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Rated: E | (5.0)
I agree this is a marvelous gift to the world. I could feel your passion through your words. You write about this precious gift and relationship with God which I believe is very precious.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about Jesus with me and WdC members.


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Review of Creating Tomorrow  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Your words worked well together and showed me the path from beginning to end. I visualized the events and felt as if I was going along the journey of life. Although yesterday's path is hard to follow I hope it is beneficial because of what cam be learned from the past.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I could feel the depression, sadness, and despair. Seeing in my mind someone wrapped in blankets evoked the idea of cold and dreadful memories haunting every second as the images of memory streamed inside the person's head. I could see the finger poised over the repeat button.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Respite  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I feel as if I went on an adventure of sights and smells. Your poem made my mouth water for popcorn. Distractions such as enjoying a ride and taking in every detail can indeed allow a person to escape the cares of reality if only for a moment.

Thank you for writing this poem and sharing your word art adventure with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed reading your poem because of the message about how we used to respect nature and now take it for granted or abuse it. I could see the sun rising and warming the environment lessening the bite of winter. Especially now because it is winter here.

Thank you for writing about nature and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of I Chased You Baby  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your poem I could see you chasing her as your heart beat a rhythm of affection. Feeling the sadness through your words and the emptiness as you realized she wasn't interested in you showed you longing for a relationship that would never be.

I hope you are recovering from this experience and are doing well now.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Ripples On Water  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your words about the dirty water I was able to visualize its movements as the sun danced on the ripples. I also wondered about the smell, the taste of the air as a breath was taken into the lungs, the feel of the environment on the skin as the air touched a person, and how the movement of the water sounded in this situation.

Thank you for writing about dirty water and bringing to mind how industries pollute the environment and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You could add [relationship] and [experience] to help more people find your item.

I enjoyed reading your poem because it showed me imagery of a smile inviting fellowship and possibly a new friendship with someone who would be a lifelong friend. Your words worked well together guiding me from line to line as I read about the possibility of people getting to know each other.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about relationships with me and WdC members.


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Review of UNCERTAINTY  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You could add [emotional] or [personal] as a genre so more people can find your item.

The mind can do some amazing things even cause uncomfortable situations which you mentioned in your word art. I can imagine how your mind creates stuff because mine seems to be creative and shows me interesting and sometimes scary things I can use in my stories.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about the mind as you experience it with me and WdC members.


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Review of Crimson Tapestry  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poetic words guided me through a wonderful story of life. The vibrant and vivid images of life as it traveled until held carefully in a very safe environment for growth were easy to see in my minds eye.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about life with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem is well expressed and shows the colors and activities of beings frolicking. I believe it is somewhat about being careful about the decisions made, finding what works well for each individual, and not making empty promises. Dedication could be something to be avoided according to your last line.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Diamond  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words showed me details of the birth, growth, and life of a diamond. Reading your poem of smooth and well-chosen words kept me interested and visualizing the events. I enjoyed seeing the diamond shape of the poem created by the syllable count for each line.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Dishes  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words of wisdom are awesome and inspiring. I could see you arguing within yourself about doing the dishes. I could see you doing the same with your parents, but I also could see your guardian angel nudging you toward the right thing to do in a timely manner.

I understand how humans desire to avoid doing things they don't want to do, but the reward of triumphing over the obstacles and accomplishing the tasks is worth the struggles.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about the challenge of doing dishes.


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Review of November Winds  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Deception can be a chilly place disguised as a warm bright place, yet if you combine the three the possibility of a warm place especially inside with family can be a reality. I could feel the sun's warmth, see the light, expect a nice day and feel the chill of the wind, and then be inside with the warmth of family. This is where your words took me.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your story I could see the characters, their actions, and the scene, and feel the emotions of the situations. I like the timid beginnings and challenge of singing becoming a powerful yet quiet and beautiful triumph. Your story encourages people.

Thank you for writing and encouraging people and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Preparation  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel the emptiness and grief as I read your words. Feeling alone seems to wrap around you. It is said time heals, but I know from experience the memories and feelings stay in a less intense manner as long as I/people have the breath of life.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your experiences and word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Below  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
If I had not read your description, I might have thought you were tripping on drugs. Your spiritual trip to one of your happy places had me wondering about the light and sound being unable to penetrate, but I realized that because of your intense focus, this is probably normal. Peace and contentment most likely wrap around you.

Thank you for writing about one of your happy places and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I pictured the elephant also. I like sharing ideas. I get your point about writing is a great way to share ideas.

Your title and subject matter don't match well. {elephant a noun is the main point of your writing. The other point that got my attention was about being prevented from writing.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of COPPER  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Briefly comparing copper to steel for use with hearing elements reminded me about copper cookware that does a great job of cooking food. I visualized the water inside a tank with a heating element fired up to temperatures to cause the water to boil and create steam. This reminded me of SteamPunk.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about copper and heating water with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A friend battles depression. I can relate but do not experience this challenging situation. Your article gives great insight into this battle. I could feel the tug-of-war, the ups and downs, and the daily battles I could imagine to be time and energy consuming along with adding more depression on top of what already existed.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your overview of androide software for productivity and security is helpful because several software applications can be found in one place. Your writing is clear and easy to understand.

Thank you for writing and for sharing the software productivity with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words showed me interesting characters interacting normally. The Cardinal twittering in her nest, the Jay instructing her young, and the cat prowling intent on catching a bird. I could hear the animal utterances and see the action of the cat grabbing the cardinal.

Thank you for writing and sharing this animal story with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Yes, I agree it is funny yet sad, but your song's story made me laugh, many thanks, I needed that! For me, there is some truth to this list of school gifts. I didn't like going to school. I liked learning but school was too much, so I can relate.

Thank you for writing and for sharing this school Christmas list of gifts with me and WdC members.


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Review of Ricefields  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I could visualize you working hard in the fields, the eventual springing forth of the crops, and you being so tired after all of your work each day. I'm glad you had the crops for nourshing your bodies.

Thank you for sharing your word art about your life in the fields with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I'm stunned because of your words showing me the details of that day when your mother walloped you. I guess you mentally tried to believe your attacker wasn't your mother or she changed so much that she seemed to be a different person. I hope things are better for you now.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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