Hello, there!!! I really enjoyed this piece. I liked your descriptions, and the length of the poem. The only error I noticed was an I that hadn't been capitalized. But everything else was excellent!!
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Hello, there!!!! Interesting piece here but I enjoyed it!!! It can be hard to write sometimes but why not write a poem about nothing! It's perfect!!! I like the length of this as well. I especially liked stanza number 3! Great job here!!
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Hello, there!!! I really liked this piece! I'm not sure if this reads as a poem, more like a short story maybe. But I do like what you wrote. I like the way it reads as well. Good job on this!!!!!
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Hello, there!!! Wow!!!!! The title of this piece pulled me in, and I am happy I read it!!! This piece was absolutely beautiful and you did a splendid job on the descriptions. It reads so well and the flow is nice. I love the nice long length of it. I especially love stanza number 11!! Great job on this! Its amazing!!!
Hello, there! I can definitely see how this was written out of anger. But it truly describes love gone wrong. I really enjoyed reading this. You kept it just short enough. Great job on this!!!!
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Hello, there!! I'm assuming this was for a contest from the description. I really enjoyed this story. You packed a lot into this small space. I liked your characters and I really felt them. Great job on this!!!
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Hello, there!!! Wow! The title of this piece made me interested and then I was sucked in for the ride!! Great job on this!! The flow is nice and the descriptions are very vivid. It pulls you in from start to finish. I don't see any errors!
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Hello, there!!! Wow. This was intense to read. Your descriptions are very accurate. I actually work at a center for people with Alzheimers so I have been around it a lot. It's a hard thing to go through. Excellent job on this piece.
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Hello, there!!!! I really liked this piece. It was short but it got its message across very well. I like the flow of it and it reads well. I don't see any errors on it! So great job!!
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Hello, there!! Wow!! This was a great read!! If it was for a contest I hope you won!! The start of the piece instantly pulls you in and keep you going!! The characters are so well written. Fantastic job on this one!!
Hello, there!!!! This is a really nice piece to read. I like how it flows and reads nicely. I liked your descriptions as well!! I really like the third stanza, it stands out to men especially!!!
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Hello, there!!!!! First off, this is well written and has a strong start and finish. Your characters are good and believable. It's got good background too!! Great job with the whole thing!!
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Hello, there!!! Wow! This was a long story but definitely was worth the read!!!!! It was well written and very enjoyable. The ending was very good as well!! Great job on this!!!
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Hello, there!!! This title caught my eye because who doesn't love fall. I like what you have, it describes it pretty perfectly. Though I do think you could add some more punctuation to it.
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Hello, there!!! I love poetry that is short and sweet and yours is exactly that!! It flows nice as well! And I don't see any errors!!! Great job on this!!
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Hello, there!!! I love the start of this piece especially, even though the whole thing was fantastic. Your writing is beautiful and well put! It was longer than I expected, but a great read!!
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Hello, there!!! Wow. This poem sent chills down my spine, especially that second stanza. Absolutely beautiful!! I truly hope you won this contest! You deserve it!!
Hello, there!!! Wow! This is an intense article. You've did a great job writing it and it's very accurate. I enjoyed reading what you had to say. As an avid lover of video games, I completely agree with what you say. Good job here!!!
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Hello, there!! I like the subject you breached, because it's an important one. And not enough people talk about it. Your piece is well written and I don't see any errors. Great job on this!!
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Hello, there!!! I really love this piece, it perfectly sums up the feeling of reading and owning lots of books. I especially love the last stanza! I don't see anything wrong with this!
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