strong in all journeys and through the mire even dug into mud, I have washed them off and they smile back every time. Nice take SB.
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Review by Alexi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Lol, Thank you for the laugh, and what an eye-opener, all the people who store, pack and deliver our gifts are Elves. It was fun to read and a nice bit of light entertainment for all and to all a goodnight as they scurry home to be with their Elf families on a cold winter's night. PS Glad, you got your goods."All Through DepartmentStore.Com You are back and it's nice, I hope you had a nice cozy Christmas day and some good food. *Hug1**hug**Hug2*
Alexi *Heart*
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Review by Alexi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, TJ. what a delicious story. I was hooked right to the end.PS sounds like you had a nice weekend."How Pumpkin Spice Came to Be
I've never had pumpkin pie, I make a good apple and cinnamon pie. I do like the Turkey humor lol. Have a fun Thanksgiving weekend.
Alexi *Hug1**hug**Hug2*
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Review by Alexi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for your testimony.
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Review of CCRD  
Review by Alexi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Amen.
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Review of JOY IN CHRIST  
Review by Alexi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Shout it from the mountain tops scripture
"Shout it, go on and scream it from the mountains, go on and tell it to the masses, that He is God. If only they knew the gift that God has for everyone, they too would shout it from the mountain tops. Prayer opens heaven.
Amen.
Blessings Brother in Christ our Lord.
Alexi [e:heart}
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Review by Alexi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Lovina... What a delightful story I am reviewing for you and so worth first prize. I even believe you could put drawings with this and make it a children's storybook. I do hope you do as it is beautiful.
"Dora the Scarecrow
Alexi *Heartp*

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Review by Alexi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well said Jenny.
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Review of Sunset  
Review by Alexi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Gervic, I am reviewing your poem "Sunset
You truly painted the picture of Sunset with your carefully chosen words in this poem.

I felt at peace and sat on the beach taking in your descriptions of the scene.

Gulls shoot like arrows piercing through crimson skies
They leave the fields in a rush and raucous byes.
I lie on the strand and watch the shift of scene
Of nature's grandest display in a widescreen.

Tiny folds... an expression of water shushing gently in the evenings close. Beautiful.

Tickles your feet like a breath from the breeze Awe.

Grammatically no problems

Credit goes to the writer

Well written and beautiful Gervic.
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Review by Alexi
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Penny, as promised I am reviewing your first poem "The winter has come Its a great start.
Sounds like you prefer the warmth of Autumn to winter. Hiking and crushing leaves beneath your feet, I like that. Lol, I know how you fell having to dress in layers it does keep the cold out though.

A nice poem expressing your feeling about the seasonal changes between Autumn and winter written in freestyle.

Looking forward to reading more of your work Penny.

Kind thoughts
Alexi
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Review by Alexi
Rated: E | (5.0)
(Put God first in everything you do) are the words that remind me every morning. I read your blog article GB, and find it interesting. HE never ceases to amaze me each new day. If we go our own way before consulting our Father then like a naughty child we can get into trouble.

I am always reminded when the men dragged a woman who committed adultery to Jesus and told him she should be stoned...

Jesus didn't answer them straight away, instead, he wrote with a stick on the ground for a bit. I believe he was in a talk with His Father about the situation. Then Jesus looked up and told the mob that he who hadn't sinned should throw the first stone and you know what happened. None of the mob were left and Jesus told the woman Mary Magdalin to go and sin no more.

Jesus asked our Father what to do and this is such a lesson to us. The devil prowls around seeking who he can devour but we have a God who loves us and we MUST consult him every day before we go and make the day.

It was an interesting read JB

Kind blessings
Alexi *Heart*
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Review of P15  
Review by Alexi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Peek. Ok, ok, I am backing off. It just looks interesting lol. Have a great day SM.
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Review by Alexi
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Good afternoon Aldrich Welcome to WDC. I am no aware who you are as you have not set up your biography. I am reviewing your short story "Heir of the Land of Tears

I was captivated from almost the beginning and found this an interesting start to what could be quite a story unfolding.

Your character is held captive by a male person and she is planning her escape. I would like to see where this story could go.

Grammatically it has no problems and your writing is complementary to the author.

I hope your are enjoying WDC as we are family here.

A great start, I would love to know more about the person behind this interesting writing.

Kind regards
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Review of Kynance  
Review by Alexi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Beholden, congratulations on your win. After reading your piece about Kynance Cove near Helston it pulled at the strings of my heart. I have been mostly all over Cornwall for many years it has been my vacation home, but I must visit this cove next time. It does sound like one of Cornwalls Jewels.

Thank you for sharing this.
Kind regards
Alexi*Heart*
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Review of Blinded by love  
Review by Alexi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Sumojo, this is a review of your short fiction. "Blinded by love

How tragic for your character to have blindness with the way it happened. Then there is her boyfriend, she is so excited to introduce him to her family. Next, you bring in the punch he is wanted by the police, that was a surprise ending.

I enjoyed reading your work and compliments to the author.

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Review of Alone  
Review by Alexi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Lilli J --- I am reviewing your poem/story "Alone
Well, where do I start, maybe wipe away the tears of my heart? You poured your soul into this poem and I felt your weakness.

It is a sinking, drowning spirit that wrote this piece and I applaud the character for the reality of her feelings, nothing left to give blending with scared feelings.

A truly good writer and I applaud the author.

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