Nicely written details and the couple are flirting and the woman being coy and denying her feelings. Neat romantic sentiments and overtures. A good style. The couple dancing and kissing and the woman finally admitting her feelings. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters. A guy wanting to build a spaceship and he is doing this for a woman he loves. He had got lost in the fog and rather it paid off or not is debatable. Good characters and neat imagery and good descriptions. I wonder if there will be a part 2. This draws the reader in. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. God guides us. Glory is above the earth. A good line and peaceful thought. Inspiring. Giving us strength and power. Some good reflections. S good style and creative. Enlightening. A nice devotional. Beautifully crafted. Always: Megan
Some bad events can make time stand still. Remembering bad events does that. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Looks like you spent time with this. A good style and easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern pulls the words together and rounds this out with a good flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. The poor crabs and other sea fish we eat. Some good reflections and some sad ones. A good style and looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and rounds this out with a good flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
This is interesting and sometimes we feel like we are in an ocean drowning trying to solve life's problems. Some good details. Creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. A good style and easy to follow. A sea of darkness. Sad. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sometimes, we think the world is all about money. Debts. Stock markets. The mint. A good style and food for thought. A good style and looks like you spent time with this. Creative and colorful. A good scenario with well chosen words. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sounds like a nice spring day. Easy to follow and some good reflections. Chickadees. Bluejays. Trees full of gossip. Birds do get noisey. Bird watchers pick up on this. Creative and colorful. I smiled as I read this. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A nice style and children trying to stsrt a band or a marching thing. This is uplifting and inspiring. A good style and easy to follow with well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Looks like it paid off in the end. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Walking into a bakery is always nice and inviting. A mathematician and a bakery thing. Not sure I get it. This draws the reader in. A good style and easy to follow. A bread hill. Good call. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Flimsy excuses but some excuses are very important and real. Paper too thin to write on. Light sweater not warm enough. A good style and nice scenario. Looks like you spent time with this and put some thought into this. Easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern times this out nicely. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Weep no more would be nice. Some good reflections and some sad ones . Easy to follow and a nice play on words. A good scenario. Creative and colorful. Walk in shadows of sadness. Some well chosen words. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We do need to forgive. God expects it and we will feel better about things. Easy to follow and a good style. We do lie to ourselves. Easy to follow and food for thought. A good style and a nice play on words. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Before the rain. We have al kind of thoughts when it rains. Sometimes, the rain will make things better or worse. Missing a friend who left. Thats rough. A good style and easy to follow. We have to go foward without that friend. Well defined and creative. The words play out well. A good presentation. Always: Megan
A nice short passage. Golden lights. Fifty years of flight. I like that opening line. A good scenario and easy to follow. Some good reflections. Love's light us always important. A good scenario. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
It is weird to eake up and find out you have been asleep for sux days and wwrevon a breathing tube. Me! So, I understand this woman being in a coma for 20 years and not being aware of it. She wants to get back to her dream life. Easy to follow with well rounded characters. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
The lady buying four turkeys. She could have cooked them for others or given them to families who needed them. Maybe cook one and invite a family over. Food for thought. It is sad that some people have all the money. Easy to follow and well defined. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and flat tires are so annoying. I had seven in a year once. Nails from the roof at work from an old building and I had to park in back. This holds the reader's interest. Poor road kill or was it? Good characters and suitable dialogue. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a family of foxes that live live humans. Tough decisions. We all have those in life. The foxes seem real and Clara seems to have memory lapses. The father fox is sad about sending the mother fox away. You feel his sad emotions. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Good words of wisdom. Food for thought. Your devotion to God and Jesus shows. This reads like a prayer and this is encouraging. Harps of Heaven will sound beautiful. Beautifully stated. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
We talked about wisdom in Bible Study a lot and I try to understand wisdom. Nicely written details and good reflections. Looks like you spent time with this and you reflected on your life and the good things that happen. Well defined and looks like you spent time with this. God Bless you. Always: Megan
Congress needs to do a lot of praying. At least they gave us National Prayer Day which we need. Nicely written details and food for thought. God is still here. I have to remind myself of this each and every day. We pray and worship. Good reflections. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and too bad we couldn't have had Eden and Paradise all our life. Food for thought and we always take the Lord's word to heart as we worship him and get through each and every day. Easy to follow. Some good reflections. Well defined and beautifully structured. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Wanting to be with someone everywhere. Time and circumstances won't always let us it seems. A good style and easy to follow. Some good reflections. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
A short poem but they say a few words says a lot and you read between the lines. A picture says a thousand words. Well chosen words and lovely reflections. A good style and easy to follow. Being beautiful and wonderful. Yes, you are. Great concept. Beautifully crafted. Always: Megan
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