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Review of The love of God  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A very inspiring free verse poetry with a nicely written special message all the way.
The Love Of GOD
The most powerful love.
The poem is lovely and it shares a great message.
All the lines that completed this work of art are truthful and admirable.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.

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Review of Love  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Amen to that.
You are sharing a very important topic.
It is also very interesting
as well as very powerful.
LOVE
A title that I learned and I believe as the greatest.
I admire the lines that completed this
The last paragraph is truly a wise advice.
Thank You for the worthwhile read
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Review of Morning  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A morning Haiku poetry.
It expresses a joyful message to one and all.
A poem that serves as a sunshine that brightens the day.
A poem so nice to me.
Ringing out with joy.
My favorite last line that serves as a nice and wise conclusion.
Write On.
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Review of Eternal Love  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Reading between the lines makes me wants to say :
Congratulations and Best Wishes
This is a happy song with inspiring lyrics all the way.
Surely the tune is lively and lovely.
I can feel the excitement here.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
I admire your courage and strength and to stand for what is right.
The world never admire people who give.promises but cannot keep such promises.
A short writing that expresses a brave heart and soul.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
I Salute You.
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Review of Fall  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A poem addressed to someone special that you love.
It expresses an important message that in other words it says:
I do not like a divided heart
Because when I give mine
I give it whole.
And that is what true love is allabout.
Thank You for sharing
Fall
Write On.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good Morning,
A letter for your future children.
This is very inspiring and it is written from the heart.
It shares great wisdom too.
My suggestion in this writing.

Possibly you can divide this into three paragraphs for a better presentation.
leave the poisen out of your space
Please change the word poisen to poison
take god everywhere
Please capitalize the first letter of the word be God
Please take God everywhere
Thank You for sharing.Write on.
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Review of Happy Holidays  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning
Yes.I agree with the last no lines
If you don't know what time it is
then you'll never know.
The poem expresses a jolly season that is full of Celebration and that is worlwide.
The weather is cold but the happenings are warm in a festive way.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
There are.lines that I truly admire.
Love is a song made from three little words.
Caring to forgive not shy about giving.
Actually all lines are nice but these two make a big impact in my reading time.
The first stanza reminds me of a lyrics of a song:
Fly..fly away.. over the mountains..
Over the sea...
Thank You for sharing
The Wings I Understand
Great poet.
Great talent.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A very interesting poetry about Music which is also one of my interests in life.
The poem is well written and it expresses fully your true sentiments.
Very true.I agree with each written line.
Thank You for sharing
Where Did All The Music Go ?
Write On.
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Review of Goodbye Tyler  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
You did follow your intuition to give him a Hug and your intuition never ever guide you wrongly.
The story behind the poetry is sad yet so inspiring.

Yes.. Goodbye Tyler and Tyler was loved, is being loved and always be loved in Heaven .
Thank You for sharing
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry with a very meaningful title.
A Pulse : The Promise
The message is philosophical and with great concern of what is going on with the concerned topic.
Surely a possible solution for this situation.
Thank You for sharing.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A heartfelt written poetry.Inspiring and meaningful all rhe be way.
A Thanksgiving Party of family and friends and the Thanksgiving Prayer.
Nicely written and presented.
" The silence that followed was deafening."
Great conclusion.
Sacred Work of Art.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
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Review of Cowboy Sunset  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A meaningful and a well written poem with an interesting title
Cowboy Sunset
Tired of the busy day and now wishes to be home.
Yes.. I agree.
The very nice picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
The written lines fit for the given title.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
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Review of An Idea Lost  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
The title is intriguing and makes me wonder why it happens
An Idea Lost
Reading between the lines makes me wonder again why it happened.
It is because the day is so busy that you lost it or simply because it is not the priority.
Well.. such things do happen.
Write On
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Review of Home  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
I always love the given title for it is where my heart is.
It is a place where I enter and exit with a joyful heart.
The poem expresses boredom in the city and wishes to be home.
Brilliant decision.
Great poem.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A very interesting as well as a meaningful title of a free verse poetry with a good flow.
It is a poetry of deep faith to The Most High.
It is well written and nicely presented.
The nice lines fit for the given title.
I admire the message that it brings
Write On
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
This is Awesome.
A great colkection from the year1870.
Beautiful one and precious too I am so glad to have seen this.
An art collection from a very famous Museum by a very famous artist.
Thank You for sharing
Your Turn To Dance
Wonderful.

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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A beautiful poem that expresses the true feelings of your heart..
A Love poetry that is well written and nicely presented. This is a very special work of art for a
Pretty Princess
And she lives in your heart and life
Forever.May this BB pretty Princess loves you my more.
Write On.

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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
You bring your readers to a lovely place with a beautiful garden or city landscape that helps in
Water Conservation
The poem has a good flow and is well written.
I believe we all need such great move or action to save planet Earth.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
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Review of Eclipse  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
The poet that you are makes a documentary of the important event of the day through a well written
Haiku poetry with the famous happening
ECLIPSE
Three lines that said it all .
We did not see it in our country, the Philippines.
I have seen it through videoe sent by my friends living in America.
Thank You for the great read.
Write On.
GOD Bless You Always
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
An interesting sports report tbat has something to do with the famous
NFL.
In this writing
Sam Hartman is being featured with his wonderful achievement as one of the players.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Wow..
This can be a wonderful Wedding Vow to each otherin the marriage of two hearts as one.
The poem is adorably adorable in every way.
The lines that completed this work of art are truly fascinating.
The rhythm and rhyme is Great.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
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Review of an acrostic heart  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
I love Acrostic poetry.
The given title expresses wonderful thoughts about love...
HEART
Each line fits for the given title that completed the word Heart
This is inspiring and meaningful.
A joyful message.
Thank You for sharing your talent.
Write On.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A Birthday on Valentine's Day.
If I am the celebrant I love to receive two gifts.
One for my birthday and one for Valentine's Day.
Since you are the giver in this poem I can understand the questioning heart

Hahaha
Yet... I still insist to receive it twice..
I enjoy reading this heartily written work of art.
Happy Valentine's Day.
Write On.
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