Nicely written details and a good word flow. Death is always so sad. Some sad reflections. You can feel the emotions and sadness. Well chosen words and a good scenario along with a nice style. A good flair. Creative and colorful. Uplifting and enlightening. A great presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A nice style. Good imagery and you can see the Princess in her pretty dress in her pretty house with all her pretty things. Easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a man runs an alien bar but never met one. His girlfriend brings in three aliens who turn into Trump, Putin and Ivanka Trup. They got their free drinks. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I appreciate the humor in this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A handvprint on the sand. They do wash away. Sad they don't stay. Good descriptions and neat imagery. Easy to follow. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and good reflections. Loves dancing like the flowers. Good call. A good style and neat scenario . Easy to follow. Thoughts. Sunset. Cups of tea. Love. They go together. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sometimes we need tears to comfort us. Sometimes, laughter is not an option. Some sad reflections. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and weddings too place and so did the eclipse. This short passage has a good message. Easy to follow and good reflections. Creative and colorful. Wedding band in the sky. The world briefly closes it's eyes. God is proposing, the ring, your size. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we have our own friends and cliques in school. Forming your own club, cute. Six girls. It does make you feel special. Having your own bracelet with a shamrock. I get it. Creative and colorful. Our high school friends are just friends in high school and then we go our separate ways. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. This is uplifting and inspiring as well as enlightening. Strength. We do need that. Good words of wisdom. Some well chosen words. Your devotion to God and Jesus shows. A good presentation with well chosen words. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
We like seagulls and stars but we don't want to he them. Nicely written details and good reflections with food for thought. I guess seagulls mate for life. This is uplifting and inspiring. Creative and colorful and easy to follow. It is fun to watch The sky. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
First Impression: Autumn beauty. Life cycles. I like poems about nature. Nature is so serene and relaxing. I thought I would look this over and give my observations. I like to read items that make me smile and think good thoughts. I am ready to review.
What needs your attention: Autumn wasn't mentioned in the body of the poem just in the description describing the poem but it didn't take way from the lovely expressions in this poem.
What part I liked best: Thine wonders gifted from above. There is an urgent flee of birds taking delight in their flight. A banquet of clarity. Symbiotic sensation. Currents striped ripples. The viewer knows not what scene is more perfect. These are some good lines. Lovely reflections. They blend into the poem real well.
Overall Impression: A good style. Looks like you spent time with this. A good scenario. Some well chosen words balance this out. The birds shall return. Creative and colorful. This describes an artist's painting as well as nature in the autumn. A good presentation.
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First Impression: Visiting seals and city by the bay. An outing and looks lost a kid got lost so I decided to read more. The beauty of the place. There are so many beautiful places to see in America and everywhere it seems. I decided to give my observations.
What needs your attention: Is this in California? I wasn't sure. I have never been to California so wasn't sure. I think everything else checks out well in this story.
What part I liked best: Not you aren't allowed to harass the seals. I love seals and all animals. Traveling on a trolley car. A cable car. I could imagine the scenery in this.
Overall Impression: It is panic when your kid isn't with you in a crowded place and if she or he isn't with you on a cable car, you worry someone has taken them or you won't see them. You hope someone will be nice to your child. I panic when losing my kid in a toy store when he was little. Two teenage boys found him for me. I get this. Well written and this holds the reader's attention. Looks like you spent time with this. A good presentation.
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First Impression: A Scottish couple hosting a farewell party. Looks like they have some Scottish Proverbs and I like all kinds of Proverbs. I had to read this and I knew I wouldn't go away disappointed. I didn't. Boiled peanuts. They sound good. Here are my observations.
What needs your attention: Boiled peanuts. Grits. Straw hats. I guess I am not sure why this is the title but I think Scottish Proverbs and Family Fun would have been a fun title. This is just me.
What part I liked best: Women in evening gowns. Men all dressed up. Holding proud thoughts in our hearts. Silver crystal. I like fancy things in life and I like all the references to fancy things. I like how the bonds of friendship prevail. Fine China. Not chinet. I agree. I like the idea of good reflections and a party. I liked the idea of a Scottish couple hosting the party.
Overall Impression: A good style. Lovely reflections. Creative and colorful. A Dark handsome man knocking at your door. Good thought. This is heartwarming. Looks like you spent time with this.
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First Impression: I saw a commercial years ago of flying buffalos and buffalo wings. I thought how they can make wings out of buffalo meat. I found out tit was chicken. I read the first two lines and decided to read more. I knew I was in for a treat. I tuned it and read this.
What needs your attention: I have never ate buffalo wings or made them. just fried chicken wings. There is no meat on these wings. I have no comments about this part.
What part I liked best: You thought like I did. Flying buffalos? You made them in Texas and people loved them. Your children came home from school and wanted to at some. You made them hot and spicy and no one yelled for Mylanta! I would need Pepcid Complete. You were a success at making buffalo wings. You are comfortable with a huge frying pan. I applaud you for it.
Overall Impression: You are a hit with friends an neighbors. After reading your Thanksgiving story I think of you as Martha Stewart and you could win a cooking award. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Food for thought and tasty. Maybe I will cook some.
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First Impression: My grandparents raised me more then my parents. My father was in the Air Force and went to Vietnam and Mom and I stayed with my grandparents. When Dad wasn't in Vietnam, we lived in other states and I stayed with my grandparents every summer. Mom and Dad would go to North Carolina and I stayed with mt grandparents for two months. Okay. I had to read this because it was about you living with your grandparents. I was hooked and I wanted to read more. I am here visiting.
What needs your attention: I think you got this covered. You didn't miss a beat and this is easy to follow.
What part I liked best: He wanted you to start over and you would make him proud. You stayed with him for an hour after he died and praying over him. Loving and respecting his orchard.
Overall Impression: You were a devoted granddaughter. Nicely written details and you told the story well about you and your grandfather's relationship. A nice style and creative. A good presentation and I share your emotions. Heart touching story. I have been there.
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First Impression: I saw that this was making Thanksgiving Dinner. I am not a fan of cooking but my husband and I make a turkey every year and I like to see how others cook their turkeys. Someone took one of your turkeys so I had to read this. I wanted to see how this got resolved. The turkey dilemma.
What needs your attention: A Bear taking your turkey? I would have liked to have heard more about that part of the story but I wanted to see what happened with this one.
What part I liked best: Giving a turkey a cold water bath to thaw it out. Not giving out your turkey secret. You did now. Drinking rum spiked egg nog.
Overall Impression: A new way to cook a turkey. Looks it all worked out. Easy to follow. This held my interest. Looks like you cooked it over night while you slept. I would have been afraid to. Creative and colorful. Well written. Your Thanksgiving dinner worked out well. That is good. Looks like you had this covered. I appreciate the humor in this. I could taste this as I read this. Thanks for sharing. A good presentation in more ways then one.
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First Impression: I remember all the Halloween movies. I bought Halloween 2 and haven't unwrapped it but I will again someday. The music was scary. The storylines were intense. I had to read this since I forgot so many things. I remember Michael wants to kill his sister and everyone. I thought. Let's relive old Halloween movies.
What needs your attention: I guess nothing really except talking about Halloween 3. This stops at Halloween 2. We think Michael is dead an then he isn't.
What part I liked best: Michael vanishes after falling over the edge of a building. Michael's sister with a broken leg trying to escape her crazy brother coming after her. The action was intense.
Overall Impression: The movies are entertaining and chilling and you described all the details. The characters hold the reader's interest as well. This holds the readers interest and if someone never saw the Halloween movies, this review would make them look for them on Netflix. The review was well defined and easy to follow. I enjoyed reading this.
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First Impression: Some birdwatchers seek refuge in a cabin and a cat tries to attack them and one person gets hit by a broom. I had to laugh. This had my attention. The cat is the sweet the woman says. I thought I had to see how this played out. I was in it now.
What needs your attention: I must have missed this but this doesn't say that these people are bird watchers. Maybe that is why the cat had a problem with them. The rest of the story tied everything in together nicely.
What part I like best: The kitty and it's antics. The descriptions of the characters. One was skinny and I tried to picture her. A Man wearing a feodora hat. The lady and her broom. Was she a witch and the cat her familiar? Good descriptions of the area. Sounds like a good place to visit except for the unfriendly cat.
Overall Impression: This is entertaining. Some good characters. Their names match their descriptions. Some humor. This has something for everyone. The cat with the red glowing eyes. It makes you wonder what happens next? It ends. Oh no.
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First Impression: Our favorite Detective is back. Marshall Fields. I know this place. I shopped there once I was drawn to this because it is a murder mystery. I read one about this detective before so I thought I would see what he is going to do this time. I thought I would give you some views.
What needs your attention: Since this man is a Detective, I wondered why he hates anyone wearing a badge when he carries a badge as well? They are all on the same team.
What part I liked best: Estelle wanted to kill Lenny and the Detective tried to talk her out of it and he ended up killing the man because the man would have killed the detective and Estelle both. The detective has a thing for Gloria from Part One. A potential romance. We all know how I like romance.
Overall Impression: The detective never has a boring day it seems. Always suspense and drama. Runs into damsels in distress and helps them out. Guess he likes to work alone and not with other policemen. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A good style and easy to follow. You keep the story interesting. I enjoyed reading this.
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First Impression: I live two and a half hours away from Chicago and it is a crazy city. I was drawn to this story and famous gangsters came from Chicago and hung around my area before I was born. They buried dead bodies six miles from my house. Okay. This is your story and Chicago can be interesting. A Detective. She walked into my office. All detective stories start like this and peaks a person's interest. I wanted to see how this detective was going to handle this and I was ready for a murder mystery. I decided to pursue this and give you my observations.
What needs your attention: The partners in crime left Vinnie's body. No honor among thieves. I read it twice because I thought they took Vinnie's body with them. I figured it out. They left him. Was Gloria Vinnie's girlfriend or a woman in the wrong place at the wrong time?
What part I liked best: This dame busted into my office pleading for help. I had done someone a solid. A Good concept. Different.
Overall Impression: Easy to follow and some good drama and suspense. Well rounded characters and good narration. This holds the reader's interest and didn't disappoint. The detective gets his man. I enjoyed reading this.
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Nicely written details and a good word flow. We do ask who broke the earth. Right now, I blame the President and the government. Little children ask questions and it is heartbreaking to tell them things that are bad. A good style and easy to follow. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and i guess I heard ice cream men called soda jerks. A father as an ice cream man. Neat. He had butterscotch on hand. I smiled as I read this. I remember ice cream day. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Lovely reflections and this is creative and colorful. A good style. Easy to follow. Some good observations. Looks like you spent time with this. Good imagery and nice descriptions of the fish. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Love is different fir fsmilies and romance. The love of God and Jesus is the best. Some good reflections and easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. This is uplifting and inspiring as well as enlightening. A neat rhyme pattern balances out with a good flair. Beautifully stated. Always: Megan
Hi Cathrin Stuart. I am Megan, one of the sly foxes.
First Impression: I see that this about a druid and ancient lore. It looked dark and mysterious so I had to get into this and read more. Life's balance was mentioned. Nature's wisdom. This poem drew me in and I was hooked. I am here with my observations.
What needs your attention: The word ase. I wasn't sure this a type error refers to something else you wanted to say. I have no suggestions for improvement.
What part I liked best: A Druid walks, the wisdom he seeks. Secrets of healing, they have borne. He reads the stars, the moon's soft glow. The ancient lore he keeps alive. Under the druid's care, life's balance is beyond compare. I like druids and their knowledge and wisdom. I feel like I was with the druid and part of his plan and knowledge.
Overall Impression: A Neat rhyme balance balances this out with a good flair. Easy to follow and you don't get bored. Some good reflections. Creative and colorful. A nice style. I was in tune with every word. A good presentation and the last line, In wisdom of the druid, we confide. I like this. Great job of writing.
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