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I look for how well the story or poem flows and if there are things out of place. I also check for grammar and spelling errors.
Favorite Genres
Sci-fi, Fantasy, Speculative Fiction
I will not review...
Anything above GC.
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Review of Humbly  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Overall Opinions: This poem gives a different perspective from others. In third person it shows how the toddler feels whenever the word humbly is said. It's always hilirous to see a toddler entertained. *Laugh* Great poem and keep up the good work!

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Review of Christening  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Overall Comments: A good connection for what to name your children. Uriah and Shiloh are interesting names to pick yet the meaning of it makes complete sense. Maybe oh, more children should be named based on these things. :-d I think this is a lovely poem. Have fun with children and keep up the good work!

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Review of First Winter  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Overall Opinions: From the description I can imagine it being a very good day to sit around the fire and relax. *Cool* I wouldn't want to go outside on that night anyway, unless it's to chase wood around. :-d I enjoyed reading this poem! Don't see anything wrong with it. I especially love the warm scenery part of this poem. Keep up the good work!

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Review of We, You  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Overall Comments: This is a different read. I would say my favorite part would be "...we too may clearly hear, deep in the potent night, blue wind across blue water..." since it gives a clear sense of action as well as scenery. This is a nice memorial poem. I have nothing to suggest to you. Keep on writing!

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Review of Happiness  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Overall Opinions: This is a list of things that creates happiness. I don't have any suggestions for you. I enjoyed 4, 5, and 10 the best. Some of the numbers would be great advice for someone who has been having a bad day. Keep up the good work!

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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Plot:Colt did a dramatic proposal to Chelsea, which the rest of the team knew except her.
Content:A police officer wanted to have Chelsea for a wife, but Chelsea was concerned about the safety of Colt in case he became in trouble.
Suggestions: None.
Overall Opinions: Add a fantasy creature to the cuffs and it'd be even more interesting. :-d I enjoyed reading the story. Keep up the good work!

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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Plot:Darla found what she wanted for Christmas in a shop she's never seen, then puts it on the mantle. After that, when Darla realized what was happening, she bought the necklace and found someone at the party.
Content:What Darla wanted wasn't the item that wanted her. In the end however Darla decided to buy the necklace, the item that wanted her and felt a happier life.
Suggestions:None.
Overall Opinions: I think this story was interesting. The prompt would be hard to work from and you did a great job for using the prompt. It's too bad the pony didn't want Darla. Keep up the good work!

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Review of Winter's Touch  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Overall Opinions: I like this poem. The snow represents the softness and beauty of winter and the season's weather creates lasting memories. There's a happy moment going on for the winter, that is its snow. Keep up the good work!

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Review of Summer's Ire  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Overall Opinions: This is a fun poem to read. "Fire ants, cottonwood... Tall grass, hot tar roads mosquitoes are a' teeming" is all things that make summer enjoyable in my opinion. Great descriptions of summer as well as adding your feelings about it too. No suggestions for you. Keep up the good work!

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Review of Mountain Morning  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Overall Opinions: Great mountain scenery created. I can imagine just standing on a mountain seeing all these things with the first sunrays after a snow storm. I enjoyed reading this poem. Keep up the good work!

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Review of Prophecy  
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Overall Opinions: The foretelling of evil and omnimous weather sets up a mystery in this poem. I wonder what kind of evil is it- it leaves the imagination to take over and I imagine some pretty cool things, especially with the confirmation of the wind. I enjoyed the poem. Keep up the good work!

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Review of Take Me  
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Overall Opinions: I can relate this poem as to how a vampire attacks his/her victims- though not all the time. I enjoyed the darkness quality it contains. The descriptions and use of words show emotions of how the vampire felt. It flowed with consistancy and I do not see any mistakes. Keep up the good work!

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Rated: E | (4.0)
*Note2*Content: Digging out the car which is buried underneath the snow. The main character was angry with the weatherman being wrong.
*Exclaim*Technical Errors: Some of the sentences seem a little of run on sentences.
*Star*Impressions:The description though is very well written. I can understand what was going on in the persons mind. Some spots seemed confusing to me- like where you typed "finger sleeved and flapping..." just because it seemed a lot- different from what I'm used to.
*Idea*Overall Thoughts: This story looks like once you've edited it will be a great story. Some parts seemed confusing, but other areas I understand. Keep up the good work~

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Rated: E | (5.0)
*Bigsmile* 50 *Star*s is actually what this forum deserves. I love it when people are honest and positive about their work. *Delight* I think this is the best way for an author to improve themselves. I especially like your introduction picture- it is very colorful and inspiring. I'd encourage anyone to join in. Keep up the good work~ *Thumbsup*
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Idea*Overall Thoughts: I spy- a crack the quote contest. It's an excellent way to get others thinking on what that quote can be. I enjoy doing similiar to this, so might keep it on my favorites. *Wink* Anyone interested in detective work would love doing this contest. *Delight* Keep up the good work~

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Review of Butterflies Die  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
*Idea*Overall Thoughts: Those words of the song look good. I noticed the last two lines ends with words (in that stanza) that rhymes. "Looking through his suicide eyes You can see how butterflies die..." of the chorus especially caught my attention, as well as the last verse. Great lyrics. Keep up the good work~

~Dragonfish~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*Idea*Overall Thoughts: This is a very cute poem of linking salads (which I hate to eat myself) to life. I like how each stanza contains a part of the salad to something that happens in life. Great transitions. No errors found. Keep up the good work~

~Dragonfish~
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Review of Space Holder  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
*Idea*Overall Thoughts: Hmmm, interesting this item still exists. *Bigsmile* Here's a landmark of when SM decided to have an item purely used as a spaceholder. Well done, nothing wrong. It seems so filled with nothing. Keep up the good work SM~ *Smirk**Thumbsup*

~Dragonfish~
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Review of The Wolf  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note2*Content: A wolf that is injured, yet the light offers healing and direction for the wolf. No errors.
*Star*Impressions: I enjoyed this poem. The wolf has the moon on its side for direction and healing. I enjoy how the description creates a vivid picture of the vast scenery of where the wolf is and how the moon wants to wraps itself around the wolf. Keep on writing~

~Dragonfish~
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Review of Insanely Happy  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Note2*Content: This is a dark poem in the view of the person murdering a person. There is vivid description from the use of words and in the set up of the poem. I don't see anything wrong.
*Star*Impressions: I like how the poem gives me the shivers down my spin. It creates a vivid picture of what is going on right then and there. Poem is well rounded. Keep up the good work~ *Thumbsup*

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Review of The Angel Army  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is an extremely helpful site for newbies as well as those who's been around for a while. It displays encouragement and helpful hands. I like how the webpage is set up alone and yeah, it's very large. Keep up the good work~ I'd encourage anyone to come and look at this site for help.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very beautiful song. I love how it mimics the feeling of going to the beach (I haven't gone there myself). I also like how you described the weather as you were walking by the beach. I would recommend anyone to listen to the audio. Keep up the good work!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a well written poem that describes one moment in time. I like how well the transition from a snarling pack of wolves to a place the girl considered paradise then back to cruelty. "Now, chile, you do this right..." It would look better in this line that instead of chile, you use chill. Good description, it paints a picture. *Smile* Keep up the good work.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very good poem. I can relate to the feelings myself as an artist of pictures. Sometimes don't have ideas at all and other times is flooded with ideas. The transition from being blank to miracles that comes from life is excellent. Keep up the good work! *Thumbsup*
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Review of PURE  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an excellent poem. I like how the last line is also the first line in the next stanza, but keeping it original all the way through. "shining, moisture, cold" is a really good way to describe pure water and its coolness. You've also made an excellent entrance in emerging the mountain into the poem as well as repeating the water in the end. Keep up the good work. *Smile*
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