|This was a nice story. You potrayed the characters very well giving me insights into who they were and what they struggled with.
You also spoke in clear, short sentences so I could follow the story.
The only thing I would comment on is you called Maria, Trina's mother-in-law, would she be her mother-in-law before they got married?
I know that is nit-picking but that is the only thing I could find.