This poem about secrets that we keep is true. Everyone has a story of his or her own and secrets in them.
However, this should not spoil marital ties and those of friendship. Understanding and sympathy are in need.
It is a well composed poem, for it traces the reasons behind keeping secrets and the fact that one must be ready reveal them to the right person in a right moment.
"I'd rather be transparent,
than keep them all concealed."
It takes so much load off a person's mind.
Imagery appeals to me.
It flows well with the rhyme scheme abab.
This nature poem appeals to me as it depicts the delights outside in the garden. it is a soul's delight, no doubt. There is also scope for imagination as you smell the flowers and gaze at the clear skies.
The sun, the flowers, the clear skies are a balm to the eye and the spirit as well. The sunlight and the mild breeze could be nourishing the body and the soul.
Images of nature lend charm to the poem.
It flows well.
A thoughtful poem on freedom. Freedom that comes at the cost of sacrifice and sadness.
"gaze upon the horizon
with jaded eyes"
Jaded eyes that hold no hope or one that is faint and fading.
Metaphors are used aptly and appealingly.
"freedom
is a distant province"
For us it was won after two hundred years of insult and injury. They looked at us with a sidelong glance in our own home and hearth. And this, after looting our respect and resplendence.
This poem is impressive, for it brings forth the suffering one goes through to achieve freedom.
I like this short and sweet poem. it is simple yet written from heart.
Distance only makes the heart grow fonder.
Feelings count and not just the places.
And this poem holds affection to parents very well indeed.
The story talks of the passion and dedication to the art of dancing. Impressively shown are the steps to finally realize what mellows dancing. Not just the mechanics, skill or mastery. But it is the emotional contact with what you do.
The last lines aptly summarize the core content.
"And once you’ve learned to move with your heart,
you never truly learn how to stand still."
Absolutely relates with life as well.
It reminds me of my own soul connection with my husband.
It is not just physical, it is more of an emotional connection. it sounds like a cliche but is an undeniable fact. why else does one want to get married?
it is only to establish more firmly the "emotional bond."
I love this story. The man pays a great tribute to his wife. He finds her absolutely appealing and endearing. If men of this world learn half of the understanding and appreciation displayed here, the planet would definitely be a better place to live in.
I have observed with my own limited experience that a wife's labor of love goes unnoticed not only by the world but also by the so called better half, her husband and father of her children.
Some husbands are silent admirers. But that is frustratingly inadequate admiration for her service to family. She just remains the "angel in the house." Things haven't changed much since Miss. Woolf.
The strongman finds her attractive and loving both physically, mentally and spiritually as well.
"Like the Strong Man of long ago, he knew the truth. The world might praise his strength, but it was she who bore the fire, the brilliance, the weight of the show. And he, her strong man, worshipped her."
This last line sums up the writer's opinions so very deliciously and truly.
Language and style are simple yet profound.
Hi,
it is an inspiring poem showing a way to a happy life.
Rhythm and rhyme work well to produce an overall deep effect.
"Promises yet unspoken, beckon me
To rise to new challenges, to new possibilities."
Hope and determination lead to realizing dreams. No dream is impossible to realize.
A simple and profound poem on the poet's own life. Reflections on self and nature and society appeal to me.
This poem shows the fact that to live a life of peace it is necessary to develop a nature of no complaints, high ambitions and unnecessary worries.
"my life is small and simple,
I have not wealth nor fame,"
Despite being single, the poet shows no bitterness. His love of observing Mother Nature must have given him the gift of being satisfied with the kind of life given to him.
"But for now I must content myself,
To gaze at the stars above"
Befitting word choices and an uncomplicated attitude in general are a source of inspiration.
Nicely done.
Pencil is used as an effective metaphor for wedded bliss.
In a few words you stated the importance of a harmonious marriage. "Two strokes, one vision"
Simple but also eloquent on the union of two with a "million possibilities."
Imagery appeals, the idea being well highlighted.
A poem worthy of a pencil.
Poet has visualized the aftermath of death in his own unique way. For, no one knows what happens later.
The depiction of silence and freedom come through successfully.
"No heavy chains, no fears to keep,"
it looks like a special and singular kind of world where silence dwells, where the soul sleeps forever.
There is neither joy nor sorrow.
"No golden gates or fiery deeps,"
This is one of the appealing versions of the aftermath of death.
Imagery appeals to ear and eye.
It flows well.
The icy north comes alive in this poem.
You kept close to reality depicting the weather of that particular region.
it looked like strange weather blowing hot one day and cold on the next.
"maybe too cold for the birds to sing."
Here lies the winter's effect. Quite drastic too.
Winter's silence echoes through the atmosphere and I can hear it oceans away.
A matter- of- fact poem flows well with visual imagery.
People change incredibly over the years. Changes are inevitable. Drastic change can make a person lament as in this poem.
"The tiny hand that held mine is gone.
replaced by a stranger's hand I barely know."
Persons grow and personalities develop. This is inevitable whether we like it or not.
This free- style poem is touching because it shows emotions quite transparently.
Imagery of the past and present are shown with appeal.
The restless mind is depicted here with appeal. Try as one might, it is tough to bring the mind under control or keep it like a serene pool without ripples. An impossible task.
"Strain and peek,
here it comes."
It is written as the poet feels the steady flow of thoughts, thoughts that cannot be switched off. The title Switch off is appropriate, for it shows that mind is not a machine to be put off at will. Strangely, it seems to have its own will.
This poem makes me think whether there is a way to switch off. It is just practicing to let the brain relax. It sounds easy but not so easy.
A lovely touching verse on treasured days of past.
Something delicate as gossamer touches my heart, bringing tears to my eyes as I read this poem.
The photograph from the past even without a face brings back a loving memory to the poet.
".an old photograph
-without- a face"
It is rather sad that all those days of a wonderful beautiful past are gone leaving a fading memento as a sweet reminder.
This poem will stay on my mind for its moving imagery and flowing feelings arrested in a visible and well designed format.
"which fl utt er o p e n
with the <~breath~> of angels
to illuminate shadows"
I am enslaved by the poet's imagination and emotion.
I find this short story charming. imagine having a talk with an author. He seems witty and human enough to join the lady on a chilly evening.
The cat plays a role. The girl's character is drawn on interesting lines. Her liking for the antique scenario and the way she treasured a few knick knacks from her family.
"I loved my "seventies" kitchen; The orange and yellow striped curtains, "
Some of those styles seem to be returning.
The tone for a pleasant evening is smoothly set, with both characters warming up for a flowing conversation.
Change for the better is always welcome. The poet has given several examples when life changes and mostly changing for the better.
"The depth of our nation, as one whole
body, under God, finds new life in
the grand avenues of change."
I also find that the poet mentions natural changes involving wind, heat and a flower. This poem includes changes in the life of people brought by social and economic factors as well.
There is an appealing metaphor in "the grand avenues of change."
It flows well.
Hello Legendary !
This poem well shows the quality and character of a devotee. A poem that uplifts my spirit.
Her faith is transparently depicted. Her day starts on a note of remembrance of God and the whole day is filled with joy in her heart. Just the ideal person for all to emulate.
"With faith in the One who frames her world
She enters each day through prayers unfurled"
Word choices are apt and faith shines through each of them.Belief in God lends support to live a life of charity and love. Words such as "praise, blessed, One and prayers" set the tone and rhythm of the poem.
it flows well with vivid imagery.
Hello there,
hope you are doing well.
This personal story shows your deep interest in the sport of ice skating. I find professional ice skating truly fascinating. it needs real talent and a supple body to coordinate movements on the rink.
self-propulsion and gliding of a person across a flat ice surface appears surreal.
your experience witnessing the sport in Italy is well narrated.
Your familiarity with the sport and its star performers is informative.
How true! The song is heard many times, but the singer's name slips off the mind. With so many wonderful songs, one can't be blamed for not recalling that talented artist. Not all are blessed with great memory, especially in later years.
"Why can’t I remember?
It’s on the tip of my tongue"
It is a well written rhyming poem with asides, (an utterance not meant to be heard by someone)
Poet's puzzled thoughts are well aired.
The thought process is interestingly shown and we follow it without much effort.
Here is an experience well voiced and shared by many people, I am sure.
It flows well.
This poem is a tribute to Radio that never goes out of popularity. Even with the onslaught a variety of social media, radio is still the need and loved by millions.
why is that so? it is easy on the ear and there is no need for glaring light on the screen. The voice engages and the music is on while one works at home or outside.
The poem written in ABCB rhyme scheme shows why the poet favors radio.
"No pictures
Just sound"
Radio is a good company for the housewife as she toils at home with so many chores and for those driving it is good pastime, listening to news and sports commentaries.
Well, there are any number of plus points with radio, a wonderful invention by Guglielmo Marconi.
It flows well and it lets us think of, how well we enjoy the radio.
Music is many things. it is a soul lifting therapy. To me it definitely works like magic. it takes me away from all preoccupations and makes me feel rejuvenated.
Both happy and sad music give me pleasure. Life is made up of many shades. All of them are of equal importance. Of course, everybody has a favorite style of music.
While classical music is awe inspiring, modern music is also highly emotional. They have their places of worth and importance.
"I can always listen to music
And for that I'm very glad."
You said it so nicely. It is so true. Many of us do.
This poem brings to focus, the appeal of music, gratitude to the masters of music and that music will be an important part of the future generation too.
Rhyming verse flows well.
The search for a soulmate continues tirelessly. finally found him or her in the waves of the sea. It is an interesting poem taking us on a journey through the elements, the space, the sky, the wind and the sea. Not the sea but it is the waves that present the love that she seeks.
Laughter on the waves sounds mysterious. Having been led by the elements, the final destination lies not with the sea, but with another element, water.
This must be the love of her life.
I find the poem interesting and intriguing too. Perhaps it is pointing to a surfing companion.
It flows well.
Imagery is visual.
No wonder the poet needs an accomplice to launch herself on an adventure. It is quite natural to long for a different path from the road taken so far.
From the kind of life she previously had, I think the need of the hour is to travel and find out how the others live.
Time to take on something new, something different.
Apart from the content, it is a rhyming verse of couplets with perfect rhythm
".Now I’m gown-up and things are the same.
My life is quite simple and way too tame.'
isn't it indeed?
it sounds good to hear the poet waking up to uncover new realities outside of her home and the familiar scenario.
It flows well with visual imagery.
Experience is the best teacher, they say. This poem illustrates it.
In the beginning, joy and sorrow are unknown to us. life flows like a spontaneous joyful dream. Innocence is all that surrounds us. Experience creeps in and emotions evolve.
This poem tells us of how it was in the past. And how that changed now. Rather sad. It happens.
"I never knew that
But now I do.
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