What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?
I clicked on the Read and Review icon on the left side of the screen and it brought me to your fine poem.
What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?
This poem presents a unique point of view - that of a breeze or bit of wind. Wind controls so much and steers and guides so much that we take for granted most of the time.
It must look very small below from that vantage point. Very small, indeed.
But I like the generous view that seeks to avert danger.
What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?
It is hard to pick a favorite because it all moves along so well with your rhyme scheme and word choices.
This is my favorite part:
"It soared with charm and subtle grace
above the sea below.
My breeze assumed a steady pace
and that seemed apropos."
It flows so seamlessly throughout, though. I felt transported to a place by the sea. I haven't been there in years, but your poem took me to a place of calm that I love.
THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps
I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read.
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Ta Ta until we meet again....
"Flappers & Yappers Ride The Wave