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Review by daveon0613
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
really child........where u get these ideas from,,,,,,Zack???????????????????????????????
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Review by daveon0613
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I am soooooooo sorry denniston...........why don't you just pray and have a better relationship with God? It would really help
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Review by daveon0613
Rated: E | (5.0)
That is really sad dennistion. I'm sorry that girl did that to you. I hope one day you would find a better girl that suits you
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Review of My life  
Review by daveon0613
Rated: E | (5.0)
denniston............................is this really your life or this is just a story of inspiration? This is really touching and if it is really happening to you don't give up ,keep fighting. At the end of every rainbow is a pot of gold. But if this isn't a true story..........I would like to tell you that this is a very beautiful story and i never knew that you can write so beautiful and you so keep writing and try to do your school work cause you can do so much better. This story is a perfect example. I really hope you strive to do better and as i said before KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review by daveon0613
Rated: E | (4.5)
that is really good.............a very nice poem!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review by daveon0613
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
So amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Review of Who Loved So Much  
Review by daveon0613
Rated: E | (2.5)
VERY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!KEEP IT UP!
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Review by daveon0613
Rated: E | (5.0)
that is so true,,,,,,,,,,,,,good things about love. I especially love the part where it says "We call home"
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Review of My Drummer Boy  
Review by daveon0613
Rated: E | (4.0)
that was very inspiring
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Review of Done With Love  
Review by daveon0613
Rated: E | (4.5)
bae u too sentimental for me,,,,,,,u and ur heart breaks. Poor baby
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Review of Oak Haven  
Review by daveon0613
Rated: E | (3.0)
great story Oak Haven.............amazing job
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Review of Christine  
Review by daveon0613
Rated: E | (3.0)
really great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review by daveon0613
Rated: E | (5.0)
OMG! That's is really funny..............it was amazing to read it. I'm personal not a dog lover but these dog sound amazing. I hope they live on your memories
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Review of Shala's Christmas  
Review by daveon0613
Rated: E | (3.5)
thats really great, i find it really touching and very well written.
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Review of Acid-attack girl.  
Review by daveon0613
Rated: E | (4.5)
that is really sweet and touching, i really enjoyed reading it keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review by daveon0613
Rated: E | (2.5)
wow great story jardane........................i can rally paint a picture in my head!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love ya tho,,,,,,,,,,keep writing but write longer stories hun
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Review by daveon0613
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
wow really touching.........i'm loving this jade character she reminds me of me in many many ways. Keep writing Rarity and i hope you eventually get over "Drake",,,,,,,,love ya boo
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Review of Love  
Review by daveon0613
Rated: E | (4.0)
what you writing bout love girl.......you no got time for that,,,,,,wuv you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Blooming  
Review by daveon0613
Rated: E | (3.0)
very nice chinara,,,,why don't you transmit these ideas to hour essays.......keep writing boo
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Review by daveon0613
Rated: E | (3.0)
hey boo...............nice story, it was very inspiring and great too read. Continuue to write happy stories kay?XOXOXOXOXOXOXOX- your daughter
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