*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile.php/reviews/liliapadwes/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/14
Review Requests: ON
708 Public Reviews Given
711 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
Previous ... 10 11 12 13 -14- 15 16 17 18 19 ... Next
326
326
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
"Old Man Iverson WC: 296" is a light tale about a young boy, who broke a neighbor's window, and was punished to work at the neighbor's house for a week, to pay for the repair of the window. At the end of the story, the boy seemed to have enjoyed the work when he said: "I did ten push-ups!!"

An inspiring story, indeed. Here's hoping the writer will let us read more of his works...


elephantsealer


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
327
327
Review of Who Was He?  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
"Who Was He?" is a good tale of a young boy who went out of his house, to explore... It is presented well, even to the point where the child is shown as very, very young when he says, "who carries me home I don't remember" as well as "but my memory is a bit hazy". However, somewhere along the way, the little child remembers (and here we may consider that the tale was written as an adult) seeing an apparition, which fortunately was also observed by the mother; which implies that the child wrote the incident as an adult...

I salute the writer for writing the story in such a way that a reader would realize that the tale was a memory from an adult... It was a good presentation, and I am inspired by it...

elephantsealer


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
328
328
Review of 2nd place  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hey, there, Sincerely, me: your one-line "2nd place" got me to review it; and I can honestly let you know that it is interesting that you are able to write a single-lined tale that tells of a writer who realizes his/her limitations and accepts it. However, there is a beginning and when there is a beginning, there may also come an ending; and probably a second chance to write more than just a single-lined tale... Hope is always a next time, a tomorrow, a try again chance...


elephantsealer


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
329
329
Review of Rim Road WC 297  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
"Rim Road WC 297" reflects the many stories about old, hunted houses and old men. As children, we dare ourselves to be brave, not realizing, of course, that we are just as scared as when a black cat comes our way. However, there is a question in my mind as I reviewed this piece of work: do children love to read stories like these???? No matter, though; what is thrilling is that children do enjoy getting scared...


elephantsealer


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
330
330
Review of Overtime  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This piece of work, "Overtime", is a light tale of things that go wrong... It is also a good sample of how easy it is for humans to get into trouble; in this story between a couple... It is an inspiring piece of work that the writer presented in a light manner because in real life people are susceptible to making mistakes in their lives...


elephantsealer


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
331
331
Review of The Notebook  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Wow, is this, "The Notebook", a terror tale in the night? Finding a notebook and from it words that horrified the finder. It horrified me, too, reading it... It is a good example of a short piece of work that brought out fear and horror and much interest to the reviewer...



elephantsealer


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
332
332
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
"The Last Train Home" is a wonderful tale of a soldier, who did his duty to his country, and was honored for his "duty to his country"...


elephantsealer


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
333
333
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
"The Cabin at Night WC:291" tells of a husband's way of getting his wife to sell their cabin. It does tell of how a husband tries to convence his wife to do what he wants to do: sell their cabin. However, the idea turned wrong, and ...

It was a light tale of how things happen between wives and husbands; and the many ways they try to outdo each other... A credit to the writer...


elephantsealer


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
334
334
Review of Wire Walker  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed my review of the "Wire Walker" because it tells of a person who endeavors to do something dangerous as a wire walker; dreamed of wanting to be a performer; pursued it with effort and practice; and finally became a "highwire artist".

This actually is reminiscent of how writers start: dream, pursue the dream; practice, fail, practice, and finally enjoying the dream that became a reality...


elephantsealer


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
335
335
Review of Christmas Wish  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
We all love to read stories about grandpas/grandmas. "Christmas Wish" is one that brings to mind many tales about other grandpas/grandmas, especially the "love" that Andy has for his grandpa; especially as he remembers years in the company of his grandfather. I would say this little flash tale is just the right piece of work about Christmas...



elephantsealer


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
336
336
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.0)
"Untitled Moonlight-Chapter Four" is a light tale about animals and the friendship between animals. However, I would like to let the writer know of the following errors in spelling: Number one: "Her sent was stronger..." "sent" should be spelled "scent"
Number two: "I guess I'll have to try not to wake her ... try not to get "board". "board" should be spelled "bored".

Maybe the writer should scan her/his work before sending it out. Spellings are one of the mistakes that writers often do...


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
337
337
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
The "October 31 Plot Premise Revisited" is a one-line tale about an investigator who writes well... How great it is to write and write well... We hope to read more of this writer's work...


elephantsealer


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
338
338
Review of Ink and Graphite  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Yes, I believe I would agree with the writer of "Ink and Graphite", of the last sentence he wrote, that says: "The sterile design we would have made pales beside the vibrant forest of serendipity that springs forth from the seeds we call error." We all get there, I suppose...


elephantsealer


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
339
339
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
"Age Does Not Matter" tells a story of "Mary Josephine Moses", who was once married to a prince. She lived in a sanitarium after the death of her husband. Unfortunately the sanitarium closed down and Mary "was shuffled to a homeless shelter". In our present-day life, we learn of, and we become aware of, how Mary or any Mary for that matter, becomes a "bag lady". It is truly unfortunate that there are many Marys today, with a social problem that some governments are unable to solve. I appreciate the writer who shows us through this tale that there are people like Mary...


elephantsealer


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
340
340
Review of ROCKFORD ROCK  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a very interesting tale of a stone, who once lived by the lake; lived in a cage with a turtle and then with a hamster, and continued to other "adventures" as depicted by the writer. I decided to review this piece of writing because of how the writer made his work really as interesting with the number of characters that became part of the story. Here's hoping the writer will continue to present more of his work...


elephantsealer


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
341
341
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
There are many questions a writer asks in the piece of work, "Purgatory of Footsteps". What is life and what is death? In writing, writers do show and tell of questions that are sometimes unanswerable because in our earth world there is always "something unanswereable"...


elephantsealer


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
342
342
Review of ABANDONED  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
"Abandoned" is an interesting tale of a "house"... At first, it was a great, beautiful building that "shined with sparkle"; that unfortunately turned into a broken, "cardboard box". However, the depth of sadness was transposed into a "girl" who "jumps out" of a car, and said, "Stop"...
And there comes the beginning of a new life for the broken-down house... An interesting tale, indeed...


elephantsealer


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
343
343
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I feel I must review this piece of writing: "Unexpected Company (1st Place)" because it made me feel that there is goodness among us, earth people!!! I would consider the story a "rescue tale" because a man, almost "lost hope of survival", was rescued. The fact that two men in a sheltered place gave "life" back to another... We need more of this kind of stories...


elephantsealer


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
344
344
Review of Unmasked  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Wow, "Unmasked", is a funny (I really think it is funny!!!!) tale of someone who has a good sense of humor. It is but a short tale; however, it does convey a sense of "comic" situation. It starts with the "fox", better known as the "Zorro", striking again; the need to be quiet in the presence of a beauty; goes along with the "undressing"; then a sharp waking up of the sleeping beauty; and goes on off to "riding off through the desert night" and admiring the "handful of clothes" to fit his size... Thanks for the laugh, writer....

elephantsealer


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
345
345
Review of Excerpt  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
The "Excerpt" tells of a girl's first day in an "elegant" school, chosen for her because she is the "future Empress", who "needs to be educated". The girl is probably a bit anxious what is in store for her at the new school. So it is only fair to let her fuss about going; however, the girl admits to herself of "two overprotective people" in her life, who cares and love her... This little tale is the author's piece of work that she/he plans to write, "eventually" It is an interesting piece that creates a tale of how children try to manage their feelings when school starts...



elephantsealer


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
346
346
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
The "Review of Hidden Lies" is interesting because it tells how a reader became interested in a story, that not only interested her/him but also enjoyed the "unique culture" of the country that the book describes. It brings to mind that reading a book should not only satisfy but should also give a sense of being a part of the story, for the emotions that are aroused in a reader...


elephantsealer


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
347
347
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Yes, quite an adventure story, jackiesmuse (71), regarding your "The Adventures of Pinky and Porky". Your writing was done in a light tone, not joking of course but something light and interesting. There are many stories about children and the many wonderful things they get into, and yours has given me something to think about...really interesting, indeed...


elephantsealer


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
348
348
Review of Why?  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
You seem to be writing something positive with your piece of work, "Why?", Black Panther. It is all right to ask questions, of course, whether or not you are able to write some piece of work that is interesting to readers. That is how writers start, did you know that? We write, and then we ask questions: are our writing tells a story or a just going round and round because we are stuck at one point that does not even say anything. However, your attitude, the questions you ask, and the manner in which you seem to want to write is really good enough. It takes time to know whether or not we are writers; we just carry on writing because that is all we know...


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
349
349
Review of The Basin  
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Reviewing the "Basin" caught my interest because it tells of how a "humble utensil" was fashioned by a "potter" into a "new and beautiful" utensil, a basin... and how the writer used a verse in the Bible to bring out the actual meaning of the poem: humility... Interesting, indeed...


elephantsealer


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
350
350
Review by elephantsealer
In affiliation with SENIOR CENTER GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
"The Academy of Twisted Topiaries"is an interesting tale of Robert who was terribly interested in topiaries. Very much interested in topiaries, Robert unfortunately ended up one of them, a "sentinel" on the grounds of the school he got deeply interested to undertake... Is this magic or what?????


elephantsealer


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
516 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 21 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile.php/reviews/liliapadwes/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/14