Good Morning,
A poetry about this phenomenon that just occurred lately
Eclipse..
The short poem has a good flow and is well written.
The written lines fit for the given title.
The social media is now posting videos on this latest eclipse that occured.
Thank You for the great read.
Write On.
Descriptive and is so true.
Good Morning,
Hahaha
Yes.. the life of a teacher is wonderful. That is from my younger brother's point of view who was the youngest teacher in our place and the topnotcher of teacher's qualifying examination.
He works as a teacher with much passion and dedication and realized his dream to earned the top position at the University that he teaches.
The Director.. and I am so happy for him.
Back to the Review..
I enjoy reading this all the way.
Fascinating experience that you gain.
Thank You for sharing.
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Good Morning,
WOW, truly a night to remember.Sweet Memories with The Beatles..
That was really special.
Unforgettable.
I can feel the excitement as I read between the lines.
I can vividly picture you singing with them along with the crowd as they performed.
I was 8 years old at the time of their first few years of popularity and up to now I can still sing I Saw Her Standing There a song that my brother was singing on top of his lungs that made me memorize it too.
Hahaha
Sweet memories.
Sweet bonding time with my brothers when we were young and full of dreams.
I enjoy reading this all the way.
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Good Morning,
The title is captivating all because I love to watch the mesmerizing sunset wherein I always find time to be at the beachfront to enjoy it and to thank The Most High that another day is over with all ita blessings.
I admire the lines that
completed this work of art.
The Sunset Melody surely is a great experience to listen and to acknowledge such wonderful Music.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
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Good Morning,
A story about witches, friends, betrayal and this
Blue Velvet Sapphire which leads to being expelled from the group.
This can be a beginning of a very interesting book in the making.
There will be more magic and more amazing activities to share.
Thank You for the read.
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Good Evening,
A nicely and wisely written free verse poetry with a good flow and with a philosophical message.
" I tell you I'm your son again "
An important line that explains it all.
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Thin Blades Of Grass Fencing In The Wind
A very interesting poem.
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Good Evening,
I love the given title
The Power Of Prayer
All because I firmly believe on it.
The poem has a good flow and the written lines fit for the given title.
A poetry that expresses a deep faith to The Most High.
Yes.. Prayer is all powerful.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
Good Evening,
Written for a prompt and I believe you did it so well.
A reflection of life as in what is in-store for today and tomorrow after yesterday through a meaningful title
The Younger Me
The written lines fit for the given title.
The last stanza expresses hope for the best.
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Good Evening,
Interesting title as in Sad too
Withered Diamonds
The poem expresses realities of life and the greatest desire of the heart.
A poem that conveys a message to someone very special basing on some linesnon this well written work of art . Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
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Good Evening,
This is fun to read.
A winning piece.
Congratulations,
Well - deserving.
Unique and wonderful style of writing a poem.
I admire the creativeness.
I enjoy reading the discussion of the kitchen or dining world.
I love this all the way.
Write on.
Good Evening,
The heart and soul speaks through a well written and nicely presented poem.
A poem that expresses a message to a particular individusl whom you do not want to be your enemy but you just want to put a distance between the two of you.
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Good Evening,
A loving tribute to
Snowy, My Love
The nice picture adds more meaning into this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
Ten years of togetherness gives so much heartache when a pet departed..
I can relate as since our dearest Brownie left 15 years ago we, the whole family never wanted to have another dog again because the pain is so deep.
This serves as a wonderful documentary.
Thank You for sharing your Sweet Memories with Snowy.
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Good Afternoon,
A well written.free verse poetry with a title that is joyful
Love's Dancing Petals
The message is philisophical and each line that completed this work of art is nice and lovely.
Thank You for sharing your talent and this lovely
Loves Dancing Petals
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Good Morning,
A very inspiring free verse poetry with a nicely written special message all the way.
The Love Of GOD
The most powerful love.
The poem is lovely and it shares a great message.
All the lines that completed this work of art are truthful and admirable.
Thank You for sharing.
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Good Morning,
Amen to that.
You are sharing a very important topic.
It is also very interesting
as well as very powerful.
LOVE
A title that I learned and I believe as the greatest.
I admire the lines that completed this
The last paragraph is truly a wise advice.
Thank You for the worthwhile read
Good Morning,
A morning Haiku poetry.
It expresses a joyful message to one and all.
A poem that serves as a sunshine that brightens the day.
A poem so nice to me.
Ringing out with joy.
My favorite last line that serves as a nice and wise conclusion.
Write On.
Good Morning,
Reading between the lines makes me wants to say :
Congratulations and Best Wishes
This is a happy song with inspiring lyrics all the way.
Surely the tune is lively and lovely.
I can feel the excitement here.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Good Morning,
I admire your courage and strength and to stand for what is right.
The world never admire people who give.promises but cannot keep such promises.
A short writing that expresses a brave heart and soul.
Thank You for sharing.
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I Salute You.
Good Morning,
A poem addressed to someone special that you love.
It expresses an important message that in other words it says:
I do not like a divided heart
Because when I give mine
I give it whole.
And that is what true love is allabout.
Thank You for sharing
Fall
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Good Morning,
A letter for your future children.
This is very inspiring and it is written from the heart.
It shares great wisdom too.
My suggestion in this writing.
Possibly you can divide this into three paragraphs for a better presentation.
leave the poisen out of your space
Please change the word poisen to poison
take god everywhere
Please capitalize the first letter of the word be God
Please take God everywhere
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Good Morning
Yes.I agree with the last no lines
If you don't know what time it is
then you'll never know.
The poem expresses a jolly season that is full of Celebration and that is worlwide.
The weather is cold but the happenings are warm in a festive way.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
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Good Morning,
There are.lines that I truly admire.
Love is a song made from three little words.
Caring to forgive not shy about giving.
Actually all lines are nice but these two make a big impact in my reading time.
The first stanza reminds me of a lyrics of a song:
Fly..fly away.. over the mountains..
Over the sea...
Thank You for sharing
The Wings I Understand
Great poet.
Great talent.
Good Morning,
A very interesting poetry about Music which is also one of my interests in life.
The poem is well written and it expresses fully your true sentiments.
Very true.I agree with each written line.
Thank You for sharing
Where Did All The Music Go ?
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Good Morning,
You did follow your intuition to give him a Hug and your intuition never ever guide you wrongly.
The story behind the poetry is sad yet so inspiring.
Yes.. Goodbye Tyler and Tyler was loved, is being loved and always be loved in Heaven .
Thank You for sharing
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Good Morning,
A free verse poetry with a very meaningful title.
A Pulse : The Promise
The message is philosophical and with great concern of what is going on with the concerned topic.
Surely a possible solution for this situation.
Thank You for sharing.
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