Great story which introduces a man whose interest is in eating vegan food. To celebrate his birthday, vegan cake is a must. So came the recipe for vegan birthday chocolate cake. It looks pretty yummy. This grandson must be proud to be a vegan. It would be hard to feed a vegan. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
This is a beautiful poem about a horse who is steadfast and loyal. Blanko must have been one happy horse looking forward to those walks along the forest road. I can imagine he'd be fast enough for a Derby too. Nicely written. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
The demon cat sounds very mean. Then again the daughter doesn't seem to have much luck either. The narration is very simple and to the point. The demon cat won the house for as long as it remained alive. Breaking the family up. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
This is a realistic war scene about Oleksander and the Russian. Oleksander struggles to survive as the Russian attacks. Until finally his comrade comes to the rescue. A photo of a little girl with a teddy bear was the only Intel. Great details involving the main character action and reaction to the Russian. The language fits right in. The place and scene fits well too. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
Thank you for entering! I'm reviewing for I Write. It's all about the wonderful sounds of Spring and the joy that it shares. I love every line of it- it is well balanced. Spring is a time of celebration as well as time for new life in nature. I see the rhythm flow smoothly. The details are carefully laid. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
Tense moment going on here. Noth and his guards are capturing intruders and the intruders keep calling themselves Jesse Forster. Until the big one captures Noth and frees the others. I wonder what will happen next and if Noth will ever get free. No spelling or grammar errors found. Great details. Good job and keep up the good work!
Marge seems to be having memory problems here. The day starts out her expecting somebody. Only cars were banned five years ago. Then breakfast came and they didn't have bacon. While coffee brewed she wanted to go to the beach and it was too dangerous. So nothing went her way that Tuesday. Great twists. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
What starts out as an insight to Cupid's minions working for Cupid to Paul and Julie working in the same environment. Rekker and Berg are the two minions who take up the case.
Things aren't going so well so they try the elevator trick. It turns out Julie is claustrophobic. They meet again later on and did a handshake. It ends with Rekker and Berg talking about the handshake. Will they succeed?
You have me hooked and left wondering what will happen next. No spelling or grammar errors found. Keep on writing! Maybe inspiration will hit some day.
First impression is the feeling of being sick. And it gets worse than that. Great use of the made up words. It fits the poem line quite well. Pretty much hanging around those leprechauns had terrible consequences. The drinking must have been out of control. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
Polly the pretty pink pony and Lucas the handsome white unicorn both live in one herd. Polly has a crush but knows a secret.
The mares plot to get rid of Lucas but his interest in the pink pony catches on. Soon she disappeared so he ended up separated from the herd in search of her. They meet in a cave where they transform back to their true selves and rejoin the herd telling the truth eventually.
Great imagery and details. Fits the prompt nicely. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
First impression: An emergency is happening and the baby dragon is in trouble!
Suggestions: None.
No spelling or grammar errors found.
Opinions: This baby dragon had a rough time growing up to fly and breath fire. Wonderful friends made a long the way. I'm glad the baby dragon got reunited with his mother. Kept me on edge. Good job and keep up the great work!
This is a holiday I haven't heard of yet. Four days of activity and then nineteenth day of fasting sounds intriguing. There are gifts that goes along with this holiday. I might try it one year but do have meds that require eating a meal. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
So Cupid drinks and has a trunk for his arrows? That is new and it goes on to a magical dart for his beloved. The humor is great and is consistent throughout the poem. Ending with sending Cupid to space where his arrows can be unguided is a brilliant plan. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work! Rating is per Bard's Hall guideline of a one star.
Oranges can be different things for us. But the one thing I enjoy is eating them. They are perfectly well shaped. This poem nails what exactly oranges could be. I love how well the seasons fit in with the differences of serving the oranges. I would go with summer. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
This fits the view of the wise men as they journey with their guidance being guided by the star of Bethlehem and what they find as a result of that star. Nicely captured in just a few words. I can imagine how patient they must have been in order to face the king. Walking blindly only by a star yet finding the right baby to bear gifts. Amazing! No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
Interesting insight on the process of the self cleaning toilet and what it takes to have one. I think it's for the richer people as well. It could be a disaster waiting to happen one day. Installing it would be a pain to do by yourself. The special cleaning pac would be a con price wise as well. Would it be worth it? Who knows. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work.
This poem explores a familiar plot found in Fantasy of the hero doing good deeds. I love how the "damsels in distress" is "understandably grateful" to their hero. Nicely worded. Tonto is sweet and awesome. Every hero deserves a horse like Tonto. Villains of course don't get what they want. I agree. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
This is a powerful subject. Diving down into a crisis isn't an easy thing to remember, but the path to coming out of it is a joy to experience. It's a scary thing to feel like God doesn't care about us anymore, that's not true but that could be what it seems like in a depression or something. Everything matters to Him. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
There is a lot of fanfiction I don't read. It could be one one of those reasons you listed as well. However, it is a whole new world from a familiar source. I agree that rules matter. Matching the spelling and grammar makes sense. Quality is out there. It ranges based on your taste. Those are valid reasons for reading or not reading fanfiction. Good job and keep up the good work!
The decision of writing something is difficult to grasp in this poem. There are a few things that come into mind. The poem fits the prompt nicely. I would say be careful with the syllables. I sometimes count 7 where it suggests 8 for example. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
And here comes a dragon. Bring it on! I love the attitude in this poem. No matter what is being thrown at you, you are a firm believer in Christ. Despite all the scary things out there you won't give in. In some ways you are braver than me even. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
The poem is inspiring and motivational. Someone who would believe in God could use it on their wall for a keepsake and look upon it whenever they are feeling down. What a great message! No spelling or grammar errors found. Even in the midst of all your troubles and sorrows God is there for you. Good job and keep up with the good work!
This poem is making me think. Fear acts on impulse without thinking. It doesn't have any time to react because of what's happening. There are consequences and costs but it doesn't care what that will be. Well said. No spelling or grammar errors found. Free verse works great with this poem. Good job and keep up the good work!
Pain and frustration are the major feelings I felt as I read this poem. I love the vivid imagery used. There is just an empty hole that could only be filled by a child if that child were still alive. It is a sad and depressing poem, but there is always hope on the other side. Just let out these emotions. Good job and keep up the good work!
Linkin Park is a band on haitus but the first pick for Resurrection Jukebox. The history of Linkin Park is interesting and I hope they find another lead singer soon. Chances are I may have heard about their hit album or a song or two from them. Their song, Shadow of the Day, is highlighted and well covered. It is simple yet uses advanced technology. The description of it covers it well. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
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