Nice name of a pretty young lass
ERIN
The young lass follow her heart and the frustrating family' s disappointed of her decision.
I like the green be colored letters that completed this poem.
It is so full of life.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Morning,
A nicely written free verse poetry with a good flow.
Reading the given title
Month Of No Rain
Is what we are experiencing right now and an extreme heat that makes me perspire continiously.
Each line fits for the given title.
I agree with you.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
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Good Morning,
A nicely written free verse poetry that expresses the meaning of the word courage.
I admire each line that completed this work of art.
Yes..Reading between the lines makes me believe that You possess the courage to choose the direction of your life and I am happy for you.
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Good Evening,
Wow ! As in
Wow!
I love this all the way.
Truly Awesome.
The chosen words..the written lines..the story behind the poetry.
Everything is remarkably done.
Nicely written and nicely presented.. with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
So far yet so near to the heart.
Thank You for sharing
Divided By Miles
Write On..
Good Afternoon,
A Song, And a Beautiful one.
Truly it is as the title is
Beautiful.
I admire the lyrics that completed this song .
You are the composer as well as the performer.
WOW..
You are so blessed with great talents and I am so happy for you.
Thank You for sharing this to all of us in this Awesome Community.
Keep writing and keep singing the songs. of your heart .
God Bless You Always
Good Afternoon,
Hahaha
This is fun to read.
Joyful in every way and it is called
Old January.
I wonder what about a new January.
A poetry with a sense of humor and that what makes this adorably adorable.
I enjoy reading this all the way.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Afternoon,
A very meaningful three line poetry
That looks like a HAIKU to me
Powerful and sacred three lines.
A Small Thing
That means a lot.
I believe in every line that completed this work of art.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Highly admirable and impressive poetry.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Afternoon,
A message.. a poetry..
Addressed to Mr Putin of Russia
Such lines that gives BIG impact as the world knows what Mr . Putin has done that makes a lot of people suffer.
When will the suffering end ?
I pray soonest...Now ..must be the end.
Thank You for sharing.
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Good Aftern
Interesting title of a poem
Words Apart ?
And the questioning heart
The poem has a good flow and is well written.
The last four lines are my favorite lines and they are most meaningful too.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
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Good Afternoon,
A very touching free verse poetry with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.. Of
A poem from the heart and being BB addressed to The Most High who was, is and always there for you as you continue the journey called life and that He is always in your heart and never ever be forgotten.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Afternoon,
A very special thoughts for someone very close to the heart and such special thoughts are being documented through a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
i Thought Of Someone Today
And this someone possesses a courageous heart and spirit to serve the Motherboard.
A blessed mother. A blessed son.
A poem so full of love And care.
Thank You for sharing.
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Good Afternoon
Better late than never.
Hahaha
Late. Yet it is worth it.
I love this poem that speaks the truth.
It is honest and sincere.
The poem has a good flow and it speaks from the heart.
It is well written and nicely presented.
The rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
Thank You for sharing
Late Fate
Write on
Good Morning,
A very pitiful situation when there is a volcanic eruption and you live nearby.
So better evacuate the soonest time possible before it erupts.
The poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
Usually earquake do happens when there is a volcanic eruption nearby and Tsunami is expected.
So run for your lives Now.. not later but now.
Thank You for sharing.
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Good Morning,
A nice message to console a grieving heart.
Yes... A hug means a lot and it offers great comfort.
A hug without any word would be enough to convey a message that you truly care and surely the recepient appreciates it.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very interesting topic that you are sharing to all of us..
Clutter
Is such a word that is not hsrmonious and Declutter is must.
The written lines fit for the given title.
Cleaning and removing those unnecessary items makes the room so pleasant to live in.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A poem with a nice rhythm and rhyme.
It expresses so many situations in life as each one's existence is precious and a blessing.
I love the given title
The Best Friend- New Rhythm
Great talent.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Good Morning,
The stars are so bright
And you feel so alright
Is the great message of this romantic free verse poetry.
I can vividly picture the rooftop with the wide high sky and the stars are twinkling brighyly and you are contemplating on your own personal love story.
Hmmm how nice...
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning,
The given title is captivating as well as intriguing.
I Don't Exist When You Don't See Me
An unusual presence yet you are there.
The poem has a good flow and is well written.
I admire the rhythm and rhyme.
The last part expresses for a big Hope.
A hope for a wonderful tomorrow.
Let it be.
Thank You for sharing your talent and for the nice read.
Write On.
Good Morning,
A beautiful poem thst serves as a tribute to a very special lady with a beautiful name
Caroline....
Each line exoresses a deep admiration and that her presence in your life is such a great importance.
The grateful heart makes a wonderful conclusion.
I wish Caroline can read this nicely written and nicely presented poem about her
Thank you for the read.
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Good Morning,
So cute..
Lovely picture.
A baby that looks a beautiful angel to me.
A year old most probably.
A perfect childhood souvenir that can be shared to the next generation and the next
Thank you for sharing this to all of us.
Beautiful Baby picture.
Good Morning,
Hahaha
Clever turkey.
Vegetarian Lasagna.
Sure.. why not ?
If all Turkeys can talk then Thanksgiving Party will never ever be the same again
Brilliant.
Wit and humor.
A different Thanksgiving Day indeed.
Thank You for sharing.
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Good Morning,
Surely the man has a full stomach now.
I can imagine the bakery that sells delicious snacks.
Honestly, I am not familiar with the title
Boulangerie
Is this a kind of snacks too ?
Left, right, left, right, a hungry march..
My favorite line that expresses how hungry the man really is.
Hahaha
I enjoy reading this.
Thank you for sharing.
Write On.
Góod Evening,
Grieving for a loss of a dearest brother
I am sorry for your loss.
This is a very deeply emotional piece and it gives sadness to the heart.
I can feel the pain as I lost a dearest brother too .
The lines at the last stanza are most
meaningful lines.
Thank You for sharing.
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Good Evening,
The rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
Nice title of a free verse poetry
A Positive Rhythm
It sounds like a happy song to me
Reading between the lines, truly the positive thoughts are the one that needs to lead on this very special and precious poetry.
Thank You for sharing.
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Good Evening,
A setting for three men
The son, the father, the grandfather.
Sitting in this hotel setting
Where the story behind the poetry begins ..
You are blessed to have two ministers in your life and you are greatly blessed as they both trusted your own decision in handling a situation.
Nicely written poetry based on your stay in a
Hotel In Germany.
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
Write On.
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