Nicely written details and a good word flow. A nice style and easy to follow. This holds the reader's interest Yamato. A neat poetry format type poem. Spring time in Korea. A forest path. Some good lines. Lovely reflections. I felt like I was there. A good job of writing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and seems like you had a lot of fun raising ducks and their babies. The one duck being a body guard and watch dog. One part of the story and other parts, I appreciate the humor. Two wild cats adopting you and having babies. Cute. A nice style and a good presentation. I happen to like ducks. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we meet people of different walks of life as well as those with different Christian values. Riding on a bus. In Hong Kong. A woman clasping her cross necklace. Good call. A neat style and easy to follow. Cheerful poem. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
This sounds like the beginning of a novel. Little Johnny throwing rocks in a junk pile, hearts an explosion and finds a baby alien. He brings it in the house. His drunken mother thinks it is a dog. She passes out and just hope it doesn't do naughty on the carpet. Nicely written details and this draws the reader in. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I appreciate the humor in this. A nice scenario and good presentation. Always: Megan
I remember playing Hide and seek. It was fun to be hid and not be found. Nicely written details and congrats on expecting your first child. Sounds like you will be happy with this event. A good hiding place. You may not want to tell your child about it. He or she may hide from you. A good style and easy to follow. Well defined. Best wishes. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and looks like Jaren sees fairies and dragons for real so he is able to write a good fantasy story. He lives it and sees it. This holds the reader's interest. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A cute scenario. Looks like this was fun to write. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I lost my father four months ago. This poem is sad with sad reflections. Easy to follow and creative . A good style and nice scenario. Looks like you spent time with this and put some thought into this. A good style. A nice presentation. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. It would be nice to see the world in a positive light. Some good reflections in the first few lines. Reality. Columbine, Sandy Hooks. Soldiers off to war. Not a good sight. Food for thought. A good style and easy to follow. Hopefully, brother love will win out. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and tbis inventor msking a robot drone man that can do tbings a human can't. This holds the reader's interest. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. The robot servant in impressive and can break a person's bones it seems . Creative and colorful. This holds the reader's interest. I wouldn't criss Manakin or his creator. Well defined. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
A good message in this short passage. We all need people to listen to us andvwe need to listen as well. Nicely written details and a good scenario. A nice style. Folks do analyze us. Easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern comes into place and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I never understood the Mona Lisa portrait. I didn't think it was pretty. A girl being named after Mona Lisa. I guess she didn't get it, either. Easy to follow with well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Some interesting views on the young girl's part. A nice style and this holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder . Some women are gorgeous and don't care about the anyone. Some are not beautiful and care about everyone and the world. Well chosen words and a good scenario. A neat style. A good presentation. I think we are all beautiful in one way or another. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I used to put fireflies in a jar but let them go. I used to get snails out of the ditch but they were nasty. So, I let them go. This is heart warming and the aunt telling the little boy to be nice to the fireflies and he agrees to set them free. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Reaching out for an old love. Emailing and hoping and waiting. A newvl start is always nice. Easy to follow and creative. You feel the anxiety of the person waiting and hoping. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair i enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I had a degree but needed more education to be promoted. I was always taking required online classes at my nursing job. I understand your views in this poem. Drones. Excellent zones. Love what ee do. Good call. Creative. Food for thought. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern completes this and gives this a good flair. I enjoyed reading your viees as they were well expressed. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I love when a cat or dog gets a forever home. We do love our pets. Easy to follow and heart warming. Hearing a bell and seeing a black cat who wanted a friend and help. A good style and beautifully stated. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I guess our minds do have recess. We take time to reflect and think what if. A good style and easy to follow. Food for thought. Some good elements of love and neat sentiments. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and sums it up. Well defined and I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Wind stories. Good views about bring the eind. We could fly with the birds. See wild animals of Africa would be nice. Good descriptions and neat imagery. This holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a nice flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sounds like you had a great time and win some money but sadly couldn't be in the finals due to illness. Some good inspiring words and lovely reflections. A good style and easy to follow. Well defined. Sounds like you have talent. Beautifully stated. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Armchair athletes. I used to be like that with NASCAR. Watching TV is the best way to cheer for a team. Creative and colorful. I appreciate the humor in this. Looks like you spent time with this. Cheerful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and poets and story writers write poems and story from different angles as well as different prospectives. This holds the reader's interest and has a good style. Scenery and imagination play a good part when it comes to writing. Looks like you spent time with this. Some good views. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and Michigan and Indiana get the worst weather. Snow and wind. Michigan's weather is worst then Indiana. Good descriptions and easy to follow. Snow does make the land beautiful if you don't have to drive in it. A good style and this holds the reader's intertest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and 22 dancing cows. They act like they are human. They have an audience and are well rounded characters. It is nice when animals act like humans. Easy to follow and this holds the reader's interest. Cute and creative. I enjoyed reading this. Impressive. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some people love sports and this is about baseball. Easy to follow and a good style. The love for baseball is well expressed. Creative and well defined. Looks like you spent time with this. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and the couple are flirting and the woman being coy and denying her feelings. Neat romantic sentiments and overtures. A good style. The couple dancing and kissing and the woman finally admitting her feelings. A good presentation. Always: Megan
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