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402 Public Reviews Given
Review Style
I look for how well the story or poem flows and if there are things out of place. I also check for grammar and spelling errors.
Favorite Genres
Sci-fi, Fantasy, Speculative Fiction
I will not review...
Anything above GC.
Public Reviews
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Review of Christ  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Grammar and Spelling: No spelling or grammar errors found.

Presentation: The flow, rythme, and everything else is perfect. Nothing much else to say now.

Overall Comments: Great job with this poem, keep it up.
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Review of Soul Searching  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Grammar and Spelling:No grammar/spelling errors that I could find.

Presentation:This poem is very smooth and has great details. I like how you used the setting for the soul, and how you make the distance long.

Overall Comments:Another poem that has some great imagery in it. Keep up the great work.
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Review of In God's Hands  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Grammar and Spelling:No spelling or grammar errors that I could find.

Presentation:You used great detail words for the situation the poem takes place in. The flow is very smooth.

Overall Comments:Great work on the poem. Keep it up.
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Review of Threshold of Life  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Grammar and Spelling:No spelling or grammar errors found.

Presentation: This poem's style is really neat. I also like how you italized a couple words in different lines. Very smooth and great details and sequences.

Overall Comments: Great poem, it's really intersting. Keep up the great work.
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Review of Aggression  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Grammar and Spelling:No spelling or grammars errors here.

Presentation: Great rythme and details that describes what aggression is. I also like your ideas for what to compare to that word, like gorillas.

Overall Ccomments:Great poem. Keep up the great work.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Grammar and Spelling:No spelling/grammar errors here. lol

Presentation:Great job with the details and how well you convey emotions on being warm even though the weather could be cold.

Overall Comments: Great job with the poetry! I really enjoyed reading it.
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Review of Risky Business  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Grammar and Spelling:Nothing here that I can find.

Presentation:Great way to introduce your sci-fi fantasy story! lol Too bad I don't have anything to buy it with.

Overall Comments: Great section from story to chose! Keep on publishing your books.*Wink*
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Grammar and Spelling: No spelling or grammar errors found.

Presentation: The idea for the poem is very good. It might have just a little too much boldness for me. The structure is really neat otherwise. Great rhyming and being fluent.

Overall Comments: This is a very neat poem. Keep up the great work.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Grammar and Spelling:No spelling errors or grammar errors found in this area. This section is perfect.

Presentation:This is very persuasive, or, is it informational. Which ever I mentioned fits the article greatly. The details is so neat. There is a lot to know besides just searching!

Overall Comments:Great job writing this article. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the great work.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Comments:This is a neat short story. lol I can tell that the short story describes the family and how they chose a pool, which Nathan thought was prettier. lol

Grammar and Spelling:No spelling or grammar errors found.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What's all the secrets? I wonder about that...lol It would also help me out I believe. I do prefer writing mysteries, only it gets abandoned, I daresay. This looks like something that would take some time working on, so I'll be patience with reading your things. lol Keep on writing please.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
*Smile*Great prelogue. lol I'd say that dialogues can stand alone as a paragraph, which could be separated.*Balloon2* I don't see any grammar or spelling errors, a great sign of a good story. Keep up the great work, and continue writing.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
*Balloon4**Flower4*This looks like there's some intersting things in it, even though I haven't looked at them yet. I love that sig/picture you choose for your collection, it is very unique. *Wink* Good luck on your contest, and keep up the great work.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Comments:This poem is neat. There is some feelings in the descriptive words as well as a picture.

Grammer and Spelling:In where you put "Now no longer sre we man but...." There you put an s instead of an a.
         The second to last word should be gained.

Overall Comments: I do believe this is a neat poem. It just needs that much fixing up and then I'll change my rating to a 5. Keep up the excellent work.
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Review of Upon the People  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This looks like an intersting story to read. For it being your first one I'd say your off to a great start. It's your birthday now *singing* so you don't have to get it done today...lol. There are some puncuation errors and no spelling errors so far. Keep up the great work.
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Review of Season of Sorrow  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Comments:This is an excellent story.

Grammar and Spellings:None that I can find.

Presentation:The story is very smooth and flowing. Everything is in sequencing order that causes the story to have an excellent picture.

Overall Comments:Great job. Keep up the excellent work. *Wink*
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Fun, intersting, and a few other words which I haven't listed. Great polls, if I have reviewed the other poll you made than I don't remember. Although limited-great choices on what is more generally feared. I enjoyed this poll, and keep up the great ideas.
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Review of The Bird  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this poem.*Smile* It doesn't give too many details, but it does give a repetition and a visual picture of what the bird did. *Wink* The first three lines, where it started aboutThere WAS a bird... which gave some forshadowing on what would happen to it. Keep it up.
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Review of Heart to Heart  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
*Smile*I enjoyed reading this short story. It was very intersting, with the different creatures in it. One of the best things about it is the intent fighting that the king and Sage fought, and the rescue was afterwards. Make some more stories that I can read.
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Review of The Dragon Rises  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
*Star**Star*This is so much similar to my favorite book genre - mystery and action.*Smile* I really enjoyed reading this. I was able to picture the characters talking to each other, kind of movie like to be more precise. *Wink*
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Review of Thanks Dad  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Smile* This has a smoothe flow, and is accurate in what happened in sequental order. *Wink* Some things I really enjoyed: The story was mainly a flashback to what had happened, and why he is thankful to his dad. I really enjoyed reading this.
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Review of Grandad's Toolbox  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
*Smile* This story is really neat. It holds a lot of information about Brian's grandfather. It also has some suspense about what could happen next. I wonder if there's going to be more added to it, or another short story connecting to this. I would enjoy to read some more of your writings. Keep it up.
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Review of Yesterday's Angel  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
          This is another really neat poem.*Smile* It gives a lot about what yesterday angel does. I'd say the angel would be called your guardian angel. I would love to know that I'm not alone and unprotected. *Wink* The great thing is that there is angels on earth doing these things. Keep it up.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
*Smile* This is intersting and neat. It gives some form of description that expresses emotion and forming a 'movie', even though it isn't. There are a few spelling errors, and maybe every other I could be capitalized, unless you planned it to be that way. Great freewritten poem anyways. Keep it up.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
*Smile* This is a really neat. I wonder what happens in the second chapter, what had happened to Emirepir that night she disappeared? Or if the narrator left in search of her? That's the foreshadowing of throughout the chapter, I believe. It's a great thing to keep the reader's attention. The beginning might not have such as strong an effect on the readers as when they get into the middle part. I'm intersted in reading the second chapter.
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