Overall Thoughts: I spy- a crack the quote contest. It's an excellent way to get others thinking on what that quote can be. I enjoy doing similiar to this, so might keep it on my favorites. Anyone interested in detective work would love doing this contest. Keep up the good work~
Overall Thoughts: This is a very well thought of poll on seeing what people thinks for what attracts them to the contest that they read and or even enter. It is simple too. What surprised me was the fact most chose genre over description. Keep up the good work~
~Dragonfish~
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Overall Thoughts: Those words of the song look good. I noticed the last two lines ends with words (in that stanza) that rhymes. "Looking through his suicide eyes You can see how butterflies die..." of the chorus especially caught my attention, as well as the last verse. Great lyrics. Keep up the good work~
~Dragonfish~
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Overall Thoughts: This is a very cute poem of linking salads (which I hate to eat myself) to life. I like how each stanza contains a part of the salad to something that happens in life. Great transitions. No errors found. Keep up the good work~
~Dragonfish~
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Overall Thoughts: Hmmm, interesting this item still exists. Here's a landmark of when SM decided to have an item purely used as a spaceholder. Well done, nothing wrong. It seems so filled with nothing. Keep up the good work SM~
Content: A wolf that is injured, yet the light offers healing and direction for the wolf. No errors. Impressions: I enjoyed this poem. The wolf has the moon on its side for direction and healing. I enjoy how the description creates a vivid picture of the vast scenery of where the wolf is and how the moon wants to wraps itself around the wolf. Keep on writing~
Content: This is a dark poem in the view of the person murdering a person. There is vivid description from the use of words and in the set up of the poem. I don't see anything wrong. Impressions: I like how the poem gives me the shivers down my spin. It creates a vivid picture of what is going on right then and there. Poem is well rounded. Keep up the good work~
This is an extremely helpful site for newbies as well as those who's been around for a while. It displays encouragement and helpful hands. I like how the webpage is set up alone and yeah, it's very large. Keep up the good work~ I'd encourage anyone to come and look at this site for help.
This is a well written poem that describes one moment in time. I like how well the transition from a snarling pack of wolves to a place the girl considered paradise then back to cruelty. "Now, chile, you do this right..." It would look better in this line that instead of chile, you use chill. Good description, it paints a picture. Keep up the good work.
This is a very good poem. I can relate to the feelings myself as an artist of pictures. Sometimes don't have ideas at all and other times is flooded with ideas. The transition from being blank to miracles that comes from life is excellent. Keep up the good work!
This is an excellent poem. I like how the last line is also the first line in the next stanza, but keeping it original all the way through. "shining, moisture, cold" is a really good way to describe pure water and its coolness. You've also made an excellent entrance in emerging the mountain into the poem as well as repeating the water in the end. Keep up the good work.
I enjoy reading this poem. Great description of spring. I like the way the words are used. "blissful greens" sounds like when the green grass when a breeze blows through it and "Leaves to waves" brings to mind of the tree leaves. Keep on writing!
This, in a way, is very similar to that one familiar story in Matthew. I'd say it's a really good poem with simple details and smooth flow. I'm not sure which part I like since I like all of this poem. Keep on writing!
Presentation: The black unicorn is very neat looking in the picture! I like how, in this story, there are quite a few twists and turns that needed to be overcome as well as the unicorn getting away from its prison. Moonlightning is my favorite character. I liked every bit of this story.
Overall Comments:Awsome majestic unicorn story! Keep on writing!
This is a really neat children story! I think the best part about this story is where an animal suddenly appears at the front door. The second ending is super! Keep on writing
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Presentation:This is an awsome, yet realistic, poem about what had happened, with great imagery. You're such a poetic writer with wonderful talent! Keep on writing!
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Presentation: Impression:Jonathan had quite a scar from the chainsaws! It's sad that he considered telling his father to sell the piano. Sequence/Plot:There's some great details and dialogue! Character Development:Jonathan had learned something new, but still seems a bit scared. Suggestions: Reading out loud helps you for polishing the story.
Overall Comments:This is an intersting story. Keep on writing!
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Presentation: Impression:Duke underwent some painful events, but in the end survived it all. Suggestions: Read the poem out loud, I think you'll spot some mistakes by doing that.
Overall Comments:This is creatively neat. There is some areas I can visualize easily, what makes a poem a great poem. Keep up the great work!
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Presentation: Impression: This story is great! The tooth-fairy must have had some bad luck. lol One thing I think is intersting is where the money was placed. Sequence/Plot: Some of the events are funny. It kept to one theme too. ;) Suggestions: None here.
Overall Comments: I wonder where my tooth money will appear next. lol Great story. Keep on writing.
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Presentation: Impression: Yipes! Wanting to see an elephant then having one on your toe is unexpected. Great details there. Rythme: This poem flows smoothly. There's a little rythme added to this poem. Suggestions:None here.
Overall Comments: This is great. Keep on writing.
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Overall Thoughts:
Anyone interested in detective work would love doing this contest. 
Keep up the good work~
Fishy
Here's a landmark of when SM decided to have an item purely used as a spaceholder. Well done, nothing wrong. It seems so filled with nothing. Keep up the good work SM~ 
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Keep up the good work.
