Good Afternoon,r
A very inspiring poem with a nice
title
When You Stood Beside Me
Very touching and uplifting.
It is like singing
I receive the living GOD and my heart is full of joy.
Reading between the lines i firmly say that You are truly blessed and
I am so happy for you.
God Bless You Always me
Good Afternoon,
The presentation is great.
The poem is addressed to someone very close to the heart.
Basing on the first line
I know that this
Precious Gift
Is truly precious all the way
I admire each line that completed this nicely written poetry.
Destined to be a Family with all the love and care.
It is a joy to read this.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
At age 40... she has to have a long lasting relationship.
I love the exciting ending of the story.
Mike is the answer.
Hahaha
Life and all its essence and the importance of Time as it passes so
quickly.
So because You are
Normal, Happy and Healthy
Better start a Family.
Hahaha
I enjoy reading this.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
A very touching
A Mother's Wish
A great desire for the best of her children and the family as well that
A poem that serves as a last will and testament and tell the children see love Daddy and the pets.
I can be imagine what is in the mind of the mother knowing her failing health.
I have mixed emotion reading this.
Sad and yet with all the eagerness on what are the things to be done while there is still time.
This is for me a very sacred and precious writing.
All of these is a prayer of a Miracle
That such sickness be healed in
JESUS NAME.
Amen.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Evening,
A special kind of Tea in a Haiku poetry.
Gen Mai Cha
Actually as I read it I thought it is a name of a Chinese Military General
Hahaha
Funny me...
Reading the three precious lines I do believe that this is nutritious and Delicious.
Reading the special note below the poetry makes me more convinced that this is truly delicious.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read
Good Evening,
The story behind this nikt written free verse poetry is very touching.
From the words of a mouse.
Nice words or introduction to consider.
Added with a plea
With the kindness of your heart, I guess the answer will be Yes.
Hahaha
I enjoy reading this.
Thank You for sharing
May I Come In ?
Truly a great read.
Write On.
Good Evening,
A nicely written short story with a good flow.
TARUN
Who makes you laugh when your blue is going to perform his last act.
I wonder why...
Possibly his contract expires
This story reminds me of an old song with a title
That's The Way Of A Clown.
Thank You for the great read.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
Brilliant translation through a Painting or of a painting in a wonderful poetic way.
A Dancer
Gorgeous and gracious
So full of life dancing through the music
You marvelously described her.
Thank You for sharing and Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A nicely written free verse poetry with a good flow.
This is addressed to someone very special and close to your heart.
Each stanza seeks for reassurance that her love for you is real or is true.
Yes.. I believe so.
The poem has a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
The presentation is nice too.
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
A nicely written free verse poetry that touches many important topics in your own brilliant poetic way.
The presentation is nice.
Each line is important and adds more meaning to the poem
Thank You for sharing
We Need Some Funk
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A wonderful description of the word
Of a great colkection.
Collage
A labor of love for all that you love.A collection of Sweet Memories.
I admire each line that completed this nicely written poetry..
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Good Morning,
Daddy knows best
He gives the best advice yet...not being listened to.
There is a great lesson being shared in this well written and nicely presented poem .
Touching and meaningful too.
Love You Daddy..
Great conclusion.
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning,
A poem that expresses Comfort.
Very true to its written lines as the rain pours.
The poem has a good flow and is well written.
The presentation is nice too.
Every line is my favorite line thst speaks of the truth.
Thank You for sharing
The Rain Comforted
Write On.
Good Morning,
The pain of betrayal is the most psinful of all the pains in the world.
The given title
Loving You
Fits for the story behind the poetry.
Sad but staying goodbye is the best option.
The poem is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for the read.
A deeply emotional piece.
The given title is intriguing and interesting as well.
A Song For No One
Reading between the lines makes me no understand fully why such title was given.A poem that sounds like a sad song to me.
This also reminds me of a song with a sad tune with a title
I Remember You. with this lyrics
I remember you as long as there's a meadow where we used to ran
Sad indeed !
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Morning,
WOW...
He knew that you just celebrated your 18th birthday as he sent 18 yellow roses.
How exciting..and the thrill of it as there was no note.
The mystery was solved and here's for
a new beginning of a wonderful friendship and a possible great relationship.
Nice story.
Nice all the way.
Very convincing.
Thank You for the great read.
Write On.
Good Morning,
AMEN.
A nicely written free verse poetry with aa good flow.
It speaks of the Most High mighty power and His love of msnkind.
A poem with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Each line is precious and truthful.
A poem written from the heart and expresses a Sacred message to one and all.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Morning,
A beautiful free verse poetry addressed to someone very close to the heart.
Yes..the love of country, the old familiar place that makes a person longed to be back as a Home Sweet Home.
A sense of sacred belonging.
Adorable poetry.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
Good Evening,
A love with no limitations
which includes all the Heavenly bodies.
But most of all. The hesrt and soul.
What else can you ask for ?
I enjoy reading this Love Poetry.
The poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
Fascinating...
Write On.
Good Evening,
Truly a
Strange World :
A Tragic Openness
A free verse poetry thst expresses an unpleasant activities of crime relatedness that gives a bad image to the country and its people.
A very sad reality.
The big question is,
How to stop this ?
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
I was enjoying the story..then here comes the bug .. blame it to the bug..on second thoughts..thanks to the bug...as it started a beginning of a good friendship or relationship.
Fascinating,.. never mind the allergic reaction.
Hahaha
Thank You for the nice read.
Write On.
Good Evening
Abe and Martha made a wise decision.
Instead of whining much better to make a lemonade.
I enjoy reading this short story of Senior Citizens having their vacation
The story is realistic and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
Good Evening,
An interesting title...
An interesting tree actually.
Surely this is a lovely tree as it is the Main Star of this nicely written free verse poetry.
I can vividly picture a tree with pointed and spiky leaves in nice
color and shape
I wonder how the fruit tastes.
Thank You for sharing the
Tree of Tenderness.
Write On.
Good Evening,
A well written free verse poetry that expresses a journey called life
Along with varied experiences being shared here it is also deeply emotional.
The poem has a good flow and the rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
A poem that says
This is my life.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
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