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The orb is left for a teen girl to find. It gives her powers to read and modify the minds.

This choice: Give Stacy another look  •  Go Back...
Chapter #4

Fabulous to Freaky

    by: Hanko Author IconMail Icon
You see poor Milton walk by and figure it's time for him to get an upgrade. Poor Milton's father left a few years ago and ever since he's been going through, lets say an experimental phase. He had always been a bit portly, hairy and always unpopular however this year things took a turn. He had entered this, "I don't conform to society phase". That's all well and fine but when he showed up wearing a dress, things certainly took a turn. As you could imagine the bullying definitely increased, but from both sides. No high school guy could ever expect to make it out of wearing a dress to school. If more detail and effort had been utilized, perhaps the girls in school would have been a bit more empathic. Women always love a man who understands how difficult it is to keep up appearances. Perhaps if he added a bit of style some of the girls could even admit to their own curiosity of his statement but this was not the case.

Milton, a pudgy dark haired sophomore in high school, wore a woman's dress to make a statement. The statement clearly was, I Dont Care. His body hair showed from his arms to arm pits and he wore his normal white socks with his sneakers. What made it worse, was there was even a bra strap showing from the cheap dress material.

In high school, it's safe to say Milton was seen as a freak. This was a total contrast to Stacy. She was a very popular and athletic blond haired senior. She always wore the highest styles and trends and had a body all the guys craved. It was this contrast that intrigued you, but there many ways to go. You could swap anything about the two.

Perhaps give Milton, Stacy's clothes and vice versa and make them aware but the whole school is oblivious? Another way to go could be a life swap. That would mean, even though Milton is still wearing poorly fitted dresses to school, he is the most popular guy around. Even though Stacy still has her gorgeous body and style, people will think she's a freak and bully her constantly. Maybe we keep things simple and just do a full body swap, but both are completely aware of the swap.

What do you think?

You have the following choices:

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1. Clothes Swap

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2. Life Swap

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3. Body Swap

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