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I look for how well the story or poem flows and if there are things out of place. I also check for grammar and spelling errors.
Favorite Genres
Sci-fi, Fantasy, Speculative Fiction
I will not review...
Anything above GC.
Public Reviews
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoy reading this poem. Great description of spring. I like the way the words are used. "blissful greens" sounds like when the green grass when a breeze blows through it and "Leaves to waves" brings to mind of the tree leaves. Keep on writing!
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Review of Give Me To Drink  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This, in a way, is very similar to that one familiar story in Matthew. I'd say it's a really good poem with simple details and smooth flow. I'm not sure which part I like since I like all of this poem. Keep on writing!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Grammar and Spelling:None here.

Presentation: The black unicorn is very neat looking in the picture! I like how, in this story, there are quite a few twists and turns that needed to be overcome as well as the unicorn getting away from its prison. Moonlightning is my favorite character. I liked every bit of this story.

Overall Comments:Awsome majestic unicorn story! Keep on writing!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A poem about the resurrection! *Delight* Okay, the details causes the poem to be flowingly alive. I also like the analogy you have throughout. Keep on writing!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Grammar and Spelling: None found here.

Presentation: I love the imagery and how the poem reads. (I do agree everybody is everywhere) My favorite line is "To see mankind as brothers,". *Delight*

Overall Comments:Great story there! Keep on writing!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a really neat children story! *Bigsmile* I think the best part about this story is where an animal suddenly appears at the front door. The second ending is super! Keep on writing

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Rated: E | (5.0)
*Bigsmile* That cub looks so cute, and I loved looking through the other cNotes too. You're intro. is very well organized. Keep up the great work!

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Grammar and Spelling: None here.

Presentation:This is an awsome, yet realistic, poem about what had happened, with great imagery. You're such a poetic writer with wonderful talent! Keep on writing!

Overall Comments:

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Review of Bumble Boy  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Grammar and Spelling:Nothing here.

Presentation:
Impression:Jonathan had quite a scar from the chainsaws! It's sad that he considered telling his father to sell the piano.
Sequence/Plot:There's some great details and dialogue!
Character Development:Jonathan had learned something new, but still seems a bit scared.
Suggestions: Reading out loud helps you for polishing the story.

Overall Comments:This is an intersting story. Keep on writing!

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Review of November  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Grammar and Spelling:None here.

Presentation:
Impression:The setup for the poem is sweet! It makes it easy to read and understand for me. I love the vivid details you have there as well.
Suggestions:None here.

Overall Comments:*Cool* Keep on writing!

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Review of The Duke  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Grammar and Spelling: Nothing here.

Presentation:
Impression:Duke underwent some painful events, but in the end survived it all.
Suggestions: Read the poem out loud, I think you'll spot some mistakes by doing that.

Overall Comments:This is creatively neat. There is some areas I can visualize easily, what makes a poem a great poem. Keep up the great work!

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Review of A Simple Desire  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Grammar and Spelling: No spelling or grammar errors here.

Presentation:
Impression:The dialogue forms what's going on. great use of details!
Suggestions:None here.

Overall Comments:The simple desire turned out to be complicated. It's intersting and great. Keep up the great work!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Grammar and Spelling:None here.

Presentation:
Impression: This story is great! The tooth-fairy must have had some bad luck. lol One thing I think is intersting is where the money was placed.
Sequence/Plot: Some of the events are funny. It kept to one theme too. ;)
Suggestions: None here.

Overall Comments: I wonder where my tooth money will appear next. lol Great story. Keep on writing.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Grammar and Spelling: None here.

Presentation:
Impression: Yipes! Wanting to see an elephant then having one on your toe is unexpected. Great details there.
Rythme: This poem flows smoothly. There's a little rythme added to this poem.
Suggestions:None here.

Overall Comments: This is great. Keep on writing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Grammar and Spelling:Nothing here.

Presentation:
Impression: This is a good advise to keep in mind. It's very detailed in how fragments can be recognized.

Overall Comments:Great item. Keep up the great work.

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Review of Jonah  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Grammar and Spelling:Nothing here.

Presentation:
Impression:A little boy special to you. That must mean a lot.
Suggestions: The poem tells instead of show... You can use more details for the eyes and lashes. Also you can mention one place you've gone together. Otherwise good.

Overall Comments: The poem is intersting, like a mix of a Happy B-Day letter and something conversational. Keep up the great work.*Smile*

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Review of Big Brother  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Grammar and Spelling:Er, nothing here, no mistakes.

Presentation:
Impression:A party so long ago. Wow.
Sequence/Plot:Great plot.

Overall Comments:Great poem. Keep on writing.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Grammar and Spelling:Nothing here that I can find.

Presentation:
Impression: Emily's mom came to Emily...then it went led to some other events.
Sequence/Plot:Great job here.
Character Development:Great way to show the characters' emotions here.

Overall Comments: Great story. I believe this is good as it is, but then you say progress...lol Keep up the excellent work.

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Review of What is Poetry?  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Grammar and Spelling:Nothing here.

Presentation: Great article upon that question. There's a lot about poetry, and this one covers the basics great.

Overall Comments:Very descriptive about what poetry is. Great article. Keep up the great work.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Grammar and Spelling:Nothing here.

Presentation: I like how you link your sections in here. Looks like something that'll help me with understanding poems more.

Overall Comments:Great folder. I'm thinking of looking at a couple of things in here. Keep up the great work.

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Review of I Don't Know  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Grammar and Spelling:Nothing here.

Presentation:Mystery is well in this poem, in an excellent way to catch everyone's eyes. I love your few details also.

Overall Comments:Great job. I *Heart* it. Keep up the excellent work.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Grammar and Spelling: Nothing here.

Presentation:
> Impression:A real life experience in Africa. Very much takes you to the place.
> Sequence/Plot: Great events, and which order they're in. I like the plot too.
> Character Development: The narrator develops as it goes along. I love the details you have for them, and the dialogue too.

Overall Comments:Neat book. I enjoy reading most of what I've read. Keep on writing.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Grammar and Spelling: Nothing found here.

Presentation:
Impression: One year has gone by and many things happened. I'd say so.
Sequence/Plot:Everythings wonderful in this section.

Overall Comments:Great poem! I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the excellent work.

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Review of I'm Okay  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Grammar and Spelling:Nothing here.

Presentation:
Impression: There is a lot that describes your condition.
Sequence/Plot: This is real life experience, which makes the plot unique.
Character Development:You are strong for your conditions!!

Overall Comments:Great letter! I enjoyed reading this.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Grammar and Spelling: No spelling or grammar errors found.

Presentation:I love the flow your poem has. It also has great rythem to it, as well as some rhyming words. The poem expresses something out there that answers the question, in my opinion.

Overall Comments:Great job with this poem. I enjoyed reading it.
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